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Lenaleia

Author again! We have entered season 3 of TIMU! That means the end of the frustration arc between Lucas and Ava (woo!) as she begins to come into her own and recognizes what's right in front of her... Along with a heavy dose of the plot we've been slowly coursing toward. Keep in mind that the themes are DARK, emotional, triggering, even gratuitous at times. While I will label specific chapters with sensitivity warnings, I caution you to read responsibly. Trauma is real, and comes with long term effects that I attempt to display with realism, despite the darkness of it. For those of us who have been there, this is my e-hug for you. Thank you everyone who reads and gives my story and characters a chance. I appreciate all of you!!

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Victoria_Collins_6412

have fallen head over heels [img=Loving it]

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Vivien_L

Currently my favorite book. šŸ˜ I love the story.

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Anuska_Vandenburg

love this book ā¤ļø its a must to read ..keep you at your edge

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Vivien_L

Love this book an cannot get enough from the story [img=recommend]

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Roshwita_Johnson_1604

great read cant stop very nice book to read

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Ekeh_Prisca_444

the writer has given a very nice story keep it up

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aiza_marie

love this story[img=update][img=Loving it]

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DaoistU0bZpk

Hooked! Canā€™t wait to see how it plays out!

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Keira_McMillen

So far, this storyline is great. I find the story to be very unique and original. I like how the author engages with their reading audience on the comments as well. keep up the great work. thank you

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DaoistOFCFPK

Reading just the story line gives you a simple understanding but the content itā€™s self should be reviewed

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Tracy_Shelton_4789

the writer is milking this story losing interest fast. paid too much already for an unfinished story

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kitty_29102

Great store line. gets going faster than most stories

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sibbestian

aweeeeeeeeesome best story line go for it

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Pookie_poo

It really seems like the author has done everything in their power to make the fl live the most pitiable lifeā€” I donā€™t get the point of this type of story and find it tends to give me a negative, victim-based outlook of my own life. The characters are blindly and stupidly cruel which kind of takes away from the plots grounding.

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Zara_Kcr

One of my favourites.. great read and cannot wait to read more.

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must_stop_reading

great so far, just hope we get the rest of the book. I'm hooked!

1mth
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Tracy_Shelton

too many words, dragging story out, lose interest. TOO EXPENSIVE

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Jessica_Fraga

Characters and plot are well developed. Sucks you in and you want to read it all in one sitting.

1mth
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WickedNoni

Well written, live the in's & outs of the wolf/magical world

2mth
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Margaret_Hayes_4444

Amazingly beautiful and describes how the characters are feeling

2mth
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Deanna_0237

Highly enjoying this book. On the edge of my seat waiting for the daily updates.

2mth
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Tina_Moo_McNulty

Gute Geschichte, leider an manchen Stellen schlecht Ć¼bersetzt.

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Pyumpkin

Being honest here. I don't really read werewolf stories. This is my 2nd werewolf-themed story. Some mistap opened the chapter and I said, "Welp, let's give it a try." I only read the free chapters and it indeed is heavy. Some aspects of Ava's experience were very relatable. Honestly, I'm struggling to express myself well in this review not because the story scared me away, it's bad or it evoked old traumatic memories. No, no. I am just at a loss for proper words.

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Sarah_Bell_1156

love love love love love love love love!!!!!!!

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Megan_Forty

I love this book and I can wait to see what happens next. I hope Lucas and Ava are able to be together and that Ava has peace so that that she can have a happy life away from her family forever.

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Camille_Lenyk

Great book. Kept wanting more. Bummer canā€™t just read it all.

2mth
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Shiquita_Arthur_8093

great book so far. Ava is something special

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Samantha_Jones_6273

the character development is good. I enjoy the unique wolf/ human relationship ava and Selene have. I also enjoy Ava is looking to find herself more than follow her mate bond

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Anita_Etheridge

This books keeps you coming back for more ā¤ļø

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Sabrina_White_5797

well written nicely developed story line. would recommend

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Lenaleia

Author again! We have entered season 3 of TIMU! That means the end of the frustration arc between Lucas and Ava (woo!) as she begins to come into her own and recognizes what's right in front of her... Along with a heavy dose of the plot we've been slowly coursing toward. Keep in mind that the themes are DARK, emotional, triggering, even gratuitous at times. While I will label specific chapters with sensitivity warnings, I caution you to read responsibly. Trauma is real, and comes with long term effects that I attempt to display with realism, despite the darkness of it. For those of us who have been there, this is my e-hug for you. Thank you everyone who reads and gives my story and characters a chance. I appreciate all of you!!

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4mth
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Victoria_Collins_6412

have fallen head over heels [img=Loving it]

4d
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Vivien_L

Currently my favorite book. šŸ˜ I love the story.

5d
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Anuska_Vandenburg

love this book ā¤ļø its a must to read ..keep you at your edge

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6d
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Vivien_L

Love this book an cannot get enough from the story [img=recommend]

16d
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Roshwita_Johnson_1604

great read cant stop very nice book to read

17d
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Ekeh_Prisca_444

the writer has given a very nice story keep it up

19d
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aiza_marie

love this story[img=update][img=Loving it]

25d
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DaoistU0bZpk

Hooked! Canā€™t wait to see how it plays out!

29d
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Keira_McMillen

So far, this storyline is great. I find the story to be very unique and original. I like how the author engages with their reading audience on the comments as well. keep up the great work. thank you

1mth
View 0 Replies
DaoistOFCFPK

Reading just the story line gives you a simple understanding but the content itā€™s self should be reviewed

1mth
View 0 Replies
Tracy_Shelton_4789

the writer is milking this story losing interest fast. paid too much already for an unfinished story

1mth
View 0 Replies
kitty_29102

Great store line. gets going faster than most stories

1mth
View 0 Replies
sibbestian

aweeeeeeeeesome best story line go for it

1mth
View 0 Replies
Pookie_poo

It really seems like the author has done everything in their power to make the fl live the most pitiable lifeā€” I donā€™t get the point of this type of story and find it tends to give me a negative, victim-based outlook of my own life. The characters are blindly and stupidly cruel which kind of takes away from the plots grounding.

1mth
View 0 Replies
Zara_Kcr

One of my favourites.. great read and cannot wait to read more.

1mth
View 0 Replies
must_stop_reading

great so far, just hope we get the rest of the book. I'm hooked!

1mth
View 0 Replies
Tracy_Shelton

too many words, dragging story out, lose interest. TOO EXPENSIVE

1mth
View 0 Replies
Jessica_Fraga

Characters and plot are well developed. Sucks you in and you want to read it all in one sitting.

1mth
View 0 Replies
WickedNoni

Well written, live the in's & outs of the wolf/magical world

2mth
View 0 Replies
Margaret_Hayes_4444

Amazingly beautiful and describes how the characters are feeling

2mth
View 0 Replies
Deanna_0237

Highly enjoying this book. On the edge of my seat waiting for the daily updates.

2mth
View 0 Replies
Tina_Moo_McNulty

Gute Geschichte, leider an manchen Stellen schlecht Ć¼bersetzt.

2mth
View 0 Replies
Pyumpkin

Being honest here. I don't really read werewolf stories. This is my 2nd werewolf-themed story. Some mistap opened the chapter and I said, "Welp, let's give it a try." I only read the free chapters and it indeed is heavy. Some aspects of Ava's experience were very relatable. Honestly, I'm struggling to express myself well in this review not because the story scared me away, it's bad or it evoked old traumatic memories. No, no. I am just at a loss for proper words.

2mth
View 0 Replies
Sarah_Bell_1156

love love love love love love love love!!!!!!!

2mth
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Megan_Forty

I love this book and I can wait to see what happens next. I hope Lucas and Ava are able to be together and that Ava has peace so that that she can have a happy life away from her family forever.

2mth
View 0 Replies
Camille_Lenyk

Great book. Kept wanting more. Bummer canā€™t just read it all.

2mth
View 0 Replies
Shiquita_Arthur_8093

great book so far. Ava is something special

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2mth
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Samantha_Jones_6273

the character development is good. I enjoy the unique wolf/ human relationship ava and Selene have. I also enjoy Ava is looking to find herself more than follow her mate bond

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2mth
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Anita_Etheridge

This books keeps you coming back for more ā¤ļø

2mth
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Sabrina_White_5797

well written nicely developed story line. would recommend

2mth
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