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Trash não existe história aqui só lixo completo..............................................................................................................................................
It’s cringe, boring.. I couldn’t keep reading . To top it off, there are major and minor inconsistencies every chapter. Clearly no proof reading was done. Finally, it doesn’t feel authentic. I don’t want to discredit or demotivate an author but this is not a great novel. Maybe the author could restart if they are serious about their novel.
I love Supernatural stories, especially vampires and werewolves. So I was very intrigued. Sadly, it turned out to be a bad AI story with small fixes. I would suggest that the author should take the stuff the AI generated and rewrite it to his own story. If not, then I hope he has fun with it anyway.
so goood ………………………………..……………………….……………………….……………………….……………………….………………………………..……………………….……………………….……………………….……………………….………………………………..……………………….……………………….……………………….……………………….………………………………..……………………….……………………….……………………….……………………….
The writing is actually quite good. My only gripe with it is that this is a system story, but the author doesn't keep good track of what the system says. The system is completely arbitrary because it changes abruptly to suit the author's needs. Example; In one chapter, MC has 220 gold, and in the next chapter, MC has almost 100 gold but doesn't explain what happened. Also, MC's stats are not Consistent, sometimes he has 17 In a stat, sometimes he has 10 in the same stat.
I get five to all for the great idea but the structure of the story could use some work
The system is just a crutch for word count, it's also inconsistent and don't bring anything to the story since anything it could give, he could simply get by being a werewolf. So the system is just a middleman that hostage what already supposed to be MC's. MC is too stupid, he got one job, it's to survive. He has no relationship with anyone, so there's no point on going out of his way to meet the cast. Story is pointless, just watch the series again or just rewatcj s1 e1-2 to get your TVD fix. 1.4 stars might seem harsh, but I don't see any once of effort or afterthought on this trash.
I wanted to read a story about werewolves, but so far the protagonist hasn't become one.
Really good start just rewatch the series and rewrite from Chap. 3 onwards don't fret about AI, just remember to paint it over in your own words. Good luck.
This is just not good I feel like this was written by ChatGPT or some other AI tool but this is just bad [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Don’t even bother this is trash Nothing to gain here AI generated and senseless stupidity only
I thought it would be a fun read but I don’t agree with a lot of the MC’s choices. MC should not be approaching the main cast AT ALL!!! If he wants to survive he needs to GTFO of mystic falls. Or at least stay away from the main cast. It really isn’t that hard.
The story has many inconsistencies with each chapter that is added the interaction between characters seems empty without feeling That and the fact that from one chapter to another he has X amount of points and then he has less and less is unreasonable, plus suddenly he finds a prophecy and automatically says that it is about him. Without prior research
Why? what is the goddamn point of putting a system into the Vampire Diaries Universe? Why can't you just make a character who struggles with his werewolf curse and is constantly finding ways to improve that, even resorting to drastic and sometimes evil methods?
for me personally the only thing that brings it down is the confusing system where it changes every chapter
negative point - AI, research on the story he already knows... - empty characters. ah and not being afraid of damon, is by far the dumbest thing in this fanfic. positive point - a system with the possibility of having maybe the spider sense, haki, ban's immortality..., not starting directly as a vampire is a bold choice.
Cara sinceramente o autor é muito prolixo fica enfeitando demais as situações torna a leitura cansativa, e também a interação com outros personagens ficou muito forçada. Mas desejo boa sorte pro autor, não gosta muito do tipo de escrita dele mas pra quem gosta de boa leitura. 4 estrelas para apoiar o autor.
Wolfshit, not even bulllshit can save this dogshit of a shitshow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. In your next FANFIC Atleast try to make it make sense and use common sense with LOGIC rather than AI mechanical sense without logic.!!!!!!!!!!
Trash não existe história aqui só lixo completo..............................................................................................................................................
It’s cringe, boring.. I couldn’t keep reading . To top it off, there are major and minor inconsistencies every chapter. Clearly no proof reading was done. Finally, it doesn’t feel authentic. I don’t want to discredit or demotivate an author but this is not a great novel. Maybe the author could restart if they are serious about their novel.
I love Supernatural stories, especially vampires and werewolves. So I was very intrigued. Sadly, it turned out to be a bad AI story with small fixes. I would suggest that the author should take the stuff the AI generated and rewrite it to his own story. If not, then I hope he has fun with it anyway.
so goood ………………………………..……………………….……………………….……………………….……………………….………………………………..……………………….……………………….……………………….……………………….………………………………..……………………….……………………….……………………….……………………….………………………………..……………………….……………………….……………………….……………………….
The writing is actually quite good. My only gripe with it is that this is a system story, but the author doesn't keep good track of what the system says. The system is completely arbitrary because it changes abruptly to suit the author's needs. Example; In one chapter, MC has 220 gold, and in the next chapter, MC has almost 100 gold but doesn't explain what happened. Also, MC's stats are not Consistent, sometimes he has 17 In a stat, sometimes he has 10 in the same stat.
I get five to all for the great idea but the structure of the story could use some work
The system is just a crutch for word count, it's also inconsistent and don't bring anything to the story since anything it could give, he could simply get by being a werewolf. So the system is just a middleman that hostage what already supposed to be MC's. MC is too stupid, he got one job, it's to survive. He has no relationship with anyone, so there's no point on going out of his way to meet the cast. Story is pointless, just watch the series again or just rewatcj s1 e1-2 to get your TVD fix. 1.4 stars might seem harsh, but I don't see any once of effort or afterthought on this trash.
I wanted to read a story about werewolves, but so far the protagonist hasn't become one.
Really good start just rewatch the series and rewrite from Chap. 3 onwards don't fret about AI, just remember to paint it over in your own words. Good luck.
This is just not good I feel like this was written by ChatGPT or some other AI tool but this is just bad [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
Don’t even bother this is trash Nothing to gain here AI generated and senseless stupidity only
I thought it would be a fun read but I don’t agree with a lot of the MC’s choices. MC should not be approaching the main cast AT ALL!!! If he wants to survive he needs to GTFO of mystic falls. Or at least stay away from the main cast. It really isn’t that hard.
The story has many inconsistencies with each chapter that is added the interaction between characters seems empty without feeling That and the fact that from one chapter to another he has X amount of points and then he has less and less is unreasonable, plus suddenly he finds a prophecy and automatically says that it is about him. Without prior research
Why? what is the goddamn point of putting a system into the Vampire Diaries Universe? Why can't you just make a character who struggles with his werewolf curse and is constantly finding ways to improve that, even resorting to drastic and sometimes evil methods?
for me personally the only thing that brings it down is the confusing system where it changes every chapter
negative point - AI, research on the story he already knows... - empty characters. ah and not being afraid of damon, is by far the dumbest thing in this fanfic. positive point - a system with the possibility of having maybe the spider sense, haki, ban's immortality..., not starting directly as a vampire is a bold choice.
Cara sinceramente o autor é muito prolixo fica enfeitando demais as situações torna a leitura cansativa, e também a interação com outros personagens ficou muito forçada. Mas desejo boa sorte pro autor, não gosta muito do tipo de escrita dele mas pra quem gosta de boa leitura. 4 estrelas para apoiar o autor.
Wolfshit, not even bulllshit can save this dogshit of a shitshow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! P.S. In your next FANFIC Atleast try to make it make sense and use common sense with LOGIC rather than AI mechanical sense without logic.!!!!!!!!!!