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TVStranger

Quite the story and the only complaint tht I have is that this is no harm story. But I can respect that. It's handled very well. The pacing is not terrible though I'm a bit disappointed tht Deku didn't get the shield, of your gonna make a pseudo Captain America, give him a shield to practice getting used to.

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Heinro_Roodt

loved most of it but the super soldier stuff kinda pulled me out of it

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DRAVIDIAN

Read up to 54 and have nothing but praise, well done MC and characters with realistic growth. I’m hyped to see how far a true quirkless MC can go

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DaoistEUzTf1

Bro, and if you make one where the protagonist is reincarnated in DC with the powers of Maui from Moana, I mean he is a semi-god of the wind and the ocean and if you want you can give him his appearance just a little less bulky, it would be epic and it would be great see someone like him become a hero alongside the league

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Achraf2000

This story had huge potential but it was destroyed by the stupidity of the author. Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad

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2312_Haemsky_2312

i want to know what will happen if got world travel in marvel and meet with marvel tony with Melissa ..

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DaoistPfd13C

Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.

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Zekril

adding OC villain just to make a mc up to his toes. It just getting better but...I'll just wait.

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Michael_John_9185

it's good, like really fingerlicking good and I have a question, is saiki or whatever his name is meant to be like the long term villain for Tony or is he like a one off something and Tony would just build something to permanently takeaway his quirks

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Jaxon235

This fanfiction deserves five stars! A very great piece. It is written by Shadow so you 100% know its a masterpiece. It's a very great book worth spending time reading.

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Arcibo
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Iron man but instead of iron man it’s chunny supersoldier mary sue.

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JxstASyko

Bro, four chapters in and I’m DYING of laughter. Another piece of peak from Shadow

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BRIAN_SHOOTER_672

I started read it yesterday after it my attention. Definitely one of the best Iron Man X MHA Fiction i read so far πŸ‘β€οΈ

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octoberwind

Terrible story it reads like some comic book nerd wet dream there’s no cheat I don’t want to hear how intelligence and meta knowledge is a cheat the writing good tho and the world good

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Shady_Emad_

I should have known you were making a piece of art. And I didn't even read this yet. And I could see it's going to be beautiful. so keep up the good work, PLUS ULTRAAAAA!!!!!

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VamPyr00

Amazing story here, at least up to Chapter 48 (the current newest chapter). I very seldomly like 'morally good' characters but you have done a fine job with the MC by mixing in the personality traits of Tony Stark. The story itself might lack a bit of action sometimes but it's not so bad that I would call it a Slice of Life. Pairing is also a very good choice, though sometimes it's almost TOO wholesome. Thankfully, they are still young so it makes logical sense. At least Tony's massive ego/narcissism makes up for him being a virgin...for the most part. I was extremely doubtful about the story when you gave Deku OFA and helped power him up/gave him emotional support or whatever. I really don't like him, so seeing you waste so much screen time on him (more than Momo up till chapter 37/38, despite them LIVING with her) made me doubt the whole thing. Thankfully, around Chapter 38 or so he becomes a simple background character who only really made an appearance during the USJ fight to 'save' Melissa from Shigaraki's sneak attack. I put that in quotes because she wasn't ACTUALLY in danger either way. Aside from that, the only glaring flaw in the story so far was the insane power-up and plot armor given to Kurogiri during the USJ incident. This can mostly just be chalked up to not properly studying his quirk before writing the fight scenes. You basically gave the dude Limitless: Infinity with that final barrier move! Hopefully that will be the only glaring flaw or villain plot armor scenario in the future. Other than those things, it was an amazing story so keep up the good work!

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NO_YURI_000

I have Just one complain why does malesia FL feels much more better hero then Tony MC …. Also MC got nothing unique except influenceal and rich background …. If he wants to be no1 hero don’t his gf is his Rival of short ?ΒΏ

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Omar_Alflh

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trueidiocy_577

Best MHA fic I've ever read, in terms of iron man hype? Maybe top 2 or maybe that's just my marvel bias. Overall, this is a talented author and it's absolutely recommended to try reading this

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gustavo_hhhhdsd

I read up to chapter 12 and I'm going to give my humble opinion - first the protagonist, he's well done (very similar to Tony Strak himself) the jokes and how he speaks is really faithful and funny - second point, the drama/conversation with others characters need improvements, an example is (spoiler below) the death of his butler was quite embarrassing (the drama was poorly done and because of that it was embarrassing to read) and finally - the third and final point, I skipped a bit work to see his dialogue with the UA students (I was curious) and unfortunately I realized that this work suffers the same problem as many others, following the original work too much, if you've read any of MHA's FanFiction you already know the conversations that always There is a quirk test (which always follows the same as the anime) this work does the same, the protagonist talks to the students on a random topic and then the dialogue is the same as in the anime (the presence of the protagonist doesn't change at all), and that tells me Does it make you wonder if everything will continue to follow the anime in the future?

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ShadowlessMoon

Ok i am a huge Iron-Man fan. So i hope to see the one quality i think makes Tony the best hero... his ability to learn from his mistakes and adapt to them. Author hear me out make him make mistakes make him learn make him.... evolve. Also thanks for bringing your idea (even if its not excactly what i am looking for) forth for us to read.

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Glebby_Boi

What a great novel!! I mean come on!! The way the MC is depicted is done perfectly, combining Stark’s character with an addition of a unique twist. Truly well executed!

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Tembio
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its great, i need more. love the characters and the chemistry between tony and melissa (FL)

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TVStranger

Quite the story and the only complaint tht I have is that this is no harm story. But I can respect that. It's handled very well. The pacing is not terrible though I'm a bit disappointed tht Deku didn't get the shield, of your gonna make a pseudo Captain America, give him a shield to practice getting used to.

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Heinro_Roodt

loved most of it but the super soldier stuff kinda pulled me out of it

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DRAVIDIAN

Read up to 54 and have nothing but praise, well done MC and characters with realistic growth. I’m hyped to see how far a true quirkless MC can go

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DaoistEUzTf1

Bro, and if you make one where the protagonist is reincarnated in DC with the powers of Maui from Moana, I mean he is a semi-god of the wind and the ocean and if you want you can give him his appearance just a little less bulky, it would be epic and it would be great see someone like him become a hero alongside the league

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Achraf2000

This story had huge potential but it was destroyed by the stupidity of the author. Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad Bad

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2312_Haemsky_2312

i want to know what will happen if got world travel in marvel and meet with marvel tony with Melissa ..

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DaoistPfd13C

Hello, author, tell me, have you thought about the story in which Himiko Toga teamed up with the Carnage symbiote? Before the events of the original series, she could merge with him and hunt people, and at the same time remained a pretty girl at school for everyone.

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Zekril

adding OC villain just to make a mc up to his toes. It just getting better but...I'll just wait.

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Michael_John_9185

it's good, like really fingerlicking good and I have a question, is saiki or whatever his name is meant to be like the long term villain for Tony or is he like a one off something and Tony would just build something to permanently takeaway his quirks

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Jaxon235

This fanfiction deserves five stars! A very great piece. It is written by Shadow so you 100% know its a masterpiece. It's a very great book worth spending time reading.

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Arcibo
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Iron man but instead of iron man it’s chunny supersoldier mary sue.

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JxstASyko

Bro, four chapters in and I’m DYING of laughter. Another piece of peak from Shadow

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BRIAN_SHOOTER_672

I started read it yesterday after it my attention. Definitely one of the best Iron Man X MHA Fiction i read so far πŸ‘β€οΈ

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octoberwind

Terrible story it reads like some comic book nerd wet dream there’s no cheat I don’t want to hear how intelligence and meta knowledge is a cheat the writing good tho and the world good

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Shady_Emad_

I should have known you were making a piece of art. And I didn't even read this yet. And I could see it's going to be beautiful. so keep up the good work, PLUS ULTRAAAAA!!!!!

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VamPyr00

Amazing story here, at least up to Chapter 48 (the current newest chapter). I very seldomly like 'morally good' characters but you have done a fine job with the MC by mixing in the personality traits of Tony Stark. The story itself might lack a bit of action sometimes but it's not so bad that I would call it a Slice of Life. Pairing is also a very good choice, though sometimes it's almost TOO wholesome. Thankfully, they are still young so it makes logical sense. At least Tony's massive ego/narcissism makes up for him being a virgin...for the most part. I was extremely doubtful about the story when you gave Deku OFA and helped power him up/gave him emotional support or whatever. I really don't like him, so seeing you waste so much screen time on him (more than Momo up till chapter 37/38, despite them LIVING with her) made me doubt the whole thing. Thankfully, around Chapter 38 or so he becomes a simple background character who only really made an appearance during the USJ fight to 'save' Melissa from Shigaraki's sneak attack. I put that in quotes because she wasn't ACTUALLY in danger either way. Aside from that, the only glaring flaw in the story so far was the insane power-up and plot armor given to Kurogiri during the USJ incident. This can mostly just be chalked up to not properly studying his quirk before writing the fight scenes. You basically gave the dude Limitless: Infinity with that final barrier move! Hopefully that will be the only glaring flaw or villain plot armor scenario in the future. Other than those things, it was an amazing story so keep up the good work!

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NO_YURI_000

I have Just one complain why does malesia FL feels much more better hero then Tony MC …. Also MC got nothing unique except influenceal and rich background …. If he wants to be no1 hero don’t his gf is his Rival of short ?ΒΏ

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Omar_Alflh

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trueidiocy_577

Best MHA fic I've ever read, in terms of iron man hype? Maybe top 2 or maybe that's just my marvel bias. Overall, this is a talented author and it's absolutely recommended to try reading this

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gustavo_hhhhdsd

I read up to chapter 12 and I'm going to give my humble opinion - first the protagonist, he's well done (very similar to Tony Strak himself) the jokes and how he speaks is really faithful and funny - second point, the drama/conversation with others characters need improvements, an example is (spoiler below) the death of his butler was quite embarrassing (the drama was poorly done and because of that it was embarrassing to read) and finally - the third and final point, I skipped a bit work to see his dialogue with the UA students (I was curious) and unfortunately I realized that this work suffers the same problem as many others, following the original work too much, if you've read any of MHA's FanFiction you already know the conversations that always There is a quirk test (which always follows the same as the anime) this work does the same, the protagonist talks to the students on a random topic and then the dialogue is the same as in the anime (the presence of the protagonist doesn't change at all), and that tells me Does it make you wonder if everything will continue to follow the anime in the future?

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ShadowlessMoon

Ok i am a huge Iron-Man fan. So i hope to see the one quality i think makes Tony the best hero... his ability to learn from his mistakes and adapt to them. Author hear me out make him make mistakes make him learn make him.... evolve. Also thanks for bringing your idea (even if its not excactly what i am looking for) forth for us to read.

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Glebby_Boi

What a great novel!! I mean come on!! The way the MC is depicted is done perfectly, combining Stark’s character with an addition of a unique twist. Truly well executed!

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Tembio
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its great, i need more. love the characters and the chemistry between tony and melissa (FL)

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