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overall an amazing story, and great plot, but there is a big weakness. the proportions for the dimensions and quantity of people and especially the area of the planet are blown out of context. Seriously random and too big numbers like "quintillion miles" for a planet? i swear even giant stars are not that big
I dropped this a while back on a different account when the mc picked up another girl at the astral leap train,... author says it's not a harem but that's exactly what it feels like for the past hundred plus chapters before the astral train scene. If anyone who has already read past that point reads this, tell me what to expect, harem or no harem.
I love this story, it reminds me of Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate For A Thousand Years.
Holy shit dude I just got to ~Chapter 390 and I must say that the past few chapters hit HARD. That was a fucking emotional rollercoaster that I did NOT expect. Started reading the novel for "haha big funny number", got to the insane amalgamation of things to keep track of that was him progressing stupidly fast just before reaching the immortal realm and then everything shifted so quickly to a damn masterpiece. Especially with the recently built up background on all of the people he met.
Asmodeus and Prometheus name used in cultivation world just sounds so wrong. Reading the start of this novel is so painful and hard to pass. Let's see will this change my opinion after reading more.
This novel is pretty well written, if not for the fact that the MC is Completely brain-dead with no motivation and does evil for the sake of doing evil (destroying an entire layer of existence for the sake of getting a bit stronger) The world also doesn't make any sense, everything is blown out to proportions before unseen with figures like octodecillion and non-decillion flying everywhere. If I was a mortal in this World, I wouldn't even do anything, because after 2 minutes, some random Void refining cultivators accidentally destroy everything in a 750 billion-mile radius. It does have some grammatical errors here and there, but nothing crazy. Overall, I think this novel is decent if you want to turn your brain off and watch crazy numbers flyin' and lots of people dyin'.
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A really good story author and i hope it stays like that and that youll continue the Story.
only read to chapter 24 the story is decent but i cant wrap my head around the fact that he acts like everyone wants to kill him mc not really the smartest like below the dumbest mc you can think of like think if cops came to your house to arrest you because of something you know you did wrong but the resisted by slamming one onto the ground ofc their going to try and kill you then the mc would've had far less trouble by simply following them back explain why and went with the punishment and he acts like multiple ppl have tried to kill him to justify his killing i just cant wrap my head around this characters logic it seems extremely dumb their are better ways to go about everything especially in a sect like if you think he's a spy then report it your not because its hard well that's bs and then what sect besides demonic ones will allow others to kill those part of their sect without punishment
Okey NOW THIS IS RIDICULOUS!!! IS HE ACTUALLY TRYING TO CONTEND WITH NOAH OSMONT THE QUINTESSENTIEL OUTERVERSEL EMPEROR!!!?( reference to ch.no. 313)
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Azmodus many People konw about him and his destiny but we never see a single glimpse of his parents(if they are real which I don't know)and his master. why don't give us a chapter of them?
Currently I'm in chapter 100 and although the story is great, it is becoming a burden reading it due to the annoying female characters that author thinks are cute. Like introduce however many characters you want but atleast try to make them sensible. They just disgust me!! Author expects us to like them, but they don't have a single thing to like, leeching of MC while not being thankful. *Spoiler* Killing people left and right coz they might seduce MC and annihilating trillions bcoz a girl said MC is not as handsome as rumours. Yeah right🤡 they deserve happiness, these pitiful girls
W skibidi novel frfr. I hope the author never gets gyatts and fanum taxed by livvy dunne. We got a W rizz skibidi ohio sigma gyatt novel before GTA 6. Never fails to bro he was about to skibidi glazing womp womp. Patrick bateman thinks he baby gronk level 6 gyatt ahh novel. FRFR give this skibidi W rizz novel a good read and edge to this guys. Peace out
"No Harem! There will be women who seem like they're part of MC's harem, but it's not what you think! Let the plot cook!" I'm trying so hard to believeyou bro, but you really are not helping your case. Can I please get a confirmation that this is still not a harem so I can continue reading or if you're not sure say so, so I can quit, please bro.
alright this is definitely harem he could have left all the girls when he ascended to the starry sky. but no he chose to bring them along. they serve no purpose at all. any of you agree with me here?
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this story is painful lot of things happening in just 2-3 chapters too fast paced. a good potential book ruined i would say
I did the whole novel in one sitting, the best piece of entertainment ever. Very refreshing read. It's not a masterpiece but it's funny to read. It's like eating a fine chocolate.
bro. how did you make the cover? It's too good just like your novel. Tell me pls..
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
No harem = Yes read I'm sick and tired of the thousands of harem novels
Can you elaborate world concept you written in chapter 106 or create a different Chapter about world and realm
Interesting! But “No harem=No read” Waiting for your decision within this month. Then I will decide to read or delete from library. Any story is not harem we consider that author lack skills to make many aspect for their story. And probably lack skills and ability to make many characters around Mc that can grow and fight together.
A absolutely amazing story. Only down side is the pay wall came to soon, and there aren’t enough chapters. I can’t tell if this one is going to be a slow burn, as it seems very fast at first, but once you get a idea of the scope of which the main character is going to reach, he seems to not being moving at such a insane speed. He reaches QI condensation realm (one after body refinement) at the very end of the free chapters, so I don’t know if he’s going to speed up from here.
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It kinda makes me sad the more he develops his power and character and doesn’t make me feel the thrill that he is becoming stronger with the price he has to pay , becoming a heartless leveling machine is not what i think would be good development ,even more ridiculous is that he will become deaf afterwards , then what? Become a cripple ? he himself doesn’t feel the thrill of becoming stronger anymore and that he doesnt feel love for the childhood friend and all the others after the stayed with him even though he was not being emotionally involved with them is also quiet a bad development, quiet sad if you want my opinion, otherwise the world and stuff like that are nice.
overall an amazing story, and great plot, but there is a big weakness. the proportions for the dimensions and quantity of people and especially the area of the planet are blown out of context. Seriously random and too big numbers like "quintillion miles" for a planet? i swear even giant stars are not that big
I dropped this a while back on a different account when the mc picked up another girl at the astral leap train,... author says it's not a harem but that's exactly what it feels like for the past hundred plus chapters before the astral train scene. If anyone who has already read past that point reads this, tell me what to expect, harem or no harem.
I love this story, it reminds me of Top Tier Providence, Secretly Cultivate For A Thousand Years.
Holy shit dude I just got to ~Chapter 390 and I must say that the past few chapters hit HARD. That was a fucking emotional rollercoaster that I did NOT expect. Started reading the novel for "haha big funny number", got to the insane amalgamation of things to keep track of that was him progressing stupidly fast just before reaching the immortal realm and then everything shifted so quickly to a damn masterpiece. Especially with the recently built up background on all of the people he met.
Asmodeus and Prometheus name used in cultivation world just sounds so wrong. Reading the start of this novel is so painful and hard to pass. Let's see will this change my opinion after reading more.
This novel is pretty well written, if not for the fact that the MC is Completely brain-dead with no motivation and does evil for the sake of doing evil (destroying an entire layer of existence for the sake of getting a bit stronger) The world also doesn't make any sense, everything is blown out to proportions before unseen with figures like octodecillion and non-decillion flying everywhere. If I was a mortal in this World, I wouldn't even do anything, because after 2 minutes, some random Void refining cultivators accidentally destroy everything in a 750 billion-mile radius. It does have some grammatical errors here and there, but nothing crazy. Overall, I think this novel is decent if you want to turn your brain off and watch crazy numbers flyin' and lots of people dyin'.
Reveal Spoiler A really good story author and i hope it stays like that and that youll continue the Story.
only read to chapter 24 the story is decent but i cant wrap my head around the fact that he acts like everyone wants to kill him mc not really the smartest like below the dumbest mc you can think of like think if cops came to your house to arrest you because of something you know you did wrong but the resisted by slamming one onto the ground ofc their going to try and kill you then the mc would've had far less trouble by simply following them back explain why and went with the punishment and he acts like multiple ppl have tried to kill him to justify his killing i just cant wrap my head around this characters logic it seems extremely dumb their are better ways to go about everything especially in a sect like if you think he's a spy then report it your not because its hard well that's bs and then what sect besides demonic ones will allow others to kill those part of their sect without punishment
Okey NOW THIS IS RIDICULOUS!!! IS HE ACTUALLY TRYING TO CONTEND WITH NOAH OSMONT THE QUINTESSENTIEL OUTERVERSEL EMPEROR!!!?( reference to ch.no. 313)
Reveal Spoiler Azmodus many People konw about him and his destiny but we never see a single glimpse of his parents(if they are real which I don't know)and his master. why don't give us a chapter of them?
Currently I'm in chapter 100 and although the story is great, it is becoming a burden reading it due to the annoying female characters that author thinks are cute. Like introduce however many characters you want but atleast try to make them sensible. They just disgust me!! Author expects us to like them, but they don't have a single thing to like, leeching of MC while not being thankful. *Spoiler* Killing people left and right coz they might seduce MC and annihilating trillions bcoz a girl said MC is not as handsome as rumours. Yeah right🤡 they deserve happiness, these pitiful girls
W skibidi novel frfr. I hope the author never gets gyatts and fanum taxed by livvy dunne. We got a W rizz skibidi ohio sigma gyatt novel before GTA 6. Never fails to bro he was about to skibidi glazing womp womp. Patrick bateman thinks he baby gronk level 6 gyatt ahh novel. FRFR give this skibidi W rizz novel a good read and edge to this guys. Peace out
"No Harem! There will be women who seem like they're part of MC's harem, but it's not what you think! Let the plot cook!" I'm trying so hard to believeyou bro, but you really are not helping your case. Can I please get a confirmation that this is still not a harem so I can continue reading or if you're not sure say so, so I can quit, please bro.
alright this is definitely harem he could have left all the girls when he ascended to the starry sky. but no he chose to bring them along. they serve no purpose at all. any of you agree with me here?
Reveal Spoiler this story is painful lot of things happening in just 2-3 chapters too fast paced. a good potential book ruined i would say
I did the whole novel in one sitting, the best piece of entertainment ever. Very refreshing read. It's not a masterpiece but it's funny to read. It's like eating a fine chocolate.
bro. how did you make the cover? It's too good just like your novel. Tell me pls..
Don't mind me...just decided to mark this novel as one of the new novels that my new novel has to surpass
No harem = Yes read I'm sick and tired of the thousands of harem novels
Can you elaborate world concept you written in chapter 106 or create a different Chapter about world and realm
Interesting! But “No harem=No read” Waiting for your decision within this month. Then I will decide to read or delete from library. Any story is not harem we consider that author lack skills to make many aspect for their story. And probably lack skills and ability to make many characters around Mc that can grow and fight together.
A absolutely amazing story. Only down side is the pay wall came to soon, and there aren’t enough chapters. I can’t tell if this one is going to be a slow burn, as it seems very fast at first, but once you get a idea of the scope of which the main character is going to reach, he seems to not being moving at such a insane speed. He reaches QI condensation realm (one after body refinement) at the very end of the free chapters, so I don’t know if he’s going to speed up from here.
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It kinda makes me sad the more he develops his power and character and doesn’t make me feel the thrill that he is becoming stronger with the price he has to pay , becoming a heartless leveling machine is not what i think would be good development ,even more ridiculous is that he will become deaf afterwards , then what? Become a cripple ? he himself doesn’t feel the thrill of becoming stronger anymore and that he doesnt feel love for the childhood friend and all the others after the stayed with him even though he was not being emotionally involved with them is also quiet a bad development, quiet sad if you want my opinion, otherwise the world and stuff like that are nice.