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Yo, I am here to tell you that this story is peak...how can I say that? Uhhhh..then let me point out some things. 1- the main character is so good. He is not your some beta MC. He have a brain, he can think surprisingly, and he knows how to handle situations, and he have a really really good humor 2-now we are talking about comedy then let me say the comedy of this novel is so peak there are times when I just laugh continuously for minutes and the author might be freaky sometimes while writing which is peak 3- Now when we are talking about writing then it's good like really really good grammar is good author usually write in 3rd pov which is i prefer generally and tbh writing is so good that it doesn't seem like the writing of an amateur author NOW...AUTHOR LISTEN TO ME IF YOU DROP THIS NOVEL ISTG…… I THINK YOU KNOW WHAT I WILL DO So conclusion of this yapping is to read this novel it's peak
We've Been Tricked, We've Been Backstabbed and We've Been, Quite Possibly, Bamboozled. FailedWriter101? My. Foot. So yeah, I stated the author was just a new author in my previous review. And I wasn't exactly wrong. But new facts have come to light that has made me review my opinion. The level of improvement this author has shown cannot be explained unless he is a 1000yr old master who is regaining his abilities after a long period of rest. The novel has shown such a stark improvement in the past month or so that I am left bewildered. So yeah, I stated this was a novel with good potential in my previous review. But so were 100s of other extra novels I have seen fail. But contrary to his pen name, this author has been an enormous success. The rate at which his popularity shot up is comparable to how well Extra's Descent did at its early stages. Could this novel be the second coming of ED(Extra's Descent)? Or wait, THIS NOVEL IS ED(Extra's Death). Oh my, oh my, do I smell a connection here? Mayhaps, mayhaps. Coincidence, I think NOT. Ahem, half-baked half-high detective stuff aside, lets move on to the novel. The writing quality has always been good, and it has only improved from the early chaps. In terms of update stability, the author is a beast of writing, maybe on magecrafter levels but he did manage to reach the 100 chapter mark in just a little over a month of beginning to write. That is plenty commendable in my humble opinion. In terms of story development and world background, top notch, as always. From the very beginning it was very clear that the author has put much thought into these aspects. Moving on to the most important factor, character design. The extra trope is a washed and repeated trope on this platform. I have read 100s of novels of the theme, and the one of the, if not the only part that always stays as the deciding factor whether or not an extra novel succeeds is always the character designs. AND THIS NOVEL EXCELS AT THIS. Hot mommy? Check. Hot daughter of hot mommy who is a senior at the academy? Check. Hot OP girl from the same year? Check.(best girl btw) Wait, wait, wait. Just because I only listed the female characters doesn't mean this novel is a harem or that there are no important male characters. It's just that I focus on the female characters more. The male characters well, uhh, they exist. They... do stuff?(icl, i havent even looked at their character arts). At any case, they are important to the plot and are good characters too(i am pretty sure). CONCLUSION: So, well, yeah, that's about it. If you are into novels of this type(with extras, and weak to strong mc, and academy arcs), I would 10/10 rec this to you. But if you are here because you are into mythos, then well, there hasn't been much to see for now. I mean, we haven't even seen hades yet and that guy's name is a part of the novel's name. So in the end whether or not you will like this novel depends on what you are looking for. One thing I can assure you though is the fact that you won't dislike this novel even if it isn't what you want to read. Finally, I would like to mention(threaten) the author by saying that I will [REDACTED] his ahh with my [REDACTED] if Morrigan di Montaigne ain't the fml.
I Absolutely love everything about this novel, i liked the comedy, the serious moments, how mc actually has a personality and all characters are alive, only down side is there is alot of spelling mistakes at the first chapters but otherwise this is a Peak novel.
Not my cup of tea even though I like transmigration genre as a whole. Characters act in a naive brain dead manner.
I’m really just a sucker for stories like this & author itched my spot. Thank you[img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
A really good novel with a good to excellent hero and characters, and a really funny comedy. If I had the money, I would give it to you and continue like this
Really good story with great characters and a great storyline. can't wait to see where this story goes
I have read till 86 chapters, and I must say I cannot find anything to criticize about. The skills and abilities of the mc is pretty cool but what I liked the most about him is his character. What we have here isn't a 'good guy' or a typical 'villanous emo', it's pretty balanced. He is calculative, even if he doesn't show openly and quite mature. Pretty likable character I must say, along with the other characters. As for the story, it's very interesting and keeps getting better. It made me both giggle and gave me goosepbumps. Give it a try, you will like it 👍
Looks like someone came back from the dead yeah? 1.Anyways the novel is some peak lvl compared to the usual 'extra' novels u find on wn these days . 2.There's no harem in it so a plus point . 3.The MC is sensible enough and not like your average beta and brain-dead MCs . 4.There are some potential fls but i support the queen . . . . (AUTHOR DO NOTE IF SHE'S NOT THE FL IMMA LEAK SOME THINGS HERE)🤓
The story isn’t bad but the loss of emotion shit will become a huge issue later so pls address that and the way he spends more time in the underworld than the academy it’s getting annoying cuz your delaying character development. By the way is Felix a girl or a boy pls don’t say both I need a definite answer, it would be weird if the mc or Arthur got with him if he was both or is constantly jumping genders so just keep him in one most of the time. One more thing is morrigaine or the princess or her mom the fl I wouldn’t mind if it was all three honestly. Pls answer my questions.
Read all the free chapters and it has been an enjoyable read, I redownloaded webnovel just to rate this novel. I completely agree with The_Last_Native’s review, it’s gotta be Elizabeth. Well, I will be stacking more chapters for now. Keep up the good work author!
I read up until the point where Neo made up the story about having a baby with Amelia. Overall, I liked the story—there’s great depth and emotion that really draws you in, which is exactly what I look for in a book. However, I’ll wait to pick it back up when someone confirms who the real female lead is. Hopefully, it’s not Amelia, because we all know it should be Elizabeth!
Just read it .................................................................................................................................................................................
The grammar could improve a bit, but the random unexpected twists and the humor had me from start to finish. I enjoyed it a lot, keep it up, author!
the author is a failure .He failed to write a horrible novel, will see if this changes in the future
Nice novel based on the extra theme . I hope that the author continues it with regular update
Me parece innovadora, ya que crea tensión y expectativa , como una narrativa ilegible te atrae la naturalidad de los personajes , así como el deseo del protagonista de volverse fuerte para protegerse de un mundo peligroso sin saber el destino que al mismo le espera, creo que es un trabajo que satisfactorio que tiene cabida para un buen desarrollo posterior ya que sin ofender estoy casando de que me salga Zeus o sus hijos hasta en la sopa, es una historia refrescante que envuelve uno de mis Dios favoritos Hades, esperando sus futuras interacciones.
Started this with 0 expectations but gotta say, I am pleasantly surprised. At the very least, the idea behind the novel is good. And from what I can see this novel doesn't follow the conventional power systems. The world background is well thought out, this much is clear in just 10 chapters. It is not without its bad points tho. I feel like for a grim reaper that is supposed to be very high ranking, they were tricked by the MC too easily. Of course, its not like the MC lied of something. In fact, what he said made sense. But I personally still feel it would have been better with a more apparent sense of tension. But well, seeing as how this is the author's first time writing I am sure he(?) will learn from his mistakes and improve in no time. Another thing I would like to note is that the covers are all from pinterest and instagram. I would suggest switching to AI arts as some readers would feel weirded out but it. Personally, I don't mind the covers but I do know of people who doesn't like it.
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good novel but don't make it very dark and don't make like cultivation novels that give the headache make the mc overpowered like the fan fiction like energy in dc
Uh, I want to press my like, yeah, I wanna press my I want a green light, I wanna be like I wanna press my line, yeah I wanna take that ride, yeah I'm gonna press my line I want a green light, I wanna be like, I wanna press my— Mama dearest, spare your feelings I'm relivin' moments, peelin' more residual I can buy the buildin', burn the buildin' Take your b *** h, rebuild the buildin' just to f ** k some more I can justify my love for ya And touch the sky for God to stop debating war Put the p *** y on a pedestal (Ayy) Put the p *** y on a high horse That p *** y to die for That p *** y to die for Peter Piper picked a pepper So I could pick your brain and put your heart together We depart the shady parts and party hard The diamonds yours, the coupe forever My best shot just might sh ** t forever like (Brr)
Yo, I am here to tell you that this story is peak...how can I say that? Uhhhh..then let me point out some things. 1- the main character is so good. He is not your some beta MC. He have a brain, he can think surprisingly, and he knows how to handle situations, and he have a really really good humor 2-now we are talking about comedy then let me say the comedy of this novel is so peak there are times when I just laugh continuously for minutes and the author might be freaky sometimes while writing which is peak 3- Now when we are talking about writing then it's good like really really good grammar is good author usually write in 3rd pov which is i prefer generally and tbh writing is so good that it doesn't seem like the writing of an amateur author NOW...AUTHOR LISTEN TO ME IF YOU DROP THIS NOVEL ISTG…… I THINK YOU KNOW WHAT I WILL DO So conclusion of this yapping is to read this novel it's peak
We've Been Tricked, We've Been Backstabbed and We've Been, Quite Possibly, Bamboozled. FailedWriter101? My. Foot. So yeah, I stated the author was just a new author in my previous review. And I wasn't exactly wrong. But new facts have come to light that has made me review my opinion. The level of improvement this author has shown cannot be explained unless he is a 1000yr old master who is regaining his abilities after a long period of rest. The novel has shown such a stark improvement in the past month or so that I am left bewildered. So yeah, I stated this was a novel with good potential in my previous review. But so were 100s of other extra novels I have seen fail. But contrary to his pen name, this author has been an enormous success. The rate at which his popularity shot up is comparable to how well Extra's Descent did at its early stages. Could this novel be the second coming of ED(Extra's Descent)? Or wait, THIS NOVEL IS ED(Extra's Death). Oh my, oh my, do I smell a connection here? Mayhaps, mayhaps. Coincidence, I think NOT. Ahem, half-baked half-high detective stuff aside, lets move on to the novel. The writing quality has always been good, and it has only improved from the early chaps. In terms of update stability, the author is a beast of writing, maybe on magecrafter levels but he did manage to reach the 100 chapter mark in just a little over a month of beginning to write. That is plenty commendable in my humble opinion. In terms of story development and world background, top notch, as always. From the very beginning it was very clear that the author has put much thought into these aspects. Moving on to the most important factor, character design. The extra trope is a washed and repeated trope on this platform. I have read 100s of novels of the theme, and the one of the, if not the only part that always stays as the deciding factor whether or not an extra novel succeeds is always the character designs. AND THIS NOVEL EXCELS AT THIS. Hot mommy? Check. Hot daughter of hot mommy who is a senior at the academy? Check. Hot OP girl from the same year? Check.(best girl btw) Wait, wait, wait. Just because I only listed the female characters doesn't mean this novel is a harem or that there are no important male characters. It's just that I focus on the female characters more. The male characters well, uhh, they exist. They... do stuff?(icl, i havent even looked at their character arts). At any case, they are important to the plot and are good characters too(i am pretty sure). CONCLUSION: So, well, yeah, that's about it. If you are into novels of this type(with extras, and weak to strong mc, and academy arcs), I would 10/10 rec this to you. But if you are here because you are into mythos, then well, there hasn't been much to see for now. I mean, we haven't even seen hades yet and that guy's name is a part of the novel's name. So in the end whether or not you will like this novel depends on what you are looking for. One thing I can assure you though is the fact that you won't dislike this novel even if it isn't what you want to read. Finally, I would like to mention(threaten) the author by saying that I will [REDACTED] his ahh with my [REDACTED] if Morrigan di Montaigne ain't the fml.
I Absolutely love everything about this novel, i liked the comedy, the serious moments, how mc actually has a personality and all characters are alive, only down side is there is alot of spelling mistakes at the first chapters but otherwise this is a Peak novel.
Not my cup of tea even though I like transmigration genre as a whole. Characters act in a naive brain dead manner.
I’m really just a sucker for stories like this & author itched my spot. Thank you[img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
A really good novel with a good to excellent hero and characters, and a really funny comedy. If I had the money, I would give it to you and continue like this
Really good story with great characters and a great storyline. can't wait to see where this story goes
I have read till 86 chapters, and I must say I cannot find anything to criticize about. The skills and abilities of the mc is pretty cool but what I liked the most about him is his character. What we have here isn't a 'good guy' or a typical 'villanous emo', it's pretty balanced. He is calculative, even if he doesn't show openly and quite mature. Pretty likable character I must say, along with the other characters. As for the story, it's very interesting and keeps getting better. It made me both giggle and gave me goosepbumps. Give it a try, you will like it 👍
Looks like someone came back from the dead yeah? 1.Anyways the novel is some peak lvl compared to the usual 'extra' novels u find on wn these days . 2.There's no harem in it so a plus point . 3.The MC is sensible enough and not like your average beta and brain-dead MCs . 4.There are some potential fls but i support the queen . . . . (AUTHOR DO NOTE IF SHE'S NOT THE FL IMMA LEAK SOME THINGS HERE)🤓
The story isn’t bad but the loss of emotion shit will become a huge issue later so pls address that and the way he spends more time in the underworld than the academy it’s getting annoying cuz your delaying character development. By the way is Felix a girl or a boy pls don’t say both I need a definite answer, it would be weird if the mc or Arthur got with him if he was both or is constantly jumping genders so just keep him in one most of the time. One more thing is morrigaine or the princess or her mom the fl I wouldn’t mind if it was all three honestly. Pls answer my questions.
Read all the free chapters and it has been an enjoyable read, I redownloaded webnovel just to rate this novel. I completely agree with The_Last_Native’s review, it’s gotta be Elizabeth. Well, I will be stacking more chapters for now. Keep up the good work author!
I read up until the point where Neo made up the story about having a baby with Amelia. Overall, I liked the story—there’s great depth and emotion that really draws you in, which is exactly what I look for in a book. However, I’ll wait to pick it back up when someone confirms who the real female lead is. Hopefully, it’s not Amelia, because we all know it should be Elizabeth!
Just read it .................................................................................................................................................................................
The grammar could improve a bit, but the random unexpected twists and the humor had me from start to finish. I enjoyed it a lot, keep it up, author!
the author is a failure .He failed to write a horrible novel, will see if this changes in the future
Nice novel based on the extra theme . I hope that the author continues it with regular update
Me parece innovadora, ya que crea tensión y expectativa , como una narrativa ilegible te atrae la naturalidad de los personajes , así como el deseo del protagonista de volverse fuerte para protegerse de un mundo peligroso sin saber el destino que al mismo le espera, creo que es un trabajo que satisfactorio que tiene cabida para un buen desarrollo posterior ya que sin ofender estoy casando de que me salga Zeus o sus hijos hasta en la sopa, es una historia refrescante que envuelve uno de mis Dios favoritos Hades, esperando sus futuras interacciones.
Started this with 0 expectations but gotta say, I am pleasantly surprised. At the very least, the idea behind the novel is good. And from what I can see this novel doesn't follow the conventional power systems. The world background is well thought out, this much is clear in just 10 chapters. It is not without its bad points tho. I feel like for a grim reaper that is supposed to be very high ranking, they were tricked by the MC too easily. Of course, its not like the MC lied of something. In fact, what he said made sense. But I personally still feel it would have been better with a more apparent sense of tension. But well, seeing as how this is the author's first time writing I am sure he(?) will learn from his mistakes and improve in no time. Another thing I would like to note is that the covers are all from pinterest and instagram. I would suggest switching to AI arts as some readers would feel weirded out but it. Personally, I don't mind the covers but I do know of people who doesn't like it.
Reveal Spoiler good novel but don't make it very dark and don't make like cultivation novels that give the headache make the mc overpowered like the fan fiction like energy in dc
Uh, I want to press my like, yeah, I wanna press my I want a green light, I wanna be like I wanna press my line, yeah I wanna take that ride, yeah I'm gonna press my line I want a green light, I wanna be like, I wanna press my— Mama dearest, spare your feelings I'm relivin' moments, peelin' more residual I can buy the buildin', burn the buildin' Take your b *** h, rebuild the buildin' just to f ** k some more I can justify my love for ya And touch the sky for God to stop debating war Put the p *** y on a pedestal (Ayy) Put the p *** y on a high horse That p *** y to die for That p *** y to die for Peter Piper picked a pepper So I could pick your brain and put your heart together We depart the shady parts and party hard The diamonds yours, the coupe forever My best shot just might sh ** t forever like (Brr)