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No tengo nada malo qué señalar, me gusta mucho la narrativa y hasta el momento no te preocupes y molestes autor, muy buen desarrollo y introducción de los elementos y interacción entre los personajes y el Mc, me preguntó si, mc y el otro reencardado se pelearán por amor dé alguien?, pelea de intereses o un trasfondo más profundo? Bueno gracias por el capitulo 😃 y no dejes de traer está historia
Alright, let's start. I've read 60+ chapters of this and have grown to like it. My only problem is that some character interaction is kinda bland. However, it isn't enough to detract from the story. A good read.
To give my thoughts on the recent chapters i.e chap 60+. I get why many of the readers hated the sudden drop of another transmigrator and I did kinda feel icky with the drop of yuuya but I'll give the author a chance as the story up to the yuuya reveal was really good. Though if there is even a bit of NTR in this story I'll drop it.
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At chapter 62, this fanfic author wrote another oc with a system, usually idc about it, and in some cases can improve the story, but the way author introduced the new characters was really bad it like Mary Sue, pop out nowhere without reason. my main issue with this fanfic is my trust, with problems like mediocre story and introducing new characters out of nowhere and without reason, especially an oc, and also this is webnovel if you've been long enough reading here, you'll know how much trash story filled in here, with all that combine I decided to get out. tl;dr. I don't trust the author to cook a good story.
Tbh I'm just a casual reader, so I can't really judge a novel whether it has problems except for the obvious ones. But I'm still enjoying this one so far, so that's a 5 star in my view
I like the story so far and if there were more chapter it would be great and thank you for your work
Just keep updating i just like it. just forget about people who don't like this story and forget about all these negative comments they don 't know you and you don't know them so just keep updating this story and i have a request to please update every weekend or just update it i will wait every week. Thank you if you read this
This is good. If someone says this is bad, they are just talking nonsense. People don't know how to make a story and are just commenting. Waiting for the end, friend, hahaha
The author wanted an explained opinion. Well, the story itself is fine, it had a good development at the beginning until now, everything is fine. The problem for me, like for many, is that out of nowhere a reincarnated person appears quite far into the chapters when the story had already set a pace without context. He introduces it. This problem causes people to reject it because it was not presented from the beginning as something normal in the story and the moment he introduced it to the story, it was like breaking the rhythm that it had previously without including the reincarnated person. This is my opinion.
Really good story. I read up until chapter 60! But then something happened. A Great Filter created by the Author. But I won't spoil it for you. READ IT! It was good while it lasted.
Gostei muito da obra.. espero que tenha continuação. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... .. . . . . . .. . .. . . .. . . . . . .fim
Impresionante boicotearon tanto al autor que se fue ajajajajajajajaja, una lástima era una buena historia hasta el último capítulo hasta que apareció otro tipo con el sistema, sería muy interesante que el MC se convierta en una especie de cazador que caza a otros tipos con sistema, con sus antecedentes lo convertiría en un excelente villano estilo novela china
I m really enjoying the story. the premise earlier was a bit boring but i can understand the development. But still i would love to read more of the story i especially liked the part where those 2 deserved what they had comming. so please keep updating more chapters.
chapter 62: haiz, the story is good, but the author introduced another system user out of nowhere. he just shows up! and worst of all is that he's an average Webnovel reader type who is, you know, let his power get in his head and acts like a young master. just like 90% of the readers here in this gif. if you're not that bothered. go ahead and read.
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I like the premise. Don't like the system theme that makes the mc lazy and enslaved? Me too. Don't like the arrogant mc who boasts about the abilities GIVEN by the system? Sure, me too. You're lucky, because this novel doesn't fall into the above category. In the beginning, the MC will only focus on using his abilities, connections, efforts, experiences and future knowledge. I'm glad the MC can proudly claim that what he has now is thanks to HIMSELF and his EFFORT. What I like is how the author didn't rush the timeskip to the High School Arc. Until the last time I read (chapter 62), the mc was still a junior high school student.
Just to let those who think they might want to read this. The novel has more than one reincarnator and they are aware of MC. I am personally not a fan of these types of novels and am dissatisfied, but I enjoyed the novel until that point.
I will give an honest overall rate(till 62th chapter) because it's a good story. I will just warn new readers about another raincarnator in the story that appeared in the newest chapter. Looks like he will be a rival for mc. Altho this is a stop for me since i don't like stories with more than one reincarnared person that may ntr mc in the future, at least i will leave a honest rating up till 62th chapter.
If you drop it author-san i am going to curse you.................................thanks for creating this novel.......................................................
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Cerita yang cukup bagus, walaupun di beberapa bagian ada yang membuatku merinding geli, tetapi masih cukup oke untuk di baca dan dinikmati saat waktu senggang
I've decided to quit webnovel once again but then I saw this novel. I read it out of curiosity and expecting a story like any other... I was wrong. you can cook this author.
So it's just "MID" so far cause the MC is dull, no true system action yet. MC has barely any common sense when it comes to socializing from what I viewed in chapter 31. Maybe I'll change it after the MC gets some character development with the system. The only thing I liked about the guy was his will for revenge against his father and his goal to make it big in the world. He's willing to do all types of stuff for money and use his knowledge for his gains but as soon as he tries to do anything with the system he gives up halfway without trying.
A good fanfic, the mc has feelings except the endless lust that normal mc's have. Making it more 'deep' and that made the others characters feel more alive in the story. Anyway, good fanfic.
I've decided to stop after reading a few chapters. While the story isn't bad, but I find myself unable to agree with the main character's perspective. The MC seem rather haughty, seems insisting that his opinion is the only correct one.
This is a good story, there are some scenes that I don't like, but overall this story is very good and has a message for the author.If you write for yourself and you enjoy your writing, don't mind other people's hate, write whatever you like, no matter whether other people like it or hate it.
No tengo nada malo qué señalar, me gusta mucho la narrativa y hasta el momento no te preocupes y molestes autor, muy buen desarrollo y introducción de los elementos y interacción entre los personajes y el Mc, me preguntó si, mc y el otro reencardado se pelearán por amor dé alguien?, pelea de intereses o un trasfondo más profundo? Bueno gracias por el capitulo 😃 y no dejes de traer está historia
Alright, let's start. I've read 60+ chapters of this and have grown to like it. My only problem is that some character interaction is kinda bland. However, it isn't enough to detract from the story. A good read.
To give my thoughts on the recent chapters i.e chap 60+. I get why many of the readers hated the sudden drop of another transmigrator and I did kinda feel icky with the drop of yuuya but I'll give the author a chance as the story up to the yuuya reveal was really good. Though if there is even a bit of NTR in this story I'll drop it.
Reveal Spoiler At chapter 62, this fanfic author wrote another oc with a system, usually idc about it, and in some cases can improve the story, but the way author introduced the new characters was really bad it like Mary Sue, pop out nowhere without reason. my main issue with this fanfic is my trust, with problems like mediocre story and introducing new characters out of nowhere and without reason, especially an oc, and also this is webnovel if you've been long enough reading here, you'll know how much trash story filled in here, with all that combine I decided to get out. tl;dr. I don't trust the author to cook a good story.
Tbh I'm just a casual reader, so I can't really judge a novel whether it has problems except for the obvious ones. But I'm still enjoying this one so far, so that's a 5 star in my view
I like the story so far and if there were more chapter it would be great and thank you for your work
Just keep updating i just like it. just forget about people who don't like this story and forget about all these negative comments they don 't know you and you don't know them so just keep updating this story and i have a request to please update every weekend or just update it i will wait every week. Thank you if you read this
This is good. If someone says this is bad, they are just talking nonsense. People don't know how to make a story and are just commenting. Waiting for the end, friend, hahaha
The author wanted an explained opinion. Well, the story itself is fine, it had a good development at the beginning until now, everything is fine. The problem for me, like for many, is that out of nowhere a reincarnated person appears quite far into the chapters when the story had already set a pace without context. He introduces it. This problem causes people to reject it because it was not presented from the beginning as something normal in the story and the moment he introduced it to the story, it was like breaking the rhythm that it had previously without including the reincarnated person. This is my opinion.
Really good story. I read up until chapter 60! But then something happened. A Great Filter created by the Author. But I won't spoil it for you. READ IT! It was good while it lasted.
Gostei muito da obra.. espero que tenha continuação. .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... .. . . . . . .. . .. . . .. . . . . . .fim
Impresionante boicotearon tanto al autor que se fue ajajajajajajajaja, una lástima era una buena historia hasta el último capítulo hasta que apareció otro tipo con el sistema, sería muy interesante que el MC se convierta en una especie de cazador que caza a otros tipos con sistema, con sus antecedentes lo convertiría en un excelente villano estilo novela china
I m really enjoying the story. the premise earlier was a bit boring but i can understand the development. But still i would love to read more of the story i especially liked the part where those 2 deserved what they had comming. so please keep updating more chapters.
chapter 62: haiz, the story is good, but the author introduced another system user out of nowhere. he just shows up! and worst of all is that he's an average Webnovel reader type who is, you know, let his power get in his head and acts like a young master. just like 90% of the readers here in this gif. if you're not that bothered. go ahead and read.
Reveal Spoiler I like the premise. Don't like the system theme that makes the mc lazy and enslaved? Me too. Don't like the arrogant mc who boasts about the abilities GIVEN by the system? Sure, me too. You're lucky, because this novel doesn't fall into the above category. In the beginning, the MC will only focus on using his abilities, connections, efforts, experiences and future knowledge. I'm glad the MC can proudly claim that what he has now is thanks to HIMSELF and his EFFORT. What I like is how the author didn't rush the timeskip to the High School Arc. Until the last time I read (chapter 62), the mc was still a junior high school student.
Just to let those who think they might want to read this. The novel has more than one reincarnator and they are aware of MC. I am personally not a fan of these types of novels and am dissatisfied, but I enjoyed the novel until that point.
I will give an honest overall rate(till 62th chapter) because it's a good story. I will just warn new readers about another raincarnator in the story that appeared in the newest chapter. Looks like he will be a rival for mc. Altho this is a stop for me since i don't like stories with more than one reincarnared person that may ntr mc in the future, at least i will leave a honest rating up till 62th chapter.
If you drop it author-san i am going to curse you.................................thanks for creating this novel.......................................................
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Cerita yang cukup bagus, walaupun di beberapa bagian ada yang membuatku merinding geli, tetapi masih cukup oke untuk di baca dan dinikmati saat waktu senggang
I've decided to quit webnovel once again but then I saw this novel. I read it out of curiosity and expecting a story like any other... I was wrong. you can cook this author.
So it's just "MID" so far cause the MC is dull, no true system action yet. MC has barely any common sense when it comes to socializing from what I viewed in chapter 31. Maybe I'll change it after the MC gets some character development with the system. The only thing I liked about the guy was his will for revenge against his father and his goal to make it big in the world. He's willing to do all types of stuff for money and use his knowledge for his gains but as soon as he tries to do anything with the system he gives up halfway without trying.
A good fanfic, the mc has feelings except the endless lust that normal mc's have. Making it more 'deep' and that made the others characters feel more alive in the story. Anyway, good fanfic.
I've decided to stop after reading a few chapters. While the story isn't bad, but I find myself unable to agree with the main character's perspective. The MC seem rather haughty, seems insisting that his opinion is the only correct one.
This is a good story, there are some scenes that I don't like, but overall this story is very good and has a message for the author.If you write for yourself and you enjoy your writing, don't mind other people's hate, write whatever you like, no matter whether other people like it or hate it.