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the mc is so submissive it cause me high blood because of his personality, good story but hays bye. .. .. .. . .. .
Let me be the tenth. The story is good and entertaining. You chose a good novel to translate. I just wish you would release more episodes, because they are short and leave you wanting more.
The story actually did good for something that gives the vibes of a typical director novel. Basically my rating for this Translation: 4.4 Story development: 4.7 Character design: (it's just like our real world with just people that have the same exact face and name(others have different names) of various anime characters of nasuverse) Update stability: 5 (it's 1 chapter per day) Side comments: I just hate the way the mc(current chapter) thinks of changing the 3 kings banquet talk about kingship( Fate/Zero) I understand that he's doing it for politics... But man do I feel petty about it.
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It's so good if you just don't mind riding some Chinese name or reference. The story is good
I think this is a good book, it has potential. But I think you need to focus more. I see there are still Chinese characters in this book and everything is fine. . . .
I don't know how to write ✍️ a review But I don't know how many chapters so that it will be TYPE MOON Fate Movie 🎥😔
I give this fanfiction 2.5 stars only because of the MC. Pure Japanese MC (who is passive in relationships, but wants to have a harem). Apart from the character of the MC, I can safely give it 4.5
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If you could endure the wordcount of this fic then this is good. No seriously, this fic explain something by using examples, quotes from some chinese poems, reference and they're explaining about the economy... it makes me feel like I'm reading a thesis honestly.
I was completely absorbed in your story, it’s cinematic and emotionally charged in all the right ways. The atmosphere you build is incredible. As an artist who takes commissions on comic/webtoon adaptation, I couldn’t help but imagine how visually stunning it could be. Every scene feels storyboarded already. If that interests you, I’d love to talk on Instagram (@eve_verse_) or Discord (bennett_lol).
the mc is so submissive it cause me high blood because of his personality, good story but hays bye. .. .. .. . .. .
Let me be the tenth. The story is good and entertaining. You chose a good novel to translate. I just wish you would release more episodes, because they are short and leave you wanting more.
The story actually did good for something that gives the vibes of a typical director novel. Basically my rating for this Translation: 4.4 Story development: 4.7 Character design: (it's just like our real world with just people that have the same exact face and name(others have different names) of various anime characters of nasuverse) Update stability: 5 (it's 1 chapter per day) Side comments: I just hate the way the mc(current chapter) thinks of changing the 3 kings banquet talk about kingship( Fate/Zero) I understand that he's doing it for politics... But man do I feel petty about it.
Reveal Spoiler It's so good if you just don't mind riding some Chinese name or reference. The story is good
I think this is a good book, it has potential. But I think you need to focus more. I see there are still Chinese characters in this book and everything is fine. . . .
I don't know how to write ✍️ a review But I don't know how many chapters so that it will be TYPE MOON Fate Movie 🎥😔
I give this fanfiction 2.5 stars only because of the MC. Pure Japanese MC (who is passive in relationships, but wants to have a harem). Apart from the character of the MC, I can safely give it 4.5
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If you could endure the wordcount of this fic then this is good. No seriously, this fic explain something by using examples, quotes from some chinese poems, reference and they're explaining about the economy... it makes me feel like I'm reading a thesis honestly.
I was completely absorbed in your story, it’s cinematic and emotionally charged in all the right ways. The atmosphere you build is incredible. As an artist who takes commissions on comic/webtoon adaptation, I couldn’t help but imagine how visually stunning it could be. Every scene feels storyboarded already. If that interests you, I’d love to talk on Instagram (@eve_verse_) or Discord (bennett_lol).