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The thing that made me drop it is that starting at chapter 117, a chapter is skipped every time, so half of the story is missing. If not for that, I would still happily be keeping up to date with the novel. Also, I find the constant name-changing funny, not annoying. There's only two main characters, and it's super easy to tell which one is which
Has potential but sadly it's not an original but a translation. Hope someone picks it up and rewrites it so it actually sounds natural and not robotic.
pretty good novel The only big problem I have is that sometimes they change up the MC's name and that they glaze China so much that I think I need to carry towels just in case the author needs one
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it's a general ok fic it's Chinese so the standard stuff that comes with it some stuff is annoying but not a deal breaker for a turn your brain off so ya if your finding for a game dev like fic read if not you aren't missing anything grand
a huge chunk is your usual garbage reactions. I also notice MC and almost everyone were Americans, yet somehow they were Chinese on the inside. China is also meant to be USA and the Great Chinese Kingdom supposed to be China. This seem to be prevalent currently on Hollywood based fanfics where USA were written as China. Anyway TL clearly didn't do shit about it.
I'm giving it this because some chapters seem like they're not in the right place. And I'm just getting thrown all over the place, I've read it from the beginning. And I'm still being thrown all over the place.
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it's perfection and I have a liking for this cinds of books so ther is bias the rating is so low becose I can't have enough and want more characters second li names they are so hard becose of them it's hard to now woes prospective I'm seing through I can't even remember the mc's name and I'm 99% shore it changed and this flows are minare don't get discouraged from reading becose the main part is game story telling and that is slow and concise alowing alot of information to enter your mind whitaut to much or any repetition of information
I love this story, but pls try to be a bit more consistent with the character name. It keeps changing, and it is sometimes difficult to keep up.
It's getting difficult to read, it's already the third name of the protagonist, the translator is getting lazy, he doesn't read what he's translating, and it's completely ruining the novel, it seems like there are several protagonists and I keep wondering who this is.
Good story if your just in it for the game development. Tagged romance and harem but the only person he’s interacted with up to current chapter besides a phone call he immediatly hung up, is his sister, and even then there is very little interaction between them. Good novel, do recommend but misleading tags. A lot of the standard things to expect from a Chinese translation, names and numbers being a mess along with some strong nationalism.
I love this story, but the nationalism is too much. The MC is constantly denying features to people not from his country and changing in-game lore to fit this only "Dragon Kingdom" ideal. I understand its a fanfic, and the author can do whatever they want, but us readings can also do the same.
you should totally add mass effect and dragon age into your story they would be amazing in vr. Your doing really well looking forward to the rest of the story keep up the good work.
you really need to edit the sentences bro it's hard to read if the word use in the sentence does not really work in that sentence
it fascinates me that this could've been an interesting read, if not for the fact that the author couldn't bring out the potential of it. Just like most Chinese written fics
the story would be very interesting if of course wasn't a Chinese fic. sadly it is.and like 99% of these fics they have the racism going on. it seems the transelator instead of cleaning the trash just replace few names to English and copy paste it on Google translate or Ai . the result is this poorly transelated fic. a piece of advice? if you don't have any thing to read. you can turn your brain off and read it otherwise don't even bother. i might sound harsh, all i can say is read the first 10 chapters and judge yourself.
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The thing that made me drop it is that starting at chapter 117, a chapter is skipped every time, so half of the story is missing. If not for that, I would still happily be keeping up to date with the novel. Also, I find the constant name-changing funny, not annoying. There's only two main characters, and it's super easy to tell which one is which
Has potential but sadly it's not an original but a translation. Hope someone picks it up and rewrites it so it actually sounds natural and not robotic.
pretty good novel The only big problem I have is that sometimes they change up the MC's name and that they glaze China so much that I think I need to carry towels just in case the author needs one
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it's a general ok fic it's Chinese so the standard stuff that comes with it some stuff is annoying but not a deal breaker for a turn your brain off so ya if your finding for a game dev like fic read if not you aren't missing anything grand
a huge chunk is your usual garbage reactions. I also notice MC and almost everyone were Americans, yet somehow they were Chinese on the inside. China is also meant to be USA and the Great Chinese Kingdom supposed to be China. This seem to be prevalent currently on Hollywood based fanfics where USA were written as China. Anyway TL clearly didn't do shit about it.
I'm giving it this because some chapters seem like they're not in the right place. And I'm just getting thrown all over the place, I've read it from the beginning. And I'm still being thrown all over the place.
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it's perfection and I have a liking for this cinds of books so ther is bias the rating is so low becose I can't have enough and want more characters second li names they are so hard becose of them it's hard to now woes prospective I'm seing through I can't even remember the mc's name and I'm 99% shore it changed and this flows are minare don't get discouraged from reading becose the main part is game story telling and that is slow and concise alowing alot of information to enter your mind whitaut to much or any repetition of information
I love this story, but pls try to be a bit more consistent with the character name. It keeps changing, and it is sometimes difficult to keep up.
It's getting difficult to read, it's already the third name of the protagonist, the translator is getting lazy, he doesn't read what he's translating, and it's completely ruining the novel, it seems like there are several protagonists and I keep wondering who this is.
Good story if your just in it for the game development. Tagged romance and harem but the only person he’s interacted with up to current chapter besides a phone call he immediatly hung up, is his sister, and even then there is very little interaction between them. Good novel, do recommend but misleading tags. A lot of the standard things to expect from a Chinese translation, names and numbers being a mess along with some strong nationalism.
I love this story, but the nationalism is too much. The MC is constantly denying features to people not from his country and changing in-game lore to fit this only "Dragon Kingdom" ideal. I understand its a fanfic, and the author can do whatever they want, but us readings can also do the same.
you should totally add mass effect and dragon age into your story they would be amazing in vr. Your doing really well looking forward to the rest of the story keep up the good work.
you really need to edit the sentences bro it's hard to read if the word use in the sentence does not really work in that sentence
it fascinates me that this could've been an interesting read, if not for the fact that the author couldn't bring out the potential of it. Just like most Chinese written fics
the story would be very interesting if of course wasn't a Chinese fic. sadly it is.and like 99% of these fics they have the racism going on. it seems the transelator instead of cleaning the trash just replace few names to English and copy paste it on Google translate or Ai . the result is this poorly transelated fic. a piece of advice? if you don't have any thing to read. you can turn your brain off and read it otherwise don't even bother. i might sound harsh, all i can say is read the first 10 chapters and judge yourself.
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