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It's really really nonsense. It's just that I'm a religious person, so I won't continue. I just want to leave my evaluation only from my point of view, so that no fool comes and says that because of you, good novels are lost. It's nonsense. I don't want anyone to tell me that.
Absolute cinema. Perfectly executed imo, I’ve been wanting a biblically accurate angel fanfic for any verse / series. This hits all the right spots for me as well, and no romance to interfere in progression or plot?? Hell yes. I am loving this ong! I need more updates though for sure lol, but this is greatly done.
A very good read, it's really interesting, I want to see how the war starts, good work author, I look forward to the other chapters. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a masterpiece.Defenetly in my top 5 favorite fanfics. Keep up the good work autor.
Good and mor chapter hehehehehe. 02?#(#!#!#!$!$;$;$+$(($!$;$;$+$($($+#;#+#(#+#;$;#!#(#(#+#+#+#;$;$;;$+#+#;#;#+#+#;#;#+#;#;#+#+#;#;+#+#+#+2+#+
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can you explain the tags? why are there harem and non harem tags together? is it related to the story?
I highly recommend this story. It's fun, engaging, and somewhat well-written (aside from minor spelling errors in the early chapters). The author, Er_Moon, has an obvious talent for storytelling - as well as describing locations and new interactions. The dialogue is somewhat believable, not the best, but it improves as the story progresses. There is, however, one major critique I have. I feel the author has wasted so much time in the underworld. As I write this, it is Chapter 26, and the author seems to be making excuses to keep his angelic character, Moon, in the underworld and away from other angels and Heaven. It is getting a little frustrating if I'm being honest. It's also important to mention that he hasn't encountered any Devils. Goblins and Orcs? Yes. But not Devils. Yeah.
The story is good. Normally, there are almost no DxD fanfictions that feature Biblically Accurate Angels. This is the first story to present something like this. Keep going! I will be waiting for Moon to unleash an Eldritch Horror upon the supernatural world.
ALLRIGHT, it's time to turn the review section into a question-and-answer format. Ask me anything that you want, heck i will even answer what food i like. XD
high school dxd and no harem in the same sentence deserves an instant 5 stars
It's really really nonsense. It's just that I'm a religious person, so I won't continue. I just want to leave my evaluation only from my point of view, so that no fool comes and says that because of you, good novels are lost. It's nonsense. I don't want anyone to tell me that.
Absolute cinema. Perfectly executed imo, I’ve been wanting a biblically accurate angel fanfic for any verse / series. This hits all the right spots for me as well, and no romance to interfere in progression or plot?? Hell yes. I am loving this ong! I need more updates though for sure lol, but this is greatly done.
A very good read, it's really interesting, I want to see how the war starts, good work author, I look forward to the other chapters. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
This is a masterpiece.Defenetly in my top 5 favorite fanfics. Keep up the good work autor.
Good and mor chapter hehehehehe. 02?#(#!#!#!$!$;$;$+$(($!$;$;$+$($($+#;#+#(#+#;$;#!#(#(#+#+#+#;$;$;;$+#+#;#;#+#+#;#;#+#;#;#+#+#;#;+#+#+#+2+#+
Extrêmement cool. ..........................................................................................................................................................................................
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can you explain the tags? why are there harem and non harem tags together? is it related to the story?
I highly recommend this story. It's fun, engaging, and somewhat well-written (aside from minor spelling errors in the early chapters). The author, Er_Moon, has an obvious talent for storytelling - as well as describing locations and new interactions. The dialogue is somewhat believable, not the best, but it improves as the story progresses. There is, however, one major critique I have. I feel the author has wasted so much time in the underworld. As I write this, it is Chapter 26, and the author seems to be making excuses to keep his angelic character, Moon, in the underworld and away from other angels and Heaven. It is getting a little frustrating if I'm being honest. It's also important to mention that he hasn't encountered any Devils. Goblins and Orcs? Yes. But not Devils. Yeah.
The story is good. Normally, there are almost no DxD fanfictions that feature Biblically Accurate Angels. This is the first story to present something like this. Keep going! I will be waiting for Moon to unleash an Eldritch Horror upon the supernatural world.
ALLRIGHT, it's time to turn the review section into a question-and-answer format. Ask me anything that you want, heck i will even answer what food i like. XD
high school dxd and no harem in the same sentence deserves an instant 5 stars