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As of now I see that the writing quality seems to be low. It seems like the author doesn’t have pacing down. It reads with some tinges of opinion piece with the opening about modernity. However, the story is slow to start and the chapter ends with the main character having one action for the progression of the story, that is falling through a hole or something of that nature to get isekai’d. We don’t know much about he character except that he is just one of us, someone who is going through modern reality but that doesn’t tell us much and isn’t interesting at all. The way the story builds up the introduction is less than satisfactory. Please tell me if this gets better but as of right now I see this being a huge issue. It is a huge issue even if it gets better though so I hope revisions on the opening can be done at least. If the problem persists further than the opening then I don’t think this will be a story worth reading. Overall though thank you to the author for writing and hopefully I can come back feeling differently about further stories as things get better.
These are the sort of villains I love to write in my stories getting brutally murdered and tortured, it makes for the most satisfying deaths. Thank you for writing this novel author and giving me so many good ideas for these antagonist :)
great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..
I only read the "free to read" part(about 45 chapters, but I do think that the story and the development is quite well written. Also, can we talk about the fact how NecroBin postes 14 Chapters a Week?! I recommend this novel.
The characterizations of the characters, their interactions as well as the surrounding environment are written really well. Each character has their own distinctive trait and I'm sure that going forward we will be able to dig even deeper into their stories. The world building is still lacking but some clues such as the monopoly of the kingdom, the oriental lineage in only one part of the world or even the underground cities show that ideas from that point of view are not lacking. Perhaps the only flaw at the moment is the slow progression of the MC because even if we are only on his 8th day in the new world in the novel we are at more than 170 chapters and he still hasn't unlocked his unique class. I hope he gets a big power up soon. For the rest, I recommend the work to all lovers of the Isekai genre in general because it gives me the impression that it will be a truly good story. Good luck author!
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A nice, yet twisted way for the plot to thicken. Excellent ending to the chapter, making the reader anxious for the next chapter from the author
a very enjoyable and good read. world background is slowly and steadily established which makes it a good story
Great story, very addictive! I like that the main character is not an usual goody two shoes hero.
Very well written, dialogues are lively and interesting, character development is great, MC is competent, the system isn t the end all be all. 4 stars on the world because I m sure this author could have created something even better. That and I am a pos. Sorry author, I mean good things :D
A marvelous example of what not to write. A truly cursed piece of literature that belongs in the realm of trash. Authors of novels like these like to think of themselves as sophisticated individuals that're challenging the norm by writing harem cr*p, while in reality they're just insecure edgy mor*ns who get off on writing stuff like this.
It's refreshing to see a MC not having a hero complex who just wishes to live freely and has his priorities ( having a harem with strong & powerful girls) set. It is definitely worth a try and looking forward to more chaps.
Great book, keep it up author! I have no idea if you have other stuff, but I am definitely going to check it out after I finish writing this.
I like the MC and his realistic thinking fr. Having the hero complex have put many in trouble. The writing style is easy to read and the author clearly has a sense of humour that he adds to his writing. I recommend!
The premise of the story is promising, I love villain stories and the plot has been interesting so far!
Nice! A harem story with system! Exactly what I've been looking for! Writing is nice and pacing is great with good grammar. Will there be yuri in this?
The story is in first POV and is quite intriguing. The characters are well-written and world development is very good. Amazing Job Author!! Keep it coming.
It's a good story, and I like the pacing of the chapters. I'm gonna keep this one on my list to keep reading. I can't wait :D Keep doing your best
This novel offers a captivating adventure with a well-thought-out class system and a shameless yet likable villain as the MC. The pacing is great, and while it's a slow burn, it never drags. The writing style is top-notch, and the dynamic between the MC and the strong main girl, Ayame, adds depth to the story. Highly recommended for anyone who enjoys harem novels with a fresh twist! Great job author, Keep it up!
I was intrigued from the start is so captivating to read about the mc! He is so shameless and likeable even though he is the villain. Great premise if your reading this go read this webnovel now! highly recommended!! good job author!
The power system is quite nice; the writing style is also pretty top-notch. Totally recommended to anyone who loves typical harem novels. : )
I love it... everything is good.. though it's in the first POV, it is written well. Let's where it led us. the journey seems interesting.
The story is well paced and ofc its well written... Its gonna be a fun read for sure
Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.
As of now I see that the writing quality seems to be low. It seems like the author doesn’t have pacing down. It reads with some tinges of opinion piece with the opening about modernity. However, the story is slow to start and the chapter ends with the main character having one action for the progression of the story, that is falling through a hole or something of that nature to get isekai’d. We don’t know much about he character except that he is just one of us, someone who is going through modern reality but that doesn’t tell us much and isn’t interesting at all. The way the story builds up the introduction is less than satisfactory. Please tell me if this gets better but as of right now I see this being a huge issue. It is a huge issue even if it gets better though so I hope revisions on the opening can be done at least. If the problem persists further than the opening then I don’t think this will be a story worth reading. Overall though thank you to the author for writing and hopefully I can come back feeling differently about further stories as things get better.
These are the sort of villains I love to write in my stories getting brutally murdered and tortured, it makes for the most satisfying deaths. Thank you for writing this novel author and giving me so many good ideas for these antagonist :)
great book,awesome character development ..I like the way the mc does not depend on the system..A very funny book..Thanks man keep up the good work..
I only read the "free to read" part(about 45 chapters, but I do think that the story and the development is quite well written. Also, can we talk about the fact how NecroBin postes 14 Chapters a Week?! I recommend this novel.
The characterizations of the characters, their interactions as well as the surrounding environment are written really well. Each character has their own distinctive trait and I'm sure that going forward we will be able to dig even deeper into their stories. The world building is still lacking but some clues such as the monopoly of the kingdom, the oriental lineage in only one part of the world or even the underground cities show that ideas from that point of view are not lacking. Perhaps the only flaw at the moment is the slow progression of the MC because even if we are only on his 8th day in the new world in the novel we are at more than 170 chapters and he still hasn't unlocked his unique class. I hope he gets a big power up soon. For the rest, I recommend the work to all lovers of the Isekai genre in general because it gives me the impression that it will be a truly good story. Good luck author!
Reveal Spoiler A nice, yet twisted way for the plot to thicken. Excellent ending to the chapter, making the reader anxious for the next chapter from the author
a very enjoyable and good read. world background is slowly and steadily established which makes it a good story
Great story, very addictive! I like that the main character is not an usual goody two shoes hero.
Very well written, dialogues are lively and interesting, character development is great, MC is competent, the system isn t the end all be all. 4 stars on the world because I m sure this author could have created something even better. That and I am a pos. Sorry author, I mean good things :D
A marvelous example of what not to write. A truly cursed piece of literature that belongs in the realm of trash. Authors of novels like these like to think of themselves as sophisticated individuals that're challenging the norm by writing harem cr*p, while in reality they're just insecure edgy mor*ns who get off on writing stuff like this.
It's refreshing to see a MC not having a hero complex who just wishes to live freely and has his priorities ( having a harem with strong & powerful girls) set. It is definitely worth a try and looking forward to more chaps.
Great book, keep it up author! I have no idea if you have other stuff, but I am definitely going to check it out after I finish writing this.
I like the MC and his realistic thinking fr. Having the hero complex have put many in trouble. The writing style is easy to read and the author clearly has a sense of humour that he adds to his writing. I recommend!
The premise of the story is promising, I love villain stories and the plot has been interesting so far!
Nice! A harem story with system! Exactly what I've been looking for! Writing is nice and pacing is great with good grammar. Will there be yuri in this?
The story is in first POV and is quite intriguing. The characters are well-written and world development is very good. Amazing Job Author!! Keep it coming.
It's a good story, and I like the pacing of the chapters. I'm gonna keep this one on my list to keep reading. I can't wait :D Keep doing your best
This novel offers a captivating adventure with a well-thought-out class system and a shameless yet likable villain as the MC. The pacing is great, and while it's a slow burn, it never drags. The writing style is top-notch, and the dynamic between the MC and the strong main girl, Ayame, adds depth to the story. Highly recommended for anyone who enjoys harem novels with a fresh twist! Great job author, Keep it up!
I was intrigued from the start is so captivating to read about the mc! He is so shameless and likeable even though he is the villain. Great premise if your reading this go read this webnovel now! highly recommended!! good job author!
The power system is quite nice; the writing style is also pretty top-notch. Totally recommended to anyone who loves typical harem novels. : )
I love it... everything is good.. though it's in the first POV, it is written well. Let's where it led us. the journey seems interesting.
The story is well paced and ofc its well written... Its gonna be a fun read for sure
Thanks for giving my novel a chance. I believe that you won't regret it. The MC is greedy, possessive, and scheming. He starts out as an opportunistic anti-hero more than an actual villain, but quickly begins slipping. However, if your idea of 'villain' is someone who skins puppies alive just for fun while cackling manically then he will never become a true villain. My idea of a 'villain' is someone who is severely lacking any moral limitations that stop him from doings things that would make him stronger, and also having very low empathy levels for outsiders. As for the harem part, I prefer small harems where each member has an actual reason to exist beyond being eye candies and trophies for the MC to show off. Therefore, each lady has an important role to play in the story, with each having at least a mini arc before/when joining, and will almost certainly have an entire future arc centered around them. You can expect about one woman/60-80 chapters average I would say. If you have any questions or comments don't hesitate to state them. Enjoy the ride! No NTR, no yuri.