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(Excuse my bad writing here) The most recent chapter has fully captured me. Maybe its because I’ve been on here for so long (about 6-7 years), so I’ve seen and read quite a bit. I can honestly say tho that I love this fic. Hers some of the reasons. Pros: 1. Pacing is amazing. It’s not rushe but it’s also not unbearably slow. 2. Dialogue isn’t stilted, they communicate like actual human beings. 3. The fact I can tell who is speaking. POV changes are clear ( the bar really is low if this is a pro btw) ( also this isn’t shade at this author it’s for the others) 4. Grammer I can’t tell because I read Mtl so literally anything would do at this point. Couldn’t come up with any more reasons to glaze the author 😂 Cons: 1. The fact that I found this fic so early. Thats my only problem. 2. The fic has a lot of potential. This is actually con for me, mainly because I’ve seen way to many authors have amazing ideas, with an amazing story but they get burnt out. I’d hate to see it happen but my heart has been broken way to many times for the me to keep my hopes up. Highly recommended after few more chapters tho to binge it all at once. So even if it gets dropped, I’ll still be happy. Thanks again for this wonderful work Gloryhunter
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Как же бесят клоуны-авторы, которые не читали ни манги и не изучали материалы вселенной «Наруто». Автор этого фанфика на полном серьёзе, не знает, что Цунаде с печатью поднимает десятки тысяч тонн, и без печати сила на подъем будет очень огромной, как минимум тысяча тонн. Скорость у нее также очень высокая, где-то под двузначные числа Маха. А про способности можно промолчать. И все равно Цунаде будет не самой сильной во вселенной «Марвел» из-за того, что она не может войти в режим Шести Мудрецов. Да и если честно, автор не знает лора и самой вселенной «Марвел». На этом всё.
You should rest, when you're more refreshed you'll post again, honestly, it's better that you're well than constantly updating. Ps: I loved it so far, I just want to know who Emma's date is XD.
Ich liebe Marvel fanfiction und habe schon einige gelesen, auch solche wo die Hauptperson mit Hilfe eines Systems alle möglichen Belohnungen und Kräfte bekommt. Die meisten dieser fanfiction haben das Problem dass die Charaktere irgendwann so viele Fähigkeiten und Kräfte haben dass sie total überpowert sind und sich dann immer nur auf die letzten Belohnung und Fähigkeiten verlassen. Ich persönlich finde es besser wenn die Hauptperson bei ihrem Kern-Kompetenzen bleibt und nur zusätzliche Belohnungen und Fähigkeiten bekommt die den Charakter ergänzen aber nicht völlig verändern. Ich hoffe dass diese Geschichte beendet wird und nicht nur nach einigen Kapiteln abgebrochen und liegen gelassen wie sehr viele andere Geschichten.
Hello author, this Fic is honestly an incredible idea, but... the only problem I would like to point out is that in more than 20 chapters not even 1 week has passed, it is very slow and the number of chapters is very small for a so slow pace.
Story is great, love the approach with tsunade, mabye think about putting exile and tsu together over time
I am not a reader who has been on this platform for a very long time like some users, and since English is not my native language, I cannot say much about grammar. But it has a fluent and understandable grammar compared to many books I have read. Marvel is a fictional world that I love and admire, and Tsunade is a character that I love very much who has a very good potential. The frequency of the chapters is the reason why I enter the webnovel every day 🙂. I really want the author to continue this beautiful book. Thank you for your time and effort.
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It's a pretty good story, at the very least, it's worth a try. The system is not in the focus... that's both good and bad, i hate a system that actually speaks, but it would be nice to hear a little more about it from time to time
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I like the concept of the fanfic, but honestly it goes very slowly. Not so much because the chapters are short (which they are), but because you lose so much writing in thoughts and points of view of other people that honestly are just filler. There's no need to make me read for the fifth time how amazed X is or how scared Y is. Not only is it pointless, but there are much better ways to do it than telling us to our faces. Maybe it's too Chinese for my taste, but I'll keep reading because again I find the concept interesting.
Definitely needs proper grammer and properly translated phrases it's good but awkward to read at times which throw it off a bit so far 3/5 with better grammer 4/5-4.5/5
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I AM A BIG FAN OF TSUNADE AND WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE NOVELS ABOUT HER WHIT THIS NOVEL IS GOLD BUT WILL TSUANDE VISIT THE MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE AND LOVE TO SEE TSUNADE IN THE MASS EFFECT NOVEL OR TSUNADE IN MARVEL PUNCH THANOS BELLS OR DC SHE FIGHT SUPERMAN,, OK A NOVEL IDEA TSUNADE SUMMON SESSHOMARU MC WITH HIS TEMPLATE AND ALL HIS POWER..PLEASE AUTHOR CONTINUE THIS NOVEL HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR GOLD
Yuri ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 ❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
(Excuse my bad writing here) The most recent chapter has fully captured me. Maybe its because I’ve been on here for so long (about 6-7 years), so I’ve seen and read quite a bit. I can honestly say tho that I love this fic. Hers some of the reasons. Pros: 1. Pacing is amazing. It’s not rushe but it’s also not unbearably slow. 2. Dialogue isn’t stilted, they communicate like actual human beings. 3. The fact I can tell who is speaking. POV changes are clear ( the bar really is low if this is a pro btw) ( also this isn’t shade at this author it’s for the others) 4. Grammer I can’t tell because I read Mtl so literally anything would do at this point. Couldn’t come up with any more reasons to glaze the author 😂 Cons: 1. The fact that I found this fic so early. Thats my only problem. 2. The fic has a lot of potential. This is actually con for me, mainly because I’ve seen way to many authors have amazing ideas, with an amazing story but they get burnt out. I’d hate to see it happen but my heart has been broken way to many times for the me to keep my hopes up. Highly recommended after few more chapters tho to binge it all at once. So even if it gets dropped, I’ll still be happy. Thanks again for this wonderful work Gloryhunter
Reveal Spoiler Как же бесят клоуны-авторы, которые не читали ни манги и не изучали материалы вселенной «Наруто». Автор этого фанфика на полном серьёзе, не знает, что Цунаде с печатью поднимает десятки тысяч тонн, и без печати сила на подъем будет очень огромной, как минимум тысяча тонн. Скорость у нее также очень высокая, где-то под двузначные числа Маха. А про способности можно промолчать. И все равно Цунаде будет не самой сильной во вселенной «Марвел» из-за того, что она не может войти в режим Шести Мудрецов. Да и если честно, автор не знает лора и самой вселенной «Марвел». На этом всё.
You should rest, when you're more refreshed you'll post again, honestly, it's better that you're well than constantly updating. Ps: I loved it so far, I just want to know who Emma's date is XD.
Ich liebe Marvel fanfiction und habe schon einige gelesen, auch solche wo die Hauptperson mit Hilfe eines Systems alle möglichen Belohnungen und Kräfte bekommt. Die meisten dieser fanfiction haben das Problem dass die Charaktere irgendwann so viele Fähigkeiten und Kräfte haben dass sie total überpowert sind und sich dann immer nur auf die letzten Belohnung und Fähigkeiten verlassen. Ich persönlich finde es besser wenn die Hauptperson bei ihrem Kern-Kompetenzen bleibt und nur zusätzliche Belohnungen und Fähigkeiten bekommt die den Charakter ergänzen aber nicht völlig verändern. Ich hoffe dass diese Geschichte beendet wird und nicht nur nach einigen Kapiteln abgebrochen und liegen gelassen wie sehr viele andere Geschichten.
Hello author, this Fic is honestly an incredible idea, but... the only problem I would like to point out is that in more than 20 chapters not even 1 week has passed, it is very slow and the number of chapters is very small for a so slow pace.
Story is great, love the approach with tsunade, mabye think about putting exile and tsu together over time
I am not a reader who has been on this platform for a very long time like some users, and since English is not my native language, I cannot say much about grammar. But it has a fluent and understandable grammar compared to many books I have read. Marvel is a fictional world that I love and admire, and Tsunade is a character that I love very much who has a very good potential. The frequency of the chapters is the reason why I enter the webnovel every day 🙂. I really want the author to continue this beautiful book. Thank you for your time and effort.
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It's a pretty good story, at the very least, it's worth a try. The system is not in the focus... that's both good and bad, i hate a system that actually speaks, but it would be nice to hear a little more about it from time to time
i like it really good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] i like the way she hate dr Strange and reeds i dort like them not much becase they are stupid and often to more Bad Things the good [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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I like the concept of the fanfic, but honestly it goes very slowly. Not so much because the chapters are short (which they are), but because you lose so much writing in thoughts and points of view of other people that honestly are just filler. There's no need to make me read for the fifth time how amazed X is or how scared Y is. Not only is it pointless, but there are much better ways to do it than telling us to our faces. Maybe it's too Chinese for my taste, but I'll keep reading because again I find the concept interesting.
Definitely needs proper grammer and properly translated phrases it's good but awkward to read at times which throw it off a bit so far 3/5 with better grammer 4/5-4.5/5
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I AM A BIG FAN OF TSUNADE AND WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE NOVELS ABOUT HER WHIT THIS NOVEL IS GOLD BUT WILL TSUANDE VISIT THE MASS EFFECT UNIVERSE AND LOVE TO SEE TSUNADE IN THE MASS EFFECT NOVEL OR TSUNADE IN MARVEL PUNCH THANOS BELLS OR DC SHE FIGHT SUPERMAN,, OK A NOVEL IDEA TSUNADE SUMMON SESSHOMARU MC WITH HIS TEMPLATE AND ALL HIS POWER..PLEASE AUTHOR CONTINUE THIS NOVEL HAS THE POTENTIAL FOR GOLD
Yuri ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️ 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌 ❤️👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Sigh! A little bit tired but well, hope you can enjoy the story