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IDK why there are so much bad reviews. The only thing I wanted was a slightly overpowered mc. On chapter 41 and it's one of the best novels I have ever read. The is the first time I cried just by reading a novel
Author , I understand that the MC and FMC were meticulously set up, but how could their ,especially her family could just brand them as guilty without any apprant investigation in context of the world you yourself wrote. This is a magical and clearly cutthroat world where things like lust potion, mind control existing wouldn't raise anyone's eyebrow. Elara and Lucavion didn't seem to have any contact beforehand. Considering elara established noble character , it makes more sense to assume she wasn't at least consenting when she says so. Also dude was clearly vomiting again and out of it ,at least someone should have a susposcion of foul play this is assuming powerful duke cant even fanthom means to detect if someones been drugged. Literally everyone , their families, the lawmakers of the country and even the Mc and Fmc themselves, need to be braindead for this to work. I'm not saying they should become clean and lived happily ever after, I'm simply disappointed that zero effort was put to anything .
Bruh if you are going to write by using A.I. then make it less obvious. I am 43 chapters in, and it is painful how all the internal monologues are just repeated ideas in different wording. When other characters face off, like in chap 43, then it is obvious that an A.I. is narrating the emotions and dialogue. If you are not using A.I. then you are simply overdoing it - there are better ways to describe character emotions and development.
This story is really good in my opinion, The story is kind of slow in the beginning but after the 2-year time skip after chap 50 the mc develops in his character and also his strength the problems I have is that a few characters designs are kind of lacking with some characters that seem to be important for the future plot, And also the World building is kind of nice so far but currently since the story is just starting is can be improved upon
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the best part should be the transmission. nothing interesting happenes but besides the first chapter, there is literally no point in having it. it adds nothing to the story, zero twist. it just a basic medieval story about a fallen noble that was lied to. there is nothing wrong with that. but that what I signed up to read.
Characters seem extremely one dimensional, internal monologues of the main character seem written by AI, as "never give up", but really 0 motivations. Almost every other character is an after thought, as he somehow joins a team in the army, but you feel no attachment to them as there is never any personal connections or in-depth character development.
I can see that there potential bu the author just rushes throw thing Makin It impossible to get attached to character only at a surface leave. dialogue is boring and uninteresting. the author doesn't know how to create natural flowin conflict and events as they just forced into the story etc the masters identify and the hes end and back story , the isikai shi way is I there, there's alot of tell no showing in this story
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A typical Isekai kid gets put into a villain character and has no problems before getting transmigrated and then crime happens and blah blah no one believes the Mc he gets disowned and Banished to hell hole blah blah recover himself stables and works to get stronger and all that typical stuff I haven't read all 50 free chapters but I feel the generics stuff he gets forbidden power or something and nonsense continues to happen I bet while the true villains live there life up and get random chapter with there nonsense and also the fmc girl who also got framed hates him because she believes the person who ruined her whole life I do not understand that plot point to me make no sense. Reading the first 10 chapters was downright disappointing in the first chapters he gives his Opinion on the novel he got transported to and I took the world out of my mouth for this novel
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Authors username checks out. The book is very dark and also kind of frustrating to read. It is well-written though. I feel super bad for the mc and had to stop reading because the story is depressing.
The writing is good and all, I actually really like the background and story progression since it seems to stray from the op mc cliche; however, there are firstly, some fillers that I cannot understand why they're there other than to make the readers irritated. On top of that, the novel doesn't need the transmigration tag because for as long as I read, few dozens chapters in, you could've removed the transmigration tag and the introduction chapter, and it would be the exact same thing, like there would be no major differences whatsoever. The tag itself feels like a cheap attempt at clickbaiting that unfortunately worked, reading this novel, for me, was like having fishbone stuck in your throat-- Like I know it supposed to be a tragedy and all, I can perfectly comprehend that, but at least, AT LEAST, makes it so that the transmigrator is actually unique somewhat compared to the native denizens.
man!!! the story would have been perfect with some revenge but author made the MC too soft. ruined the story for me and what's the point of reincarnation when he no longer remembers his old memories
This novel is well written, the author focuses a lot on the development of the mc with a slow pace. I recommend reading it.
haven't read it yet but giving it five stars cause of the yandere tag 🫡 *will edit if it sucks.
It's kind of ridiculous that his family didn't believe him, nor gave him a chance and just the whole plot of the book in general is super depressing and unrealistic. I don't see us getting proper revenge anytime soon, and honestly , I don't really like plots like this, especially when the whole goal of the story is revenge and 100 chapters out currently kinda just seems like a money sink. But everyone has different tastes if you like it read it.
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So far, I love it and it is so fulfilling with each character that has background and not for the mc to just step on.
It’s pretty good. Usually stories like this start with the character getting sent to the “penitent” legion then there is a time skip and the mc shows back up mysterious and op to take revenge. It’s rare to see actual character development showing what the mc goes through in their exile. It is slow paced but as they say a house built on sand is washed away.
Author, This is best novel from your collection and story is also good with how our MC is getting strong by hard work and slowly. Consider yourself very lucky as I don't review and i am making exception for you...
Okay first of all the story is pretty cliche (I will not lie about that) but the story has a potential and if you read more you will realize that it is pretty good.[img=recommend] Note: I will agree with her sister that Reverse-Harem is much better than Harem.🤣
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Too depressing for me.. each chapter is just a consistent downer. Not that the novel is bad, on the contrary it’s actually quite good.
I’m writing this review after completing the first volume. Having read the author's previous work, I must say that he has improved significantly, and the writing feels much more mature. For some, the growth of the main character may seem slow, but honestly, it feels more realistic given the character's circumstances. Not much has happened yet, as this volume primarily serves as the foundation for the main story, but I’m still curious to see what comes next.
Writing quality is superb Updating stability nothing to say Story and character development. If there were tragedy and slow paced tags I won’t be frustrated 49 chapters in and mc is still canon fodder The frustration is just killing me Everyone seems to bully mc alone and despite his so called star devouring (spoiler) some rank 3 bozo is like heaven while he’s earth(apparently not as talented it’s made to be) If you like slow paced novels where mc is traumatized in more than 30 chapters while growing like a snail this book is for you
I may be biased due to reading the author other works (Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest) This is very good start. Still too early to give my full thoughts of the story but from knowing the author previous work I know I'm going to love this story. One thing I love what the author does is he takes his time with the main character development and power level. I am so tired of reading a op main character who barley worked hard to obtain their power. shattered innocents we see the mc struggle and I am so excited to see how he will prevail and get back at everyone who wronged him. Maybe I'm just odd but I like seeing a main character who we see starts at the bottom and crawl their way to the top. Overall, I'm quite excited to see how this story will unravel. i do hope the author will have the main character have guy friends (I do not mean Bl lol) Typically with stories with harems the mc only surrounded by women. They don't have guy friends if they do it's like comedy relief. I hope I explain that well like I want the mc having his own group his bros. I hope explained what I thought well this was my first time writing a review so if I made a mistake cut me some slack.
Bro, have you really given up on EROTIC RPG ??you took a new novel ,which you are going to update 1 chapter everyday . But you haven't updated a single chapter of erotic rpg for 6 month straight. Now you are treating it like middle child .
five star from me, cuz why not. i enjoyed both of authors previous works. all the best for this book also.
Hello, Author here. In this thread, I will clarify some questions regarding the start of the book, and you can treat it as a Q&A as well. Firstly, the novel will seem a little odd to you at the start since it starts differently. But, I must insist that you read the free chapters, the first volume, until the end and bear with it a little since it is just an introduction to the work. I know at the start of the novel, Lucavion doesn't start as your typical main character of such novels, which is something I intended since, at the start of the novel, the main character is 14 years old and mentally unstable due to all the events surrounding him. Even though I know it may be frustrating to read a little, I also think that it is an accurate description of how a person who was put into such a position would think at those moments and the type of psychology that they would have. However, at the end of the first volume, his mentality and everything will have undergone a huge change, making it a lot more readable, and from then on, the story will stretch with many interpersonal relationships going on. For now, this is all I have to say about the book, and you may continue with your questions here. I will answer them if I can.
IDK why there are so much bad reviews. The only thing I wanted was a slightly overpowered mc. On chapter 41 and it's one of the best novels I have ever read. The is the first time I cried just by reading a novel
Author , I understand that the MC and FMC were meticulously set up, but how could their ,especially her family could just brand them as guilty without any apprant investigation in context of the world you yourself wrote. This is a magical and clearly cutthroat world where things like lust potion, mind control existing wouldn't raise anyone's eyebrow. Elara and Lucavion didn't seem to have any contact beforehand. Considering elara established noble character , it makes more sense to assume she wasn't at least consenting when she says so. Also dude was clearly vomiting again and out of it ,at least someone should have a susposcion of foul play this is assuming powerful duke cant even fanthom means to detect if someones been drugged. Literally everyone , their families, the lawmakers of the country and even the Mc and Fmc themselves, need to be braindead for this to work. I'm not saying they should become clean and lived happily ever after, I'm simply disappointed that zero effort was put to anything .
Bruh if you are going to write by using A.I. then make it less obvious. I am 43 chapters in, and it is painful how all the internal monologues are just repeated ideas in different wording. When other characters face off, like in chap 43, then it is obvious that an A.I. is narrating the emotions and dialogue. If you are not using A.I. then you are simply overdoing it - there are better ways to describe character emotions and development.
This story is really good in my opinion, The story is kind of slow in the beginning but after the 2-year time skip after chap 50 the mc develops in his character and also his strength the problems I have is that a few characters designs are kind of lacking with some characters that seem to be important for the future plot, And also the World building is kind of nice so far but currently since the story is just starting is can be improved upon
Reveal Spoiler the best part should be the transmission. nothing interesting happenes but besides the first chapter, there is literally no point in having it. it adds nothing to the story, zero twist. it just a basic medieval story about a fallen noble that was lied to. there is nothing wrong with that. but that what I signed up to read.
Characters seem extremely one dimensional, internal monologues of the main character seem written by AI, as "never give up", but really 0 motivations. Almost every other character is an after thought, as he somehow joins a team in the army, but you feel no attachment to them as there is never any personal connections or in-depth character development.
I can see that there potential bu the author just rushes throw thing Makin It impossible to get attached to character only at a surface leave. dialogue is boring and uninteresting. the author doesn't know how to create natural flowin conflict and events as they just forced into the story etc the masters identify and the hes end and back story , the isikai shi way is I there, there's alot of tell no showing in this story
Reveal Spoiler A typical Isekai kid gets put into a villain character and has no problems before getting transmigrated and then crime happens and blah blah no one believes the Mc he gets disowned and Banished to hell hole blah blah recover himself stables and works to get stronger and all that typical stuff I haven't read all 50 free chapters but I feel the generics stuff he gets forbidden power or something and nonsense continues to happen I bet while the true villains live there life up and get random chapter with there nonsense and also the fmc girl who also got framed hates him because she believes the person who ruined her whole life I do not understand that plot point to me make no sense. Reading the first 10 chapters was downright disappointing in the first chapters he gives his Opinion on the novel he got transported to and I took the world out of my mouth for this novel
Reveal Spoiler Authors username checks out. The book is very dark and also kind of frustrating to read. It is well-written though. I feel super bad for the mc and had to stop reading because the story is depressing.
The writing is good and all, I actually really like the background and story progression since it seems to stray from the op mc cliche; however, there are firstly, some fillers that I cannot understand why they're there other than to make the readers irritated. On top of that, the novel doesn't need the transmigration tag because for as long as I read, few dozens chapters in, you could've removed the transmigration tag and the introduction chapter, and it would be the exact same thing, like there would be no major differences whatsoever. The tag itself feels like a cheap attempt at clickbaiting that unfortunately worked, reading this novel, for me, was like having fishbone stuck in your throat-- Like I know it supposed to be a tragedy and all, I can perfectly comprehend that, but at least, AT LEAST, makes it so that the transmigrator is actually unique somewhat compared to the native denizens.
man!!! the story would have been perfect with some revenge but author made the MC too soft. ruined the story for me and what's the point of reincarnation when he no longer remembers his old memories
This novel is well written, the author focuses a lot on the development of the mc with a slow pace. I recommend reading it.
haven't read it yet but giving it five stars cause of the yandere tag 🫡 *will edit if it sucks.
It's kind of ridiculous that his family didn't believe him, nor gave him a chance and just the whole plot of the book in general is super depressing and unrealistic. I don't see us getting proper revenge anytime soon, and honestly , I don't really like plots like this, especially when the whole goal of the story is revenge and 100 chapters out currently kinda just seems like a money sink. But everyone has different tastes if you like it read it.
Reveal Spoiler So far, I love it and it is so fulfilling with each character that has background and not for the mc to just step on.
It’s pretty good. Usually stories like this start with the character getting sent to the “penitent” legion then there is a time skip and the mc shows back up mysterious and op to take revenge. It’s rare to see actual character development showing what the mc goes through in their exile. It is slow paced but as they say a house built on sand is washed away.
Author, This is best novel from your collection and story is also good with how our MC is getting strong by hard work and slowly. Consider yourself very lucky as I don't review and i am making exception for you...
Okay first of all the story is pretty cliche (I will not lie about that) but the story has a potential and if you read more you will realize that it is pretty good.[img=recommend] Note: I will agree with her sister that Reverse-Harem is much better than Harem.🤣
Reveal Spoiler Too depressing for me.. each chapter is just a consistent downer. Not that the novel is bad, on the contrary it’s actually quite good.
I’m writing this review after completing the first volume. Having read the author's previous work, I must say that he has improved significantly, and the writing feels much more mature. For some, the growth of the main character may seem slow, but honestly, it feels more realistic given the character's circumstances. Not much has happened yet, as this volume primarily serves as the foundation for the main story, but I’m still curious to see what comes next.
Writing quality is superb Updating stability nothing to say Story and character development. If there were tragedy and slow paced tags I won’t be frustrated 49 chapters in and mc is still canon fodder The frustration is just killing me Everyone seems to bully mc alone and despite his so called star devouring (spoiler) some rank 3 bozo is like heaven while he’s earth(apparently not as talented it’s made to be) If you like slow paced novels where mc is traumatized in more than 30 chapters while growing like a snail this book is for you
I may be biased due to reading the author other works (Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest) This is very good start. Still too early to give my full thoughts of the story but from knowing the author previous work I know I'm going to love this story. One thing I love what the author does is he takes his time with the main character development and power level. I am so tired of reading a op main character who barley worked hard to obtain their power. shattered innocents we see the mc struggle and I am so excited to see how he will prevail and get back at everyone who wronged him. Maybe I'm just odd but I like seeing a main character who we see starts at the bottom and crawl their way to the top. Overall, I'm quite excited to see how this story will unravel. i do hope the author will have the main character have guy friends (I do not mean Bl lol) Typically with stories with harems the mc only surrounded by women. They don't have guy friends if they do it's like comedy relief. I hope I explain that well like I want the mc having his own group his bros. I hope explained what I thought well this was my first time writing a review so if I made a mistake cut me some slack.
Bro, have you really given up on EROTIC RPG ??you took a new novel ,which you are going to update 1 chapter everyday . But you haven't updated a single chapter of erotic rpg for 6 month straight. Now you are treating it like middle child .
five star from me, cuz why not. i enjoyed both of authors previous works. all the best for this book also.
Hello, Author here. In this thread, I will clarify some questions regarding the start of the book, and you can treat it as a Q&A as well. Firstly, the novel will seem a little odd to you at the start since it starts differently. But, I must insist that you read the free chapters, the first volume, until the end and bear with it a little since it is just an introduction to the work. I know at the start of the novel, Lucavion doesn't start as your typical main character of such novels, which is something I intended since, at the start of the novel, the main character is 14 years old and mentally unstable due to all the events surrounding him. Even though I know it may be frustrating to read a little, I also think that it is an accurate description of how a person who was put into such a position would think at those moments and the type of psychology that they would have. However, at the end of the first volume, his mentality and everything will have undergone a huge change, making it a lot more readable, and from then on, the story will stretch with many interpersonal relationships going on. For now, this is all I have to say about the book, and you may continue with your questions here. I will answer them if I can.