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I have nothing else to say, I enjoyed reading the available chapters. It is well written and the pacing is good. I enjoy it.
It is very well written and there are good updates. It is very well made and is a very good plot and story line. Later I think this novel would make a very good manga or manhwa. Since it is very detailed and has a steady story development.
im not even gonna bother. ive read tyranny of steel. so ive got a high bar for these novel based on reviews and authers responses im painting a very good picture and why rankings are this high. its a money trap.
Can someone explain to me why such good stories have to be wasted by trash MCs???
Vamos começar, a estória é literalmente sobre a vida de uma pessoa que apenas segue em frente, muitos querem isso e aquilo, cara isso é pura diversão e nada muito sério, e espero que fique assim, não desejo um inimigo super foda, isso não me interessa, e sim o cara pula coisa para um cacete, muita tecnologia essencial e bem mais útil, mas vocês esperam lógica de algo que tem magia???
love it 😀 😍 ❤ ♥ 💕 🙌 😀 😍 ❤ ♥ 💕 🙌 😀 😀 😍 ♥ ♥ 💕 🙌 😀 😍 ❤ ♥ 💕 🙌 😀 😍 ❤ ♥ 💕 🙌 [img=gift][img=angry][img=angry][img=golden ticket][img=thinking][img=proud][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Up to chapter 70: Okay I'll start up by saying it this novel is cheesy, but in a good way. It has a relatively OP protagonist and heavily borrows a lot from reincarnated as a slime especially at later points in the story also the protagonist seems to have less of a personality as story progresses part of that is due to the introduction of other characters part of it is due to he just kind of overtaken by the desire to progress his own life. All in all this is a decent novel, I have read better, but it is a fun feel good story.
Im kinda scared to start reading cuz all of your other books are on hiatus and im worried that you are gonna put this one on hiatus and start another book so i was wondering if the same was gonna happen to this book later and you start another book or if you are gonna keep with it Please reply author and quell my worries 🙏
I don’t normally leave reviews but the pacing is good and the worldbuilding is great but the only problem I have is the power system but overall everything is good I enjoy the story author keep up 👏👏
This is how you write a kingdom and world building novel. I love the pacing and I’m shocked this is ranked lower than those horrible novels at the top. The fight scenes are good and never ever stretched out. It has an element of slice of life which is incredible and the MC is not ANNOYING. I’ve read 150 chapters and this is just really well written. I hope we get to see this novel to the end. Author I really like it.
would have loved to rate this higher, got to about chap 120. It is truly mid, seems just like the writer is just either having fun playing to overdone tropes, or worse yet just an AI.
Got a lot of potential, but I just couldn’t get past the early chapters. Finished at 38. Sorry if I quit early but it really got cringey for me. Things that the MC shouldn’t do was forced.
DO NOT READ THIS --IS EVIL EVIL EVILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
This had some potential but author screwed it up with a completely nonsensical magic system and world building that suffered because of it.
Too many Unecessary Clichés and Tropes used here, so yeah, not worth reading much. Had a lot of hope for this but the author did well destroying that in the first 20 Chapters.
Beware, its a communist trap that tries to spread communist ideals, free stuff for everyone, eyc. Read only if it's your cup of tea.
Nah the way this book is so good. We need more world building delicious novels like this. I stayed up 24 hours to read 150 chapters. PLSSSS DROP MORE I NEED THIS LIKE OXYGEN
Good story!👍 It has almost the same feel as other fantasy novels, yet it's different. Your thinking pattern is unique, great, and funny. I started thinking about you this way after you invented the toilet. lol
story was going fine and was enjoying him building his own town but then the fiancé is introduced, and it felt like the whole story was ruined. everyone finds her perfect and it instantly becomes forced and unbearable quickly. why im dropping. 1st his fiance is also a reincarnated. 2nd he is already what feels like the peak of ability. 3rd he is 10 years old and he is introducing cars trains, electricity and more to the world in what i believe has only been less than a year. 4th everyone instantly becomes dumb around the mc and none find anything odd when he pulls the impossible out his ahh. 5th similar to reason 3 everything feels super rushed and forced plot, romance, dialogue. ... maybe come back to check out future chapters if anything changes in a year but doubt it.
Reveal Spoiler
I absolutely love this book! please, for the love of my sanity, do not drop this book. Webnovel authors have a habit of writing fantastic books only to drop it mid way! I love how you are introducing modern technology to a fantasy world! other than a few misspelled words here and there, the novel is excellent! continue the good work!
I absolutely love this, it's well written well thought out, it's just very well done. the background story the whole thing just comes together really well, in my opinion.
As of Ch 80 Too much slice of life vibes + streamroller + wish fulfilment Plot is jumping all over the place, evolution cheat is too op Not for everyone
Important Note Before You Start Reading! If you've ever read those Chinese novels where the protagonist is the "chosen one" and the entire world revolves around him—where even the most brilliant villain turns into a complete idiot when they meet the MC—then you're probably familiar with the trope. Well, this novel follows that same pattern, but with a twist: the world is, for some reason, completely brain-dead. The characters have access to magic, yet they only use the most basic spells and completely ignore the practical applications of their abilities. This is where the MC comes in. He introduces modern technology (basically, cheap ChatGPT helped) to bring everyday appliances into the world. In one chapter, he invents electricity, and the next day, he’s making air conditioners. The narrative skips over crucial inventions like transistors or semiconductors, which would have been more foundational. To top it off, the MC comes from the richest family and has the unique ability to wield all the elements—something that nobody in the world can do. But despite this, it doesn’t seem to matter at all. He has a supreme skill that less than 10 people in the entire world possess, but nobody seems to care. No one treats him like a celebrity or even a target of interest. The fact that he’s essentially a walking powerhouse is completely ignored, which just feels bizarre. No Reaction from World or No Information Spread.
I dont know if its slow or fast progression in regards with the story but i wish theres a sense of conflict, tragedy. RIGHT! the author just taking a sweet time 150+ chaps for 2mos after release? Lol.
Mc literally gave the formula for item cuz he didn't wanted enemy his reason?? they wont be able to feed their family if he took over the bussiness SHITTT novel
escrita boa e desenvolvimento ótimo também, a espera de mais capiítulos...
Author here! If you like Tensura (tensei slime datta ken), then you will absolutely love this novel. The MC uses inventions and ideas from the modern world, and uses it to create his own nation that leads a technological revolution in the world. Of course, since this is a world of magic, the MC figures out a way to combine both technology and magic into something completely different as well. As for action, there will be some eventually. Since the MC creates a nation, he will also build his own army to ward off kingdoms and nations that arent exactly okay with how fast the territory progresses. As for romance, there will be some eventually. Since the MC starts as a baby, he’ll have to grow up more before that starts to happen. The MC will be surrounded by women, but it won’t be a harem. If you like the novel, then please read, vote, comment, and review about what you like, what you don’t like, and what you want to see in the future. Happy reading! 😁📖
I have nothing else to say, I enjoyed reading the available chapters. It is well written and the pacing is good. I enjoy it.
It is very well written and there are good updates. It is very well made and is a very good plot and story line. Later I think this novel would make a very good manga or manhwa. Since it is very detailed and has a steady story development.
im not even gonna bother. ive read tyranny of steel. so ive got a high bar for these novel based on reviews and authers responses im painting a very good picture and why rankings are this high. its a money trap.
Can someone explain to me why such good stories have to be wasted by trash MCs???
Vamos começar, a estória é literalmente sobre a vida de uma pessoa que apenas segue em frente, muitos querem isso e aquilo, cara isso é pura diversão e nada muito sério, e espero que fique assim, não desejo um inimigo super foda, isso não me interessa, e sim o cara pula coisa para um cacete, muita tecnologia essencial e bem mais útil, mas vocês esperam lógica de algo que tem magia???
love it 😀 😍 ❤ ♥ 💕 🙌 😀 😍 ❤ ♥ 💕 🙌 😀 😀 😍 ♥ ♥ 💕 🙌 😀 😍 ❤ ♥ 💕 🙌 😀 😍 ❤ ♥ 💕 🙌 [img=gift][img=angry][img=angry][img=golden ticket][img=thinking][img=proud][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Up to chapter 70: Okay I'll start up by saying it this novel is cheesy, but in a good way. It has a relatively OP protagonist and heavily borrows a lot from reincarnated as a slime especially at later points in the story also the protagonist seems to have less of a personality as story progresses part of that is due to the introduction of other characters part of it is due to he just kind of overtaken by the desire to progress his own life. All in all this is a decent novel, I have read better, but it is a fun feel good story.
Im kinda scared to start reading cuz all of your other books are on hiatus and im worried that you are gonna put this one on hiatus and start another book so i was wondering if the same was gonna happen to this book later and you start another book or if you are gonna keep with it Please reply author and quell my worries 🙏
I don’t normally leave reviews but the pacing is good and the worldbuilding is great but the only problem I have is the power system but overall everything is good I enjoy the story author keep up 👏👏
This is how you write a kingdom and world building novel. I love the pacing and I’m shocked this is ranked lower than those horrible novels at the top. The fight scenes are good and never ever stretched out. It has an element of slice of life which is incredible and the MC is not ANNOYING. I’ve read 150 chapters and this is just really well written. I hope we get to see this novel to the end. Author I really like it.
would have loved to rate this higher, got to about chap 120. It is truly mid, seems just like the writer is just either having fun playing to overdone tropes, or worse yet just an AI.
Got a lot of potential, but I just couldn’t get past the early chapters. Finished at 38. Sorry if I quit early but it really got cringey for me. Things that the MC shouldn’t do was forced.
DO NOT READ THIS --IS EVIL EVIL EVILLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
This had some potential but author screwed it up with a completely nonsensical magic system and world building that suffered because of it.
Too many Unecessary Clichés and Tropes used here, so yeah, not worth reading much. Had a lot of hope for this but the author did well destroying that in the first 20 Chapters.
Beware, its a communist trap that tries to spread communist ideals, free stuff for everyone, eyc. Read only if it's your cup of tea.
Nah the way this book is so good. We need more world building delicious novels like this. I stayed up 24 hours to read 150 chapters. PLSSSS DROP MORE I NEED THIS LIKE OXYGEN
Good story!👍 It has almost the same feel as other fantasy novels, yet it's different. Your thinking pattern is unique, great, and funny. I started thinking about you this way after you invented the toilet. lol
story was going fine and was enjoying him building his own town but then the fiancé is introduced, and it felt like the whole story was ruined. everyone finds her perfect and it instantly becomes forced and unbearable quickly. why im dropping. 1st his fiance is also a reincarnated. 2nd he is already what feels like the peak of ability. 3rd he is 10 years old and he is introducing cars trains, electricity and more to the world in what i believe has only been less than a year. 4th everyone instantly becomes dumb around the mc and none find anything odd when he pulls the impossible out his ahh. 5th similar to reason 3 everything feels super rushed and forced plot, romance, dialogue. ... maybe come back to check out future chapters if anything changes in a year but doubt it.
Reveal Spoiler I absolutely love this book! please, for the love of my sanity, do not drop this book. Webnovel authors have a habit of writing fantastic books only to drop it mid way! I love how you are introducing modern technology to a fantasy world! other than a few misspelled words here and there, the novel is excellent! continue the good work!
I absolutely love this, it's well written well thought out, it's just very well done. the background story the whole thing just comes together really well, in my opinion.
As of Ch 80 Too much slice of life vibes + streamroller + wish fulfilment Plot is jumping all over the place, evolution cheat is too op Not for everyone
Important Note Before You Start Reading! If you've ever read those Chinese novels where the protagonist is the "chosen one" and the entire world revolves around him—where even the most brilliant villain turns into a complete idiot when they meet the MC—then you're probably familiar with the trope. Well, this novel follows that same pattern, but with a twist: the world is, for some reason, completely brain-dead. The characters have access to magic, yet they only use the most basic spells and completely ignore the practical applications of their abilities. This is where the MC comes in. He introduces modern technology (basically, cheap ChatGPT helped) to bring everyday appliances into the world. In one chapter, he invents electricity, and the next day, he’s making air conditioners. The narrative skips over crucial inventions like transistors or semiconductors, which would have been more foundational. To top it off, the MC comes from the richest family and has the unique ability to wield all the elements—something that nobody in the world can do. But despite this, it doesn’t seem to matter at all. He has a supreme skill that less than 10 people in the entire world possess, but nobody seems to care. No one treats him like a celebrity or even a target of interest. The fact that he’s essentially a walking powerhouse is completely ignored, which just feels bizarre. No Reaction from World or No Information Spread.
I dont know if its slow or fast progression in regards with the story but i wish theres a sense of conflict, tragedy. RIGHT! the author just taking a sweet time 150+ chaps for 2mos after release? Lol.
Mc literally gave the formula for item cuz he didn't wanted enemy his reason?? they wont be able to feed their family if he took over the bussiness SHITTT novel
escrita boa e desenvolvimento ótimo também, a espera de mais capiítulos...
Author here! If you like Tensura (tensei slime datta ken), then you will absolutely love this novel. The MC uses inventions and ideas from the modern world, and uses it to create his own nation that leads a technological revolution in the world. Of course, since this is a world of magic, the MC figures out a way to combine both technology and magic into something completely different as well. As for action, there will be some eventually. Since the MC creates a nation, he will also build his own army to ward off kingdoms and nations that arent exactly okay with how fast the territory progresses. As for romance, there will be some eventually. Since the MC starts as a baby, he’ll have to grow up more before that starts to happen. The MC will be surrounded by women, but it won’t be a harem. If you like the novel, then please read, vote, comment, and review about what you like, what you don’t like, and what you want to see in the future. Happy reading! 😁📖