Reviews of Game Creator in a New World by AncestorX - Webnovel

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AncestorX

Hi everyone, I'm excited to share this fanfic with you! This is a translation of a Chinese fanfic, and it's my first time translating, so there might be some mistakes. I appreciate your patience and feedback as I work to improve. If you enjoy the story, I might make some changes to add more depth and reduce the face-slapping style. I'm not sure exactly where this will take the story, but I'll do my best to make it enjoyable for all of you. Thanks for your support!

9mth
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Dude_3192

Hey, is it like a ready player one type of world

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Dragonknight117

So far out of all the stories that have a game making system, yours are in the top three of my list

1mth
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PedagangSiput

Unfortunately I only got to CH 17. At first I enjoyed it a bit because I'm a fan of stories like this. But it's really a shame that this is a translation, there are words that are difficult to understand and names that change in the middle of the story. That makes it difficult for me to read.

3mth
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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a good Game Maker fanfiction!! πŸ‘ It have a good plot/storyline and good english/translation.. I like this kind of story.. To see what kind of game MC/John will make.. How he make it.. What reaction of the players, etc... Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜

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KingRealm

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Elemise

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Bottom_Climber

what I'm looking for from a game making story is the reaction of the players and how the players play it, like the novel "black tech internet cafe system", here the plot is too fast and the lack of player reactions, well... there are player reactions but it's just like "Woah that's great" and a series of other compliments, without discussing how the players play it, most fanfics like this usually include several povs not only from mc but other characters, especially the players, but not here. I've only read a few chapters, I'm not dropping this, but I hope there are improvements in the story. Sorry if it's not understandable, I used translate to write this.

4mth
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Stephen_Minson_

Really looking forward to this one πŸ‘ I hope author doesn’t drop it…. ☹️

4mth
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Orion2004

Honestly I'm not sure what to think about this. Its obviously just another Chinese translated novel.the character doesn't have much depth. The pacing is very fast. I so desperately wanted another game creation fanfic, I honestly think you can read it if you're bored, im just not at that point yet

4mth
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ghostensaop

Love the fic

8mth
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LordLho
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8mth
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LootofMoney

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8mth
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Grimsight

very good start to the story, it didn't get boring and it makes me want to continue reading more chapters, as it has just begun there is a lack of development of the characters and the world, I hope you continue with the good work and improve the speed of publication

8mth
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AncestorX

Hi everyone, I'm excited to share this fanfic with you! This is a translation of a Chinese fanfic, and it's my first time translating, so there might be some mistakes. I appreciate your patience and feedback as I work to improve. If you enjoy the story, I might make some changes to add more depth and reduce the face-slapping style. I'm not sure exactly where this will take the story, but I'll do my best to make it enjoyable for all of you. Thanks for your support!

9mth
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Dude_3192

Hey, is it like a ready player one type of world

25d
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Dragonknight117

So far out of all the stories that have a game making system, yours are in the top three of my list

1mth
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Fellipe_Silva_1280

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3mth
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BloodKing82

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PedagangSiput

Unfortunately I only got to CH 17. At first I enjoyed it a bit because I'm a fan of stories like this. But it's really a shame that this is a translation, there are words that are difficult to understand and names that change in the middle of the story. That makes it difficult for me to read.

3mth
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Rizki_Caturianto

It's a good Game Maker fanfiction!! πŸ‘ It have a good plot/storyline and good english/translation.. I like this kind of story.. To see what kind of game MC/John will make.. How he make it.. What reaction of the players, etc... Love your story author san.. Keep up the good job πŸ˜πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜

3mth
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KingRealm

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Elemise

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3mth
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Bottom_Climber

what I'm looking for from a game making story is the reaction of the players and how the players play it, like the novel "black tech internet cafe system", here the plot is too fast and the lack of player reactions, well... there are player reactions but it's just like "Woah that's great" and a series of other compliments, without discussing how the players play it, most fanfics like this usually include several povs not only from mc but other characters, especially the players, but not here. I've only read a few chapters, I'm not dropping this, but I hope there are improvements in the story. Sorry if it's not understandable, I used translate to write this.

4mth
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Stephen_Minson_

Really looking forward to this one πŸ‘ I hope author doesn’t drop it…. ☹️

4mth
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Orion2004

Honestly I'm not sure what to think about this. Its obviously just another Chinese translated novel.the character doesn't have much depth. The pacing is very fast. I so desperately wanted another game creation fanfic, I honestly think you can read it if you're bored, im just not at that point yet

4mth
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ghostensaop

Love the fic

8mth
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LordLho
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8mth
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LootofMoney

good Ned more updates πŸ™πŸ™πŸ™ solit startup game masker

8mth
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Grimsight

very good start to the story, it didn't get boring and it makes me want to continue reading more chapters, as it has just begun there is a lack of development of the characters and the world, I hope you continue with the good work and improve the speed of publication

8mth
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