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Lammasu

Did a great job with this. Top 5 for Naruto fan fics.

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Josthin_Soto

No diré que es la mejor historia pero definitivamente es entretenida solo que hay algunas cosas que hay que arreglar urgentemente en primer lugar es la traducción es un mierda casi siempre cambian los nombres por los apellidos y eso confunde y lo otro es que apesar de saber Rasengan, chidori y sus variantes casi no las utiliza

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Tha_Reaper

Shitty story, bad language dialogue, bad transitioning, bad action or fights, just too bad!

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Tupan
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I like the story. Can’t wait for more. 🤘

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Silas_Savitar_

Haven't read a story line like this until now and I really like it. The life of a shinobi is portrayed very interestingly as well as the politics that wouldn't be shown properly in the anime. Unfortunately, there are writing mistakes that are really irritating.

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God_is_All

I mean it's alright. Better than most of the novels here but I would like to see more interaction between characters. As far as I've read, the story is just a character monologuing to themselves. Adding more interaction would make the story more dynamic.

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uneasy_bozo

It’s a light story which, nonetheless, doesn’t ignore the gruesomeness of the world settings. The characters are realistic and the development of the plot is logical. The chapters are short, but they accrue to a nice word amount in the end

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malhiharjot

Story has a lazy build up too many factors look like written by a child in his story time, it has failed to gain attraction for it , only good thing is combination of Nara and Uzumaki .

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Rhandson_D

there's no plot but have endless filler

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DARILLIS

GREAT STORY, THE AUTHOR IS NOT AFRAID TO MOVE WITH THE ORIGINAL PLOT (THANKS TO KAMI-SAMA) SO YOU WON'T READ A GENERIC STORY OF A SUPER OP MC THAT DOESN'T CHANGE THE MAIN STORY. THE GOAL OF THIS NOVEL IS TO CREATE AS MUCH BUTTERFLY EFFECT AS POSSIBLE, AND I DARE SAY THAT THE AUTHOR IS DOING IT WONDERFULLY. THERE IS ONLY ONE NEGATIVE POINT, THE CHAPTERS ARE SHORT. THANK YOU AP AUTHOR FOR THIS BRILLIANT WORK

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Absolute_Winter

My biggest issue is that the chapters are too short. I finish them in 2-3 mins.

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SenjuHashirama

It's a good ff but there's too many explanation that sometimes I lose my focus like which part am I again? What is this? Where is this happening? Just shorten the explanation, I can't even fathom the overall storyline as there's a whole chapter of explanation and suddenly enter into another scene. . .

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Mr_HonestReview

Read only 1st hundred chapters, then drop it. it's waste of time, it became too repetitive. too much talking or slice of life. an old reincarnate with too much childishness, he too fking clingy. he is bias also. the author is like a Chinese person with too much nationalism, but change it to uzumaki clan. and the NAMING. tskkk....

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PUERKO_Senpai

Awesome naruto FF

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aadi_raj

Read good fanfic. One of the best for naruto fanfics although the story development is dreadfully slow, but slow development has its own charms Anyway I wanted to give it a 5 star bot some plot holes made me change the decision. But for a project this big I agree that some plotholes are inevitable. Anyway good read

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Kalsapher

I liked the story quite a bit then *spoiler* mc does Mito Uzamaki at 13yrs old I mean come on. I have lost all interest in continuing as this is a trend i see quite abit probably by the time this ends the mc would have every female character from before the third war including his own mom. Yea thats also heavily implied as well.

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Mattgz
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Excelente novela fanfiction. Más actualizaciones por favor. El mc debería crear algo parecido al sello maldito para dominar el modo sabio. Falta una hermosa amante Uchiha. Para pasar al nivel kage el mc se puede someter al entrenamiento de netero de hxh.

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Thee_sad_Pirate

Was pretty giod at the beginning i lost interest after all the woman started throwing themselves at the MC and the story started to be told as more of a retelling after the fact

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HalfazHipocrite

I like the depth of the characters and the mc not being a simple tool. A couple words at the right time can shake worlds… A second title could be, A Nara who’s not lazy! For those who don’t like those that crush cannon and Mc’s that don’t have Goku and Naruto IQ levels of derp, this is not the book for you. Mc is clever, strong (not god) and like to stir up trouble. Hokage and his root are not good people. (Some people say the same about cannon but not all.) minor to mid lvl wish fulfillment.

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Sri_Charan_5513

story is very good at the beginning but it is starting get boaring to read after 100 chapters

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Ronaldo_Angeliski

capítulos um pouco curto mas a Historia e bem divertida sugiro mais tempo na aldeia Uzumaki e ser mais criativo

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PUERKO_Senpai

one word . . .AMAZING!!!!!!!!

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magapi

Slow development, 100 chapters and he's still a child, a very long training arc and counting!!. grammar is okay but names are confusing u need to think hard to understand who or what they're talking about. still looking forward to his growth maybe on 200 chapters based on its development, that is if the novel didn't drop.

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ERFAN
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A beta MC that all the women seem to want to jump into and all the men want to MC their wives to. This novel is complete nonsense, it's a waste of my time

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Onei
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the world building is interesting and the scenario is quite entertaining but, there are a lot of grammatical errors. They become bad enough that the meaning of sentences are reversed. The best example is the description, that says that the story happens after the manga even though it actually happens during the second great ninja war. If you can ignore those errors, then go ahead and read, it's an entertaining story

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darkflam

one of the best Naruto fanatic . now that mito is alive well there be Naruto?? or well he become what he so post to be and will MC save Kakashi dad??? so much to look forward to . keep up with good work.

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Lammasu

Did a great job with this. Top 5 for Naruto fan fics.

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Josthin_Soto

No diré que es la mejor historia pero definitivamente es entretenida solo que hay algunas cosas que hay que arreglar urgentemente en primer lugar es la traducción es un mierda casi siempre cambian los nombres por los apellidos y eso confunde y lo otro es que apesar de saber Rasengan, chidori y sus variantes casi no las utiliza

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Tha_Reaper

Shitty story, bad language dialogue, bad transitioning, bad action or fights, just too bad!

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Tupan
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I like the story. Can’t wait for more. 🤘

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Silas_Savitar_

Haven't read a story line like this until now and I really like it. The life of a shinobi is portrayed very interestingly as well as the politics that wouldn't be shown properly in the anime. Unfortunately, there are writing mistakes that are really irritating.

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God_is_All

I mean it's alright. Better than most of the novels here but I would like to see more interaction between characters. As far as I've read, the story is just a character monologuing to themselves. Adding more interaction would make the story more dynamic.

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uneasy_bozo

It’s a light story which, nonetheless, doesn’t ignore the gruesomeness of the world settings. The characters are realistic and the development of the plot is logical. The chapters are short, but they accrue to a nice word amount in the end

24d
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malhiharjot

Story has a lazy build up too many factors look like written by a child in his story time, it has failed to gain attraction for it , only good thing is combination of Nara and Uzumaki .

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Rhandson_D

there's no plot but have endless filler

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DARILLIS

GREAT STORY, THE AUTHOR IS NOT AFRAID TO MOVE WITH THE ORIGINAL PLOT (THANKS TO KAMI-SAMA) SO YOU WON'T READ A GENERIC STORY OF A SUPER OP MC THAT DOESN'T CHANGE THE MAIN STORY. THE GOAL OF THIS NOVEL IS TO CREATE AS MUCH BUTTERFLY EFFECT AS POSSIBLE, AND I DARE SAY THAT THE AUTHOR IS DOING IT WONDERFULLY. THERE IS ONLY ONE NEGATIVE POINT, THE CHAPTERS ARE SHORT. THANK YOU AP AUTHOR FOR THIS BRILLIANT WORK

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Absolute_Winter

My biggest issue is that the chapters are too short. I finish them in 2-3 mins.

2mth
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SenjuHashirama

It's a good ff but there's too many explanation that sometimes I lose my focus like which part am I again? What is this? Where is this happening? Just shorten the explanation, I can't even fathom the overall storyline as there's a whole chapter of explanation and suddenly enter into another scene. . .

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Mr_HonestReview

Read only 1st hundred chapters, then drop it. it's waste of time, it became too repetitive. too much talking or slice of life. an old reincarnate with too much childishness, he too fking clingy. he is bias also. the author is like a Chinese person with too much nationalism, but change it to uzumaki clan. and the NAMING. tskkk....

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PUERKO_Senpai

Awesome naruto FF

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aadi_raj

Read good fanfic. One of the best for naruto fanfics although the story development is dreadfully slow, but slow development has its own charms Anyway I wanted to give it a 5 star bot some plot holes made me change the decision. But for a project this big I agree that some plotholes are inevitable. Anyway good read

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Kalsapher

I liked the story quite a bit then *spoiler* mc does Mito Uzamaki at 13yrs old I mean come on. I have lost all interest in continuing as this is a trend i see quite abit probably by the time this ends the mc would have every female character from before the third war including his own mom. Yea thats also heavily implied as well.

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Mattgz
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Excelente novela fanfiction. Más actualizaciones por favor. El mc debería crear algo parecido al sello maldito para dominar el modo sabio. Falta una hermosa amante Uchiha. Para pasar al nivel kage el mc se puede someter al entrenamiento de netero de hxh.

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Thee_sad_Pirate

Was pretty giod at the beginning i lost interest after all the woman started throwing themselves at the MC and the story started to be told as more of a retelling after the fact

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HalfazHipocrite

I like the depth of the characters and the mc not being a simple tool. A couple words at the right time can shake worlds… A second title could be, A Nara who’s not lazy! For those who don’t like those that crush cannon and Mc’s that don’t have Goku and Naruto IQ levels of derp, this is not the book for you. Mc is clever, strong (not god) and like to stir up trouble. Hokage and his root are not good people. (Some people say the same about cannon but not all.) minor to mid lvl wish fulfillment.

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Sri_Charan_5513

story is very good at the beginning but it is starting get boaring to read after 100 chapters

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Ronaldo_Angeliski

capítulos um pouco curto mas a Historia e bem divertida sugiro mais tempo na aldeia Uzumaki e ser mais criativo

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PUERKO_Senpai

one word . . .AMAZING!!!!!!!!

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magapi

Slow development, 100 chapters and he's still a child, a very long training arc and counting!!. grammar is okay but names are confusing u need to think hard to understand who or what they're talking about. still looking forward to his growth maybe on 200 chapters based on its development, that is if the novel didn't drop.

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ERFAN
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A beta MC that all the women seem to want to jump into and all the men want to MC their wives to. This novel is complete nonsense, it's a waste of my time

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Onei
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the world building is interesting and the scenario is quite entertaining but, there are a lot of grammatical errors. They become bad enough that the meaning of sentences are reversed. The best example is the description, that says that the story happens after the manga even though it actually happens during the second great ninja war. If you can ignore those errors, then go ahead and read, it's an entertaining story

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darkflam

one of the best Naruto fanatic . now that mito is alive well there be Naruto?? or well he become what he so post to be and will MC save Kakashi dad??? so much to look forward to . keep up with good work.

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