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WQ 3/5 : Nice translation , minimal errors but The way of writing seems generic (like a translation iykyk) Updates 5 SD 3/5 : Not bad but nothing exceptional. It doesn't have any special flair. I like the concept but the way of execution is generic CD 2/5 : He has no unique traits I can think of.. he seems like a guy wanting to do system tasks and wait for the rewards that's all.. Nothing noteworthy. World Background 4/5 : I read 100+ and I haven't found any major inconsistensies, -------------------------FOR THE AUTHOR---------------------------- You said your are doing cause you're jobless right? I have some suggestions then : 1.Try to make the translation bit more english, more non chinese.. It makes the story more engaging. 2. Maybe use AI on this chapters and then rewrite them so as to make the writing style look professional. 3.Make the presentation unique , you need to have some quality that makes readers visit you again apart from a neccessary good story. 4. If you have many regular readers then stockpile chapters and open a patreon to earn money. Don't mind me if you feel this is annoying..
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Alright I'lI drop the first review This book is promising and I will be releasing the chapters regularly with at least 15 chapters every week. if you the readers participate more and make your presence felt I will definitely upload more diligently. well that's all from me
If you could hold this story in your hands as a comic, what scene would you open with? I ask because one part stayed with me , not loud, not flashy, just deeply felt. I can see the expressions, the unspoken tension. It’s the kind of scene that lives quietly in the heart long after the story ends.
WQ 3/5 : Nice translation , minimal errors but The way of writing seems generic (like a translation iykyk) Updates 5 SD 3/5 : Not bad but nothing exceptional. It doesn't have any special flair. I like the concept but the way of execution is generic CD 2/5 : He has no unique traits I can think of.. he seems like a guy wanting to do system tasks and wait for the rewards that's all.. Nothing noteworthy. World Background 4/5 : I read 100+ and I haven't found any major inconsistensies, -------------------------FOR THE AUTHOR---------------------------- You said your are doing cause you're jobless right? I have some suggestions then : 1.Try to make the translation bit more english, more non chinese.. It makes the story more engaging. 2. Maybe use AI on this chapters and then rewrite them so as to make the writing style look professional. 3.Make the presentation unique , you need to have some quality that makes readers visit you again apart from a neccessary good story. 4. If you have many regular readers then stockpile chapters and open a patreon to earn money. Don't mind me if you feel this is annoying..
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Alright I'lI drop the first review This book is promising and I will be releasing the chapters regularly with at least 15 chapters every week. if you the readers participate more and make your presence felt I will definitely upload more diligently. well that's all from me
If you could hold this story in your hands as a comic, what scene would you open with? I ask because one part stayed with me , not loud, not flashy, just deeply felt. I can see the expressions, the unspoken tension. It’s the kind of scene that lives quietly in the heart long after the story ends.