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30 Years in Whitebeard’s Crew, I Became Invincible
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He transmigrated to God Valley 38 years ago, becoming a hunted slave. By chance, he was rescued by Whitebeard and became the first crew member of the Whitebeard Pirates. Due to a system and a promise made to Whitebeard, he was not allowed to take action until the Summit War.
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I hate this type of story. Mc has knowledge of what is going to happen, but never wants to change anything, help his comrades, nothing! Even when he has the connections/power to do it. He could have helped Oden out by just asking Whitebeard to visit Wano a 2nd time, thus saving Wano from Kaido, but noooo. Every single time, he gives the same dialogue of "It's all destiny" like bro, the entire story of One Piece has been about being free. Also, the mc went from being an extroverted person, teaching other kids and all, but suddenly he became a complete introvert and shut-in, who doesn't talk to anyone, and for some reason, tell those close to him to not mention anything about him?? This change happened for absolutely no reason whatsoever. Basically, so far, author is just trying to make One Piece with absolutely no changes whatsoever, and just inserting his oc in it like an observer. Reason why I'm so disappointed is because the story had an interesting idea, and the initial chapters were fun to read, and then it went downhill so randomly.
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never rated a story 1 star in my life but this shit pushed my buttons far too much mf casually telling anyone he sees he is from the future like wtf is the point bruh
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27 chapters in which nothing has happened the canon changed absolutely nothing and if in Marineford it remains the same it would be one of the most garbage fics I have read [img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry][img=angry]
Poorly written characters and boring story development. I don't understand the MC. He talks much like an old man who is in control but does shit about it. Not recommended
Normally, I don't mind when the transmigrator doesn't change too much. But the MC literally didn't change ANYTHING until Marineford. He wasn't even known as the strongest member of the crew after Whitebeard or whatever and did everything to make sure no one knew who he was in the crew. He went from an extrovert to introvert for literally no reason.
The MC is very bland. All we know is that other characters see him as "terrifying". The biggest problem is what the author called World Will, which allowed injured Teach to sail away from MC, who's like Yonko level. It's also very weird that he didn't give a shit about his son while he used to put so much energy into crewmates. It was a very promising work, but it went downhill quickly.
Mantap mantap mantap.... Love it love it love it... Just read it .......................................................................................................................................,
It could be good, but maybe it won't. Too early to tell with this fic with just 30 chaps. But here's why I gave the low rating. - Too rushed -The overly mysterious vibe didn't work out for mc -Not interfering with the future? Buuuulllshit. Author's just lazy imo or too scared to derail canon. (May change tho. If Teach still kills the guy then this proves my point) -Romance is nonexistent. Mc was drained of character when he decided to phase out. Too boring and honestly just feels forced.
Start is good but by chapter 22 it becomes dull. Mc is in some kinda mood that ruins everything. He believes that he doesn’t deserve happiness and he should not be with someone or they will also be sad.
This fanfiction is not recommended!! This is the first time I've read a transmigration Mc who is stupid and has no ambition. When I read up to chapter 5, I couldn't stand the Mc anymore, I swear this is the first time I've read it.
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okay so till chapter 20 it's still somewhat interesting but after 23 or so, bro has a kid ( no romance straight up kid ) and doesn't use any power so the kid doesn't respect him and it's shit after from what i read in the raws ( around 31 chapter ) it's just bad, doesn't use power for god knows which reason and suddenly start using them ?? like wtf you could have used the observation haki from the day you got it but no let me read the books, and I don't why his relationship with Whitebeared is bad suddenly no explanation there just straight up doesn't meet him for 10 years, so many plot holes 🥲.
One of the best things I've read in a while. My thanks for the high-quality translation)Keep up the good work............................................)))))
Very enjoyable, also when u understand the character him not interfering with the timeline till Canon makes sense, overall it's very well translated compared to other translations, also refreshing in some aspects
Shameless Review!!! Whitebeard is the GOAT!!. I'll sometimes edit the dialogue and such to make it less Chinesy. Here is the raw 海贼：在白团签到三十年我无敌了