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The story started great was waiting for the crossover but it all went away with the dimensional travel to another world, him bonding his system to another [eternal bond] as a child .
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don't give up, it has great potential , I think it just needs to be more fast paced
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The story started great was waiting for the crossover but it all went away with the dimensional travel to another world, him bonding his system to another [eternal bond] as a child .
Lightning mcqueen Go brbbrbbrbbrbrbrbbrrbrbbrbbrbrbbrbrbrbrbbrbbbrbrbrbrbbgbbrbbrvvbrback Kachow.
don't give up, it has great potential , I think it just needs to be more fast paced
I hope you complete the story, it is very wonderful.
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