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A poorly written story done in a Chinese style for the MC and the system, which can be hit or miss. This one is an extremem miss on top of being all over the place with very little reasoning behind actions on paper, random high levels of racism that doesn't happen in real life in public even close to what's shown let alone comics, a haremish feeling/use of women that's disgusting, and inconsistencies on tracking the points and usage of the system.
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Theres no bigger shit than toxic positivity, its better to have racism, sexism, homophobia and anything else in the story that will resonate with the reader/viewer/player than for the work to be tolerant fresh shit where they're afraid of offending the consumer and so everything will be as fresh and sterile as possible.
I’ll be honest, this story started off well for the most part, but it has gone downhill. The main issues are as follows: The constant name changes of the main character make it confusing to know who is being referred to half the time. There are too many ideas and plot points happening at once, and they aren’t being blended together effectively. One moment, the focus is on one event, and in the next sentence, the scene has shifted to something entirely different. A lot of critical information is missing that could help explain what’s going on, and the chapters feel jumbled and disorganized, making it even harder for readers to follow the story.
Excelente novela fanfic con todo lo del giro de la trama moldeando ese línea temporal a su gusto, que alfa el MC un clásico poder del agua y el fuego. El yin yang está en Sintonía.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Read the original one and it always a disappointment cuz it Chinese🥱. This rating is for you author that translating this novel you did 70% good job but some of mistake of nouns and some missing plot at the end of chapter in the original making it the next chapter left us wondering what happened Last but not least, the ending was terrible. Mc fought Odin brother krull or knull, the kill Thanos and the celestial seed and that's it. no follow up of the consequences of killing a celestial or thanos 😒. oh, 1 more things despite the threat mc show, human in marvel won't scared and won't stop to continuing tries to kill mc
It's another shitty novel where the protagonist hides his power, webnovel is riddled with this cliché. Ndkdkdkdnfjfucucjcjvkvjckfkdkfkfkkfkfkfkfi ufdjndjfufdkfjugjffjifufndndnfixisnebf
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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Its a translation and what to expect from a Chinese translation. Just random bullshit. This shit is racist as well. Anything can happen anytime. The context changes in middle. The readers should have high iq and low english to read this fic
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The comments here are so funny) So many Americans here are condemning the Chinese author for racism, as if it was China that kept black slaves on plantations Do you smell it? It's hypocrisy
Only managed to get to beginning of chapter 4. Straight Chinese mtl rip. No editing whatsoever. Names are wrong. Idiot MC talks to his system out loud while in a conversation with other people. So stupid.
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So far so good don't see any manor problems work it, keep ur jobs done and stay healty and please dont drop this fate fic like before again!
I've read till chapter 39 before I couldn't take it anymore. The plot holes in this fanfic are too big to ignore, many times mid chapter the direction suddenly change without any warning nor context. This is more noticeable between one chapter to another, chapter X can end about a certain subject and then chapter Y begins on another subject altogether as if a few paragraphs were missing from the new chapter. The system of the MC also changes all the time with his points always decreasing and increasing without any pattern, though I'm not really surprised since this is a Chinese fanfic after all and they're notoriously known to be bad at keeping track of system points... The translation also was done somewhat okay but with plenty of mistakes here and there.
No es la gran cosa 🤷🏻♂️ es el típico fanfic chino con matices racistas y desarrollo amoroso casi inexistente con solo colecciones de mujeres, la gramática y traducción son decentes se nota que el autor aligeró los típicos aspectos chinos lo que encontré interesante son las habilidades que va obteniendo y pone en práctica el MC en los conflictos que le llegan y los finaliza, en todo caso esta novela sirve para satisfacer la necesidad de matar el aburrimiento y pasar el tiempo
A poorly written story done in a Chinese style for the MC and the system, which can be hit or miss. This one is an extremem miss on top of being all over the place with very little reasoning behind actions on paper, random high levels of racism that doesn't happen in real life in public even close to what's shown let alone comics, a haremish feeling/use of women that's disgusting, and inconsistencies on tracking the points and usage of the system.
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Theres no bigger shit than toxic positivity, its better to have racism, sexism, homophobia and anything else in the story that will resonate with the reader/viewer/player than for the work to be tolerant fresh shit where they're afraid of offending the consumer and so everything will be as fresh and sterile as possible.
I’ll be honest, this story started off well for the most part, but it has gone downhill. The main issues are as follows: The constant name changes of the main character make it confusing to know who is being referred to half the time. There are too many ideas and plot points happening at once, and they aren’t being blended together effectively. One moment, the focus is on one event, and in the next sentence, the scene has shifted to something entirely different. A lot of critical information is missing that could help explain what’s going on, and the chapters feel jumbled and disorganized, making it even harder for readers to follow the story.
Excelente novela fanfic con todo lo del giro de la trama moldeando ese línea temporal a su gusto, que alfa el MC un clásico poder del agua y el fuego. El yin yang está en Sintonía.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Quiero más capitut ..............................................................................................................................................................................
Read the original one and it always a disappointment cuz it Chinese🥱. This rating is for you author that translating this novel you did 70% good job but some of mistake of nouns and some missing plot at the end of chapter in the original making it the next chapter left us wondering what happened Last but not least, the ending was terrible. Mc fought Odin brother krull or knull, the kill Thanos and the celestial seed and that's it. no follow up of the consequences of killing a celestial or thanos 😒. oh, 1 more things despite the threat mc show, human in marvel won't scared and won't stop to continuing tries to kill mc
It's another shitty novel where the protagonist hides his power, webnovel is riddled with this cliché. Ndkdkdkdnfjfucucjcjvkvjckfkdkfkfkkfkfkfkfi ufdjndjfufdkfjugjffjifufndndnfixisnebf
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Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.
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Its a translation and what to expect from a Chinese translation. Just random bullshit. This shit is racist as well. Anything can happen anytime. The context changes in middle. The readers should have high iq and low english to read this fic
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Reveal Spoiler The comments here are so funny) So many Americans here are condemning the Chinese author for racism, as if it was China that kept black slaves on plantations Do you smell it? It's hypocrisy
Only managed to get to beginning of chapter 4. Straight Chinese mtl rip. No editing whatsoever. Names are wrong. Idiot MC talks to his system out loud while in a conversation with other people. So stupid.
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So far so good don't see any manor problems work it, keep ur jobs done and stay healty and please dont drop this fate fic like before again!
I've read till chapter 39 before I couldn't take it anymore. The plot holes in this fanfic are too big to ignore, many times mid chapter the direction suddenly change without any warning nor context. This is more noticeable between one chapter to another, chapter X can end about a certain subject and then chapter Y begins on another subject altogether as if a few paragraphs were missing from the new chapter. The system of the MC also changes all the time with his points always decreasing and increasing without any pattern, though I'm not really surprised since this is a Chinese fanfic after all and they're notoriously known to be bad at keeping track of system points... The translation also was done somewhat okay but with plenty of mistakes here and there.
No es la gran cosa 🤷🏻♂️ es el típico fanfic chino con matices racistas y desarrollo amoroso casi inexistente con solo colecciones de mujeres, la gramática y traducción son decentes se nota que el autor aligeró los típicos aspectos chinos lo que encontré interesante son las habilidades que va obteniendo y pone en práctica el MC en los conflictos que le llegan y los finaliza, en todo caso esta novela sirve para satisfacer la necesidad de matar el aburrimiento y pasar el tiempo