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Trash overall, another fic where Hancock is in love with the mc basically. Not worth your time unless you like that.
I like the premise of the story, and yes he's OP but still an enjoyable story so far. Only thing i have to say is it feels like the first half of each chapter is reiterating the previous chapter. I understand if like the first paragraph is a recap or a different POV but not so constantly it pulls you out of the rhythm of the story. Other than that keep up the good work.
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hello i just added this story to my collection and wanted to Ask you if Nami and Robin will become mc Wifes to, and if he will create his own Crew, or will join the Luffy Crew later on.?
This is a crack fic, but not the good kind. MC is already the son of Shakky & Rayleigh, yet he still have 4 broken wishes.
interesting setting. unfortunately chapters are as short as authors pp so kinda boring. work harder, author
So far it really interesting and fun to read can’t wait for the MC to get his Dragon Dragon no mi devil evil fruit and love how you made shakky and Theee Dark king silver D Rayleigh his parents
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I really enjoy this and definitely recommend it its a super enjoyable and light hearted read
Trash overall, another fic where Hancock is in love with the mc basically. Not worth your time unless you like that.
I like the premise of the story, and yes he's OP but still an enjoyable story so far. Only thing i have to say is it feels like the first half of each chapter is reiterating the previous chapter. I understand if like the first paragraph is a recap or a different POV but not so constantly it pulls you out of the rhythm of the story. Other than that keep up the good work.
Srx ??? Pk roi des pirates ? #### [img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face][img=In your face]
hello i just added this story to my collection and wanted to Ask you if Nami and Robin will become mc Wifes to, and if he will create his own Crew, or will join the Luffy Crew later on.?
This is a crack fic, but not the good kind. MC is already the son of Shakky & Rayleigh, yet he still have 4 broken wishes.
interesting setting. unfortunately chapters are as short as authors pp so kinda boring. work harder, author
So far it really interesting and fun to read can’t wait for the MC to get his Dragon Dragon no mi devil evil fruit and love how you made shakky and Theee Dark king silver D Rayleigh his parents
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I really enjoy this and definitely recommend it its a super enjoyable and light hearted read