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๐๐ข, ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ซ๐๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐๐๐. ๐ ๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ, ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐๐ซ๐๐ข๐ง ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐ข๐ง ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฅ-๐จ๐ง ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐'๐ฆ ๐๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ญ๐๐ค๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ ๐๐จ๐ซ ๐๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ, ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐๐ฌ, ๐๐๐ง๐ ๐ & ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ/๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐ญ. ๐๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐จ๐ง๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ ๐๐ฎ๐๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐ข๐ง๐ฌ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ง๐ ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐จ ๐ข๐ญ. ๐๐จ ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ, ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐๐ซ ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ง ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐จ๐ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ค, ๐ก๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ (๐๐๐ง๐ง๐๐ญ๐ญ_๐ฅ๐จ๐ฅ) ๐จ๐ซ ๐๐ง๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐ฆ (๐๐ฏ๐_๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐_). ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฎ ๐ฌ๐จ๐จ๐ง!
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I really enjoy this novel. The tension and pacing have been great, and itโs the kind of story that keeps me hooked. But lately the writing feels off, almost like itโs being auto-generated. Some arcs feel forced and drift away from the original storyline. Julian especially feels inconsistent, almost like he suddenly developed ADHD. What really bugged me was how dumb heโs been acting. Eleanor already told him that the prince is the King of Apollo, but when the Marquis mentioned it later, Julian reacted like he was hearing it for the first time. Stuff like that takes me out of the story. I think it would help a lot if you mapped out a clear storyboard of everything thatโs supposed to happen, so the plot stays consistent without getting sidetracked. The novel has huge potential, and Iโd love to see it hold onto that
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I have read a little and understood that basically as it's name implies..most women he would be intimate with would be women who already has slept with someone or many before.. . and As a possessive guy I don't like this kind of stuff even one bit because pictures being created in mind of women who would be with mc but were once under someone else or many is neither beautiful nor bearable . so just a short review and more of a reminder for those guys who are quite possessive or can't ignore/bear this aspect.....
i really enjoyed reading this overall, especially adult scenes they were so well written and carried out and every female character feels different, there may be some things/chapters/arcs which you may not like but i will suggest you to keep reading and just skip few chapters also power building explained is too tough to understand and you don't even need to, it doesn't add up anything to the story, and I will only complain about is writer forget many things or he don't want to write it, system points aren't used in last 200 chapters atleast, mc isn't making any effort to complete system task even though his life is in danger, he can do with eva anytime because she already fantasize about him but author keep pushing those chapters which doesn't make sense. it's like author doesn't want to write what character would do or plot will unfold in future, he write whatever he wants to write and the thing is i like whatever he writes but then the plot doesn't make sense, but who cares I get turned on and jurk off reading something new and different like recent marques arc. and that's what I'm here for to jerk off๐ญ๐คฃ. also i wanted queen and regina part , saint girl getting drilled. hope author writes them and don't forget about them.
i dropped this novel when he threatened his mother to belong to him i would have been okay with that if his mother had been bad to him but he said that when his mother and father have been extremely good to him.
well i first thought it was one of those books that had a good beginning and bad middle but as I went deeper it was amazing nice one there author more ink to your pen
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can somebody tell me if all novel are fully hand written or author usess some ai to make it more refined
Everything is good except the MC. Author canโt decide what type of person the Mc is even by chapter 100+. MC is the only downside to this Novel.
Probably the best novel I read here, definitely in top 3. Your update schedule is terrible and even bonus chapters for donate are unstable but I don't care because god is it good!!! I normally don't read smut novels but this has absolutely great story, plot is incredible and I love it
Its a great story if someone is into a little villainous MC. My personal favourite chapter till now has been chapter 351, Julian and Gregoria going at each other was something very exciting, it was like a challenge game going on from a proper NTR manga, I would have loved that there was expansion of that theme into the scene but no worries. Good plot, good world creation, good characters, a little more could be done on progression but overall a good read for people who like R18 fantasy novels.
One of my favorites now. Read the author's notes/warnings, accept it and enjoy the story. Good writing after you get through the first few chapters. They are not bad by any means but, like most novels, need build up. MC's personality is clear and consistent right from the start: domineering and single-minded in his goals. He will do somewhat unspeakable things. But the author made that clear from the start. The sex/smut scenes are, in my opinion, divine and yes you can call me a degenerate. But they really are exciting to read. Plot is intriguing enough. World building is sufficient. Not a lot has been revealed and that just keeps you wanting more. Gonna be parking my stones and GTs here for a good while.
Im waiting new chapter pls huury up ,, aku membutuhkan nya , sangat sulit untuk menunggu hahaha, Kumohon penulis segera update chapter terbaru
Pretty good novel, but would you mind updating the discord link from illustrations? Its not working (even if I try to write it) it says that its either expired or that I might not have permission to join.
Honestly, I love this story so far and will continue reading and supporting in the future. I just wish it was updated more like it used to be.
mc is too stupid and self centred. he gives off the feeling of those protagonists from villain novel who are idiotic enough to think whole world revolves around them. I couldn't believe how stupid mc was when he almost killed the girl who was supposed to be his point cow. Not to mention mc thinks with his d.
Couldโve been great, but the author is mudhead and his main character is just a fucking douche bag sleaze ball
I was so into this novel but the chapters after 30, it's quality is going down. MC is dumb and the author is trying to reduce other characters intelligence to match the plot wow[img=Why][img=Why]
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Warning: a scum and a rapist MC. Should have an evil tag in this novel. Canโt believe another good potential novel just to be ruined by MCโs character. Author loser character is mixing with his novel. Sigh โฆโฆ
Absolutely fantastic novel. Amazing plot, amazing smut, amazing everything. Definitely my top smut novel ever, and one of the top 10 novels plot-wise! Keep up the amazing work, Author!
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AUTHOR HERE: So I was bored during my vacation reading smuts here in webnovel and I had an idea of making one smut myself. So i made this novel as the result of my boredom. It does not contain any NTR, sharing, cuck or any things like that. I tried making it a mixture of both smut and magic development. So i hope you enjoy reading
๐๐ข, ๐ ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ซ๐๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐๐๐ญ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ ๐ ๐๐๐. ๐ ๐ซ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ, ๐ฐ๐ก๐ข๐ฅ๐ ๐ซ๐๐๐๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐๐ซ๐๐ข๐ง ๐ฐ๐๐ฌ ๐ข๐ง ๐๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ฅ-๐จ๐ง ๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐๐ ๐๐๐๐ ๐'๐ฆ ๐๐ง ๐๐ซ๐ญ๐ข๐ฌ๐ญ ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ญ๐๐ค๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ฆ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ข๐จ๐ง๐ฌ ๐๐จ๐ซ ๐๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง๐ฌ, ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐๐ฌ, ๐๐๐ง๐ ๐ & ๐๐ก๐๐ซ๐๐๐ญ๐๐ซ/๐๐จ๐ฏ๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐ญ. ๐๐จ๐ญ ๐ ๐จ๐ง๐ง๐ ๐ฅ๐ข๐ ๐๐ฎ๐๐ ๐๐ฎ๐ญ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ๐ซ ๐ฌ๐ญ๐จ๐ซ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐ฅ๐จ๐จ๐ค ๐ข๐ง๐ฌ๐๐ง๐ ๐๐ฌ ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฆ๐ข๐ ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐๐ญ๐จ๐จ๐ง, ๐๐ง๐ ๐ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ง๐ ๐๐ ๐ญ๐ก๐ ๐จ๐ง๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐จ ๐ข๐ญ. ๐๐จ ๐ฉ๐ซ๐๐ฌ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ซ๐ ๐๐ญ ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ, ๐ฃ๐ฎ๐ฌ๐ญ ๐ญ๐ก๐จ๐ฎ๐ ๐ก๐ญ ๐ข๐ญ ๐๐จ๐ฎ๐ฅ๐ ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐ฎ๐ฉ๐๐ซ ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐๐ซ๐ข๐ง๐ ๐ข๐ญ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ฅ๐ข๐๐ ๐ฏ๐ข๐ฌ๐ฎ๐๐ฅ๐ฅ๐ฒ. ๐๐ ๐ฒ๐จ๐ฎ'๐ซ๐ ๐๐จ๐ฐ๐ง ๐จ๐ซ ๐ฐ๐๐ง๐ง๐ ๐ฌ๐๐ ๐ฌ๐จ๐ฆ๐ ๐จ๐ ๐ฆ๐ฒ ๐ฐ๐จ๐ซ๐ค, ๐ก๐ข๐ญ ๐ฆ๐ ๐ฎ๐ฉ ๐จ๐ง ๐๐ข๐ฌ๐๐จ๐ซ๐ (๐๐๐ง๐ง๐๐ญ๐ญ_๐ฅ๐จ๐ฅ) ๐จ๐ซ ๐๐ง๐ฌ๐ญ๐๐ ๐ซ๐๐ฆ (๐๐ฏ๐_๐ฏ๐๐ซ๐ฌ๐_). ๐๐จ๐ฉ๐ ๐ญ๐จ ๐ก๐๐๐ซ ๐๐ซ๐จ๐ฆ ๐ฎ ๐ฌ๐จ๐จ๐ง!
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boring ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย ย
I really enjoy this novel. The tension and pacing have been great, and itโs the kind of story that keeps me hooked. But lately the writing feels off, almost like itโs being auto-generated. Some arcs feel forced and drift away from the original storyline. Julian especially feels inconsistent, almost like he suddenly developed ADHD. What really bugged me was how dumb heโs been acting. Eleanor already told him that the prince is the King of Apollo, but when the Marquis mentioned it later, Julian reacted like he was hearing it for the first time. Stuff like that takes me out of the story. I think it would help a lot if you mapped out a clear storyboard of everything thatโs supposed to happen, so the plot stays consistent without getting sidetracked. The novel has huge potential, and Iโd love to see it hold onto that
Reveal Spoiler I have read a little and understood that basically as it's name implies..most women he would be intimate with would be women who already has slept with someone or many before.. . and As a possessive guy I don't like this kind of stuff even one bit because pictures being created in mind of women who would be with mc but were once under someone else or many is neither beautiful nor bearable . so just a short review and more of a reminder for those guys who are quite possessive or can't ignore/bear this aspect.....
i really enjoyed reading this overall, especially adult scenes they were so well written and carried out and every female character feels different, there may be some things/chapters/arcs which you may not like but i will suggest you to keep reading and just skip few chapters also power building explained is too tough to understand and you don't even need to, it doesn't add up anything to the story, and I will only complain about is writer forget many things or he don't want to write it, system points aren't used in last 200 chapters atleast, mc isn't making any effort to complete system task even though his life is in danger, he can do with eva anytime because she already fantasize about him but author keep pushing those chapters which doesn't make sense. it's like author doesn't want to write what character would do or plot will unfold in future, he write whatever he wants to write and the thing is i like whatever he writes but then the plot doesn't make sense, but who cares I get turned on and jurk off reading something new and different like recent marques arc. and that's what I'm here for to jerk off๐ญ๐คฃ. also i wanted queen and regina part , saint girl getting drilled. hope author writes them and don't forget about them.
i dropped this novel when he threatened his mother to belong to him i would have been okay with that if his mother had been bad to him but he said that when his mother and father have been extremely good to him.
well i first thought it was one of those books that had a good beginning and bad middle but as I went deeper it was amazing nice one there author more ink to your pen
Reveal Spoiler can somebody tell me if all novel are fully hand written or author usess some ai to make it more refined
Everything is good except the MC. Author canโt decide what type of person the Mc is even by chapter 100+. MC is the only downside to this Novel.
Probably the best novel I read here, definitely in top 3. Your update schedule is terrible and even bonus chapters for donate are unstable but I don't care because god is it good!!! I normally don't read smut novels but this has absolutely great story, plot is incredible and I love it
Its a great story if someone is into a little villainous MC. My personal favourite chapter till now has been chapter 351, Julian and Gregoria going at each other was something very exciting, it was like a challenge game going on from a proper NTR manga, I would have loved that there was expansion of that theme into the scene but no worries. Good plot, good world creation, good characters, a little more could be done on progression but overall a good read for people who like R18 fantasy novels.
One of my favorites now. Read the author's notes/warnings, accept it and enjoy the story. Good writing after you get through the first few chapters. They are not bad by any means but, like most novels, need build up. MC's personality is clear and consistent right from the start: domineering and single-minded in his goals. He will do somewhat unspeakable things. But the author made that clear from the start. The sex/smut scenes are, in my opinion, divine and yes you can call me a degenerate. But they really are exciting to read. Plot is intriguing enough. World building is sufficient. Not a lot has been revealed and that just keeps you wanting more. Gonna be parking my stones and GTs here for a good while.
Im waiting new chapter pls huury up ,, aku membutuhkan nya , sangat sulit untuk menunggu hahaha, Kumohon penulis segera update chapter terbaru
Pretty good novel, but would you mind updating the discord link from illustrations? Its not working (even if I try to write it) it says that its either expired or that I might not have permission to join.
Honestly, I love this story so far and will continue reading and supporting in the future. I just wish it was updated more like it used to be.
mc is too stupid and self centred. he gives off the feeling of those protagonists from villain novel who are idiotic enough to think whole world revolves around them. I couldn't believe how stupid mc was when he almost killed the girl who was supposed to be his point cow. Not to mention mc thinks with his d.
Couldโve been great, but the author is mudhead and his main character is just a fucking douche bag sleaze ball
I was so into this novel but the chapters after 30, it's quality is going down. MC is dumb and the author is trying to reduce other characters intelligence to match the plot wow[img=Why][img=Why]
Reveal Spoiler Warning: a scum and a rapist MC. Should have an evil tag in this novel. Canโt believe another good potential novel just to be ruined by MCโs character. Author loser character is mixing with his novel. Sigh โฆโฆ
Absolutely fantastic novel. Amazing plot, amazing smut, amazing everything. Definitely my top smut novel ever, and one of the top 10 novels plot-wise! Keep up the amazing work, Author!
i love this novel GRAAAHHHHH!!![img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
AUTHOR HERE: So I was bored during my vacation reading smuts here in webnovel and I had an idea of making one smut myself. So i made this novel as the result of my boredom. It does not contain any NTR, sharing, cuck or any things like that. I tried making it a mixture of both smut and magic development. So i hope you enjoy reading