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El creciente aumento del poder del protagonista, le quita el suspenso a las batallas, sabes que va a ganar si o si, el protagonista es demasiado poderoso, es como si en el manga de one punch man saitama se encargara de todos los villanos, algo aburrido.
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La historia era buena....... exactamente era buena hasta que el protagonista empezó a recolectar Ojos(Dojutsu) como si fuera luces de una casa que pudiera intercambiar cuando quisiera, ese tipo de fanfic son los mas basura, si hubiera elegido byakugan o solo el sharigan con el ojo rojo seria pasable, pero nooo el quiere todo lo que se encuentre
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This novel introduces some troublesome ideas. The author openly talks about how he plans to “caast a wide net” on young girls like sakura and ino basically grwwming them. Then there is the brainless harem which makes no sense . Im done.
a nice story. sometimes cringe and a bit nonsensical, but overall an enjoyable experience
This was fire. I cannot wait for either new chapters or the sequel to this work of art. I sincerely hope you haven't discontinued this cause I really really enjoyed it.
Disappointing, had such an amazing ability but the way it is shown is disappointing. In a certain chapter, he finds that the drop will work only when the opponent is slightly stronger than him , and not if the opponent is weaker than you, then how the hell did he get Asura chakra from Naruto who was dead last in the starting point , and it was mentioned that mc is average but still not dead last .Just destroyed this book ....had such an amazing premise and all but the author is just trying to complete his fantasy of having all the female characters.
A decent Naruto fic with a premise I don't hate and a tolerable approach to Harem building. It's not hard to read which is already a W in my book. It doesn't suffer much to terrible grammar mistakes. I look forward to this one being finished. Give it a read .
Not gonna lie the story is good. But too much information, like the aturhor is is adding too much details. But if you enjoy novels like this i recommend this. Also if you wonder what is mc appearence is like the second hokage
A good ff, but in the shippuden part the story kinda bad, too much killing. The progress of the story is pretty good, mc slowly become OP, but in the shippuden arc, he's too OP, more powerful than Nagato. And he slowly becomes behind the scenes mastermind. He doesn't care about other, he manipulate sasuke to kill the konoha elder and all their clan. I know that the Elder is trash, but i don't like the way MC ask other to kill all of them including Konohamaru and Asuma. Even he have some plan to manipulate the 4 Shinobi War and destroy other Village so Konoha become the stongest and other will fear them. Pretty good start, but too much killing make me drop the story
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the idea of the story is good. but author has too much opinion and explanation to tell to reader with tiny progress plot of the story move on in every chapter. i mean if you all love info dump kind of story, maybe it's your right move to read this. for me it's not my cup of tea. so i drop this review and also the novel.
The story is good. It's just that I'm bored with Hinata, almost all Naruto fanfics end with Hinata. The beginning of the story also seems cliche but yeah it's pretty good
Good mc traits good harem and good powers good translation[img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
The interaction between characters are one of the reason I like this they are so good and mc is smart and doesn’t really make dumb mistakes
i am writing this comment after reading chapter 41 i don't know about others but I love this fanfic specially 1) that there no other world power every powers based on Naruto world and 2) that mc gets powerup slowly but surely 3) although mc is op, he doesn't become god level powerhouse , he is just over power enough to defeat his current enemy. most of his superpower is hidden .
So far so good. i hope that he isn't going to be too OP. The story is passable and a little slow but overall a good read.
Very entertaining…. Fun and interesting so far, a little slow for my taste but acceptable I guess. Will update the review if something came up.
Well had a good start and mc has not turned into retard so yeah a good novel worth the time
Hello readers, my name is RoseWhisky, and I will be working on this fanfic. If you have any questions, feel free to ask, and I will do my best to answer them. If you come across any grammar errors, you can point them out in the paragraph comments within the chapters.
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El creciente aumento del poder del protagonista, le quita el suspenso a las batallas, sabes que va a ganar si o si, el protagonista es demasiado poderoso, es como si en el manga de one punch man saitama se encargara de todos los villanos, algo aburrido.
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Ain't no party like Diddy party 🗣️🔥🔥💯 ...............................................................................................................................
La historia era buena....... exactamente era buena hasta que el protagonista empezó a recolectar Ojos(Dojutsu) como si fuera luces de una casa que pudiera intercambiar cuando quisiera, ese tipo de fanfic son los mas basura, si hubiera elegido byakugan o solo el sharigan con el ojo rojo seria pasable, pero nooo el quiere todo lo que se encuentre
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This novel introduces some troublesome ideas. The author openly talks about how he plans to “caast a wide net” on young girls like sakura and ino basically grwwming them. Then there is the brainless harem which makes no sense . Im done.
a nice story. sometimes cringe and a bit nonsensical, but overall an enjoyable experience
This was fire. I cannot wait for either new chapters or the sequel to this work of art. I sincerely hope you haven't discontinued this cause I really really enjoyed it.
Disappointing, had such an amazing ability but the way it is shown is disappointing. In a certain chapter, he finds that the drop will work only when the opponent is slightly stronger than him , and not if the opponent is weaker than you, then how the hell did he get Asura chakra from Naruto who was dead last in the starting point , and it was mentioned that mc is average but still not dead last .Just destroyed this book ....had such an amazing premise and all but the author is just trying to complete his fantasy of having all the female characters.
A decent Naruto fic with a premise I don't hate and a tolerable approach to Harem building. It's not hard to read which is already a W in my book. It doesn't suffer much to terrible grammar mistakes. I look forward to this one being finished. Give it a read .
Not gonna lie the story is good. But too much information, like the aturhor is is adding too much details. But if you enjoy novels like this i recommend this. Also if you wonder what is mc appearence is like the second hokage
A good ff, but in the shippuden part the story kinda bad, too much killing. The progress of the story is pretty good, mc slowly become OP, but in the shippuden arc, he's too OP, more powerful than Nagato. And he slowly becomes behind the scenes mastermind. He doesn't care about other, he manipulate sasuke to kill the konoha elder and all their clan. I know that the Elder is trash, but i don't like the way MC ask other to kill all of them including Konohamaru and Asuma. Even he have some plan to manipulate the 4 Shinobi War and destroy other Village so Konoha become the stongest and other will fear them. Pretty good start, but too much killing make me drop the story
Reveal Spoiler the idea of the story is good. but author has too much opinion and explanation to tell to reader with tiny progress plot of the story move on in every chapter. i mean if you all love info dump kind of story, maybe it's your right move to read this. for me it's not my cup of tea. so i drop this review and also the novel.
The story is good. It's just that I'm bored with Hinata, almost all Naruto fanfics end with Hinata. The beginning of the story also seems cliche but yeah it's pretty good
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The interaction between characters are one of the reason I like this they are so good and mc is smart and doesn’t really make dumb mistakes
i am writing this comment after reading chapter 41 i don't know about others but I love this fanfic specially 1) that there no other world power every powers based on Naruto world and 2) that mc gets powerup slowly but surely 3) although mc is op, he doesn't become god level powerhouse , he is just over power enough to defeat his current enemy. most of his superpower is hidden .
So far so good. i hope that he isn't going to be too OP. The story is passable and a little slow but overall a good read.
Very entertaining…. Fun and interesting so far, a little slow for my taste but acceptable I guess. Will update the review if something came up.
Well had a good start and mc has not turned into retard so yeah a good novel worth the time
Hello readers, my name is RoseWhisky, and I will be working on this fanfic. If you have any questions, feel free to ask, and I will do my best to answer them. If you come across any grammar errors, you can point them out in the paragraph comments within the chapters.