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Tanto potencial desperdiçado, não tem nenhum desenvolvimento de personagem, a história é extremamente confusa com coisas aleatórias jogadas de lado sinceramente decepcionante
There are a lot of problems with the novel. 1- there are a lot of logical loopholes, for example when he pushes everyone out of the classroom and locks himself inside with a criminal for no good reason, and he has time to write a whole note to his family instead of escaping .2-the story jumps around and keeps skipping from scene to scene with no consistency, you see him in class one time and then suddenly he's in the theater singing and playing the piano and then in the parking lot. I'm not sure what exactly is going on here and I don't want to know .3- why the hell is Mr. Bertie teaching him? He's supposed to be 13 and Mr. Bertie is a high school teacher .4- this guy barely spent a day after his reincarnation and started flirting and singing on stage instead of grieving about his passing and what happened to his family in his previous life. 5- I'm pretty sure he supposed to sign up for a competition before it even started bye a couple of days. I want stay more than my welcome so goodbye
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While it is very good as a god should he not possess a Godly body attributes such as super strength etc ? Technically as the God of the Sky he could have a home in the sky but it would require him to learn to build a home worthy of a God. I believe he has vast potential with his divinities and I hope he pushes them to the limit while being creative on ways to use them. Overall however fantastic job may Jaxon & Leah remain together for eternity.
A unique take on twilight that really fleshes out the world beyond just the whole Bella plotline.
I haven’t really read the book yet just read the synopsis and saw the part “after surviving a school shooting a young victim wakes up in the world of Twilight” I think he just died, got shot went unconscious apparently in twilight now, yeah probably died { Don’t mind the review it just wouldn’t let me post otherwise}
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Tanto potencial desperdiçado, não tem nenhum desenvolvimento de personagem, a história é extremamente confusa com coisas aleatórias jogadas de lado sinceramente decepcionante
There are a lot of problems with the novel. 1- there are a lot of logical loopholes, for example when he pushes everyone out of the classroom and locks himself inside with a criminal for no good reason, and he has time to write a whole note to his family instead of escaping .2-the story jumps around and keeps skipping from scene to scene with no consistency, you see him in class one time and then suddenly he's in the theater singing and playing the piano and then in the parking lot. I'm not sure what exactly is going on here and I don't want to know .3- why the hell is Mr. Bertie teaching him? He's supposed to be 13 and Mr. Bertie is a high school teacher .4- this guy barely spent a day after his reincarnation and started flirting and singing on stage instead of grieving about his passing and what happened to his family in his previous life. 5- I'm pretty sure he supposed to sign up for a competition before it even started bye a couple of days. I want stay more than my welcome so goodbye
Reveal Spoiler While it is very good as a god should he not possess a Godly body attributes such as super strength etc ? Technically as the God of the Sky he could have a home in the sky but it would require him to learn to build a home worthy of a God. I believe he has vast potential with his divinities and I hope he pushes them to the limit while being creative on ways to use them. Overall however fantastic job may Jaxon & Leah remain together for eternity.
A unique take on twilight that really fleshes out the world beyond just the whole Bella plotline.
I haven’t really read the book yet just read the synopsis and saw the part “after surviving a school shooting a young victim wakes up in the world of Twilight” I think he just died, got shot went unconscious apparently in twilight now, yeah probably died { Don’t mind the review it just wouldn’t let me post otherwise}
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