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A manageable production ..............................................................................................................................
I absolutely love your book(Kyoji especially) , (if you can). Can you spread the love by checking out my book Dove And Crow by Xolu.
Pretty good from the free chapters I have read. However he doesn’t gain the ability to use the Chaos Energy he made before being sent back in time. It’s recipe is the only part of his memory he can’t access. Don’t know if that changes but the lack of that made it so I wasn’t compelled to actually purchase any chapters. Also the power system wasn’t very fleshed out. It looks like everyone who awakens gets a system however we aren’t introduced to any of its mechanics except when he gets skill books in the last free chapter. TL;DR Good story that lacks the element that attracted me in the synopsis. However I still think others will enjoy.
this novel is dogshit, why the plot is slow. i dont like when ur detail says op mc but when read it till chapter 28, there is no element of it, u should put from weak to strong tag not op mc tag. this is clickbait shit.
A manageable production ..............................................................................................................................
I absolutely love your book(Kyoji especially) , (if you can). Can you spread the love by checking out my book Dove And Crow by Xolu.
Pretty good from the free chapters I have read. However he doesn’t gain the ability to use the Chaos Energy he made before being sent back in time. It’s recipe is the only part of his memory he can’t access. Don’t know if that changes but the lack of that made it so I wasn’t compelled to actually purchase any chapters. Also the power system wasn’t very fleshed out. It looks like everyone who awakens gets a system however we aren’t introduced to any of its mechanics except when he gets skill books in the last free chapter. TL;DR Good story that lacks the element that attracted me in the synopsis. However I still think others will enjoy.
this novel is dogshit, why the plot is slow. i dont like when ur detail says op mc but when read it till chapter 28, there is no element of it, u should put from weak to strong tag not op mc tag. this is clickbait shit.