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It's a well written story so far. It has an interesting plot and kinda excels. Add drawing in the reader in looking forward to the next chapters
You’ve grown better, much better to at the first book you’ve wrote. The world building is fine, the interaction between characters are interesting, the way of MC reacts and his mindset is in another level. It’s good to be smart, and cautious, never underestimate how cruel the world and people are. MC is clever, he can overcome his fear and mindset, trying to accept the rules of this world and never fail to keep reminding himself how dangerous this world is. No one is right and no one is wrong. To survive, either you become a villain to slaughter or you become a victim to let others destroy you. It one to blame, then blame on the rules of the survival that prevented everyone from coexist peacefully. [img=recommend][img=recommend]Keep up good work.
It's a well written story so far. It has an interesting plot and kinda excels. Add drawing in the reader in looking forward to the next chapters
You’ve grown better, much better to at the first book you’ve wrote. The world building is fine, the interaction between characters are interesting, the way of MC reacts and his mindset is in another level. It’s good to be smart, and cautious, never underestimate how cruel the world and people are. MC is clever, he can overcome his fear and mindset, trying to accept the rules of this world and never fail to keep reminding himself how dangerous this world is. No one is right and no one is wrong. To survive, either you become a villain to slaughter or you become a victim to let others destroy you. It one to blame, then blame on the rules of the survival that prevented everyone from coexist peacefully. [img=recommend][img=recommend]Keep up good work.