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i just wanted to come here to say im disappointed in all of you .................................................................................................................
I have to say it is really bad Please improve all chapters and R18 chapters lack proactiveness and also describe more deeply about relationships, MC is living like a literal Fool because the system gives him more points about making girls fall in love for him This story is full of loops holes
almost everything is good. just some little problems that its getting worst the more you read... the timeline of everything is messed... if i calculated right its 130 chps = 5 days ... and he has a date on one days on the next day he talks like it was like a week ago ... and i still dont know how the mc look like... because extreme handsome its not a description ... But its a translation... the translation its good ... not perfect ( too much chinese slang ) but its perfect readable
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From the title of the story, we know what to expect: quality content, with an excellent translation as well.
Gostei bastante espero que continue a escrever e dificil de encontrar este tipo de fanfic bem escrito --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
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One thing is sure translator is cooking, and all I want you is to keep cooking...... . . . appreciate you, my fellow culture brother.
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Reminds me of βI really donβt want to open a harem hereβ must be translations of the same work, itβs really cool tho cause this is different enough to that translation to be its own version of the original, I recommend reading both to enjoy the differences and similarities between them
Ha sido una historia interesante hasta ahora, toca ver cΓ³mo se desarrolla en futuros capΓtulos, sigue con el buen trabajo, estarΓ© apoyando esta historia en futuros capΓtulos
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Π― Π½Π΅ Π·Π½Π°Ρ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ Π²ΡΡΠ°Π·ΠΈΡΡ ΡΠ»ΠΎΠ²Π°ΠΌΠΈ ΡΡΡ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊ ΡΠ»ΠΎΠ²Π½ΠΎ Π³Π»ΠΎΡΠΎΠΊ ΡΠ²Π΅ΠΆΠ΅Π³ΠΎ Π²ΠΎΠ·Π΄ΡΡ Π° Π΅ΡΠ»ΠΈ ΡΡΠΎ Π΄Π΅ΠΉΡΡΠ²ΠΈΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ΅Π²ΠΎΠ΄ Ρ ΠΊΠΈΡΠ°ΠΉΡΠΊΠΎΠ³ΠΎ ΡΠ°ΠΉΡΠ° Ρ Π±ΡΠ» Π±Ρ ΠΎΡΠ΅Π½Ρ ΡΠ°Π΄ ΠΏΠΎΠ»ΡΡΠΈΡΡ ΡΡΡΠ»ΠΊΡ ΠΎΡ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΠ° ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ΅Π²ΠΎΠ΄Π° ΠΠ»Π°ΡΠΎΠΉ Π·Π° ΡΡΠΎ Π±ΡΠ΄Π΅Ρ ΠΌΠΎΠΈ ΠΈΡΠΊΡΠ΅Π½Π½ΠΈΠ΅ ΠΏΡΡΡ Π·Π²ΡΠ·Π΄
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Update faster! This novel may be generic, but it's still good. Since it's Chinese, Iβm not even worried about any NTR.
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La verdad no esta nada mal aunque le faltan mas texto lo veo algo corto los capitulos y tambien no se si podrias poder los nombres completos de esos hentais personajes que colocas?
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i just wanted to come here to say im disappointed in all of you .................................................................................................................
I have to say it is really bad Please improve all chapters and R18 chapters lack proactiveness and also describe more deeply about relationships, MC is living like a literal Fool because the system gives him more points about making girls fall in love for him This story is full of loops holes
almost everything is good. just some little problems that its getting worst the more you read... the timeline of everything is messed... if i calculated right its 130 chps = 5 days ... and he has a date on one days on the next day he talks like it was like a week ago ... and i still dont know how the mc look like... because extreme handsome its not a description ... But its a translation... the translation its good ... not perfect ( too much chinese slang ) but its perfect readable
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From the title of the story, we know what to expect: quality content, with an excellent translation as well.
Gostei bastante espero que continue a escrever e dificil de encontrar este tipo de fanfic bem escrito --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Reveal Spoiler One thing is sure translator is cooking, and all I want you is to keep cooking...... . . . appreciate you, my fellow culture brother.
I really like it [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Reminds me of βI really donβt want to open a harem hereβ must be translations of the same work, itβs really cool tho cause this is different enough to that translation to be its own version of the original, I recommend reading both to enjoy the differences and similarities between them
Ha sido una historia interesante hasta ahora, toca ver cΓ³mo se desarrolla en futuros capΓtulos, sigue con el buen trabajo, estarΓ© apoyando esta historia en futuros capΓtulos
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Π― Π½Π΅ Π·Π½Π°Ρ ΠΊΠ°ΠΊ Π²ΡΡΠ°Π·ΠΈΡΡ ΡΠ»ΠΎΠ²Π°ΠΌΠΈ ΡΡΡ ΡΠ°Π½ΡΠΈΠΊ ΡΠ»ΠΎΠ²Π½ΠΎ Π³Π»ΠΎΡΠΎΠΊ ΡΠ²Π΅ΠΆΠ΅Π³ΠΎ Π²ΠΎΠ·Π΄ΡΡ Π° Π΅ΡΠ»ΠΈ ΡΡΠΎ Π΄Π΅ΠΉΡΡΠ²ΠΈΡΠ΅Π»ΡΠ½ΠΎ ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ΅Π²ΠΎΠ΄ Ρ ΠΊΠΈΡΠ°ΠΉΡΠΊΠΎΠ³ΠΎ ΡΠ°ΠΉΡΠ° Ρ Π±ΡΠ» Π±Ρ ΠΎΡΠ΅Π½Ρ ΡΠ°Π΄ ΠΏΠΎΠ»ΡΡΠΈΡΡ ΡΡΡΠ»ΠΊΡ ΠΎΡ Π°Π²ΡΠΎΡΠ° ΠΏΠ΅ΡΠ΅Π²ΠΎΠ΄Π° ΠΠ»Π°ΡΠΎΠΉ Π·Π° ΡΡΠΎ Π±ΡΠ΄Π΅Ρ ΠΌΠΎΠΈ ΠΈΡΠΊΡΠ΅Π½Π½ΠΈΠ΅ ΠΏΡΡΡ Π·Π²ΡΠ·Π΄
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Update faster! This novel may be generic, but it's still good. Since it's Chinese, Iβm not even worried about any NTR.
Excited to see the girl about to get hit, but satisfied when she saw Antonis get hit[img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift]
This is simply a masterpiece!!!!!! [img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=strong][img=strong][img=strong][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
La verdad no esta nada mal aunque le faltan mas texto lo veo algo corto los capitulos y tambien no se si podrias poder los nombres completos de esos hentais personajes que colocas?
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