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It's mind-blowing and very immersive. From the first chapter, I was hooked and it only got better. Underated indeed! The world building and dialogue are in point, the creativity is commendable and I recommend this as a great read😌😌 A master piece and more👌
Okay. Halfway into the first chapter and I’m totally hooked to this stuff. What narrative and descriptive content this possesses . Lio had better make it big, bat!
It allowed him to channel kinetic energy through his leg, giving his shots an unstoppable speed and power. He had used it countless times to bend the ball in impossible trajectories, to strike with such force that goalkeepers simply couldn't react. Perfect 👍 interesting 💥 concise 🔥
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This is the first sport novel I've read but I don't regret it one bit it is actually a very interesting read, it's way better than I thought it'd be. And I hope Mia is a baddie 🤭🌚😏 go team LIO 🤩🤩
His thoughts flowed well and moved the book along very quickly. lio's narrative is wonderful 😉
Heyyo Writer here, well it's my book and I believe it deserves 5 stars. I'd like you to give it a chance you know feel the story, it isn't just about football it's way bigger than that I'd leave the rest to your imagination lol. I'll also like to add that your feedback is important for my growth as a writer and for my work. Also kindly support me 🌚❤️🫶🏾 ENJOYYY!!❤️
It's mind-blowing and very immersive. From the first chapter, I was hooked and it only got better. Underated indeed! The world building and dialogue are in point, the creativity is commendable and I recommend this as a great read😌😌 A master piece and more👌
Okay. Halfway into the first chapter and I’m totally hooked to this stuff. What narrative and descriptive content this possesses . Lio had better make it big, bat!
It allowed him to channel kinetic energy through his leg, giving his shots an unstoppable speed and power. He had used it countless times to bend the ball in impossible trajectories, to strike with such force that goalkeepers simply couldn't react. Perfect 👍 interesting 💥 concise 🔥
Reveal Spoiler This is the first sport novel I've read but I don't regret it one bit it is actually a very interesting read, it's way better than I thought it'd be. And I hope Mia is a baddie 🤭🌚😏 go team LIO 🤩🤩
His thoughts flowed well and moved the book along very quickly. lio's narrative is wonderful 😉
Heyyo Writer here, well it's my book and I believe it deserves 5 stars. I'd like you to give it a chance you know feel the story, it isn't just about football it's way bigger than that I'd leave the rest to your imagination lol. I'll also like to add that your feedback is important for my growth as a writer and for my work. Also kindly support me 🌚❤️🫶🏾 ENJOYYY!!❤️