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Bastante potencial, mas está a 3 meses sem postar...........................................................................................................................................................................
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All the conversation, dialogues, and how he thinks will make you cringe at how immature, inexperienced, and awkward it is. It's like the Original Author has yet to actually talk to people. It could also be intentional because the mc is somewhat of an Uchiha but that would be coping. The premise was good but the writing just ruins it. Every good idea will always be ruined by mediocrity. All in all, if you're going to read this, just skim through everything and you're good.
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very good ................... ............. ............. ............ ......... ........... ......... ........ ........... ........... ........
I dont care what other people said...I like this story. so please give more chapters and faster updates please. I dont care what other people said...I like this story. so please give more chapters and faster updates please.
Frankly, I'm going to say it up to date, it's pretty good, and when people saw the ridiculous reviews in the comment, I questioned it at first, no, what are you waiting for, just try to read it with pleasure, you don't have to expect anything, unfortunately, this hate is everywhere
No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem!
actually i found this work on an mtl site. i didn't pay attention at that time. it turns out that this work is a hidden gem.
We're off to a bad start, the guy who wrote this has no fucking clue about Japanese culture, no one calls other people "Kuhai" like their counterpart "Senpai", but hey, I'm not going to read shit like this.
Yeah, if you expect to see your favorite characters in a different and more exciting setting, then this is not for you. Expect heavy Chinese influence as the characters will become apathetic yo things and act more like bullies. I have no problem with harem, but how the Mc justified it was atrocious(See hypocritical tendencies). The Mc is arrogant. A kind character has become a twisted basic jade beauty bully from Mount Hua sect, except now she's one of the main herorines. In summary, I think I have wasted my time.
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So far, this translation is great. I hope MC goes through all of JJK and fights a full-powered Sukuna. I also hope future fights are hard for MC, so he can have one of those near-death JJK moments that every JJK fan loves.
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Original ---> 综漫:写轮眼术式,从日常番开始 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I read the OG and it’s not bad but also not that good So I just wanted too ask if u edited or Changed some things in the story ?
This is amazing bro keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Hey this is a good Fic and for the moment i really like the way is taked. The Mc have his chance to grow his personality, and i want to see how he will go depelove on the pat of chapters. the multiverscrossover are fics with such potencial... so we need only wait to see the plot working. Thks for give us this fic to us, dont droop it
[img=More pls][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Smitten][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Smitten][img=thinking][img=nervous][img=proud][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=coins][img=coins]
Te soy sincero, me gusta como es la historia y como tradujistes los nombres, sigo en espera de mas capitulos asi que le doy animos para que siga
NEW TRANSLATION!! Tbh, when I first picked it up, I had mixed feelings about it as the original title was so messed up that it got me feeling a bit skeptical about it's story, it's quality but DAMN, this IS one of the, if not the best Chinese fanfic I've worked on and I'm proud of the result so, I wanna share with you all my excitement, my addictiveness to this work! HAPPY READING!
Bastante potencial, mas está a 3 meses sem postar...........................................................................................................................................................................
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All the conversation, dialogues, and how he thinks will make you cringe at how immature, inexperienced, and awkward it is. It's like the Original Author has yet to actually talk to people. It could also be intentional because the mc is somewhat of an Uchiha but that would be coping. The premise was good but the writing just ruins it. Every good idea will always be ruined by mediocrity. All in all, if you're going to read this, just skim through everything and you're good.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
very good ................... ............. ............. ............ ......... ........... ......... ........ ........... ........... ........
I dont care what other people said...I like this story. so please give more chapters and faster updates please. I dont care what other people said...I like this story. so please give more chapters and faster updates please.
Frankly, I'm going to say it up to date, it's pretty good, and when people saw the ridiculous reviews in the comment, I questioned it at first, no, what are you waiting for, just try to read it with pleasure, you don't have to expect anything, unfortunately, this hate is everywhere
No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem! No harem!
actually i found this work on an mtl site. i didn't pay attention at that time. it turns out that this work is a hidden gem.
We're off to a bad start, the guy who wrote this has no fucking clue about Japanese culture, no one calls other people "Kuhai" like their counterpart "Senpai", but hey, I'm not going to read shit like this.
Yeah, if you expect to see your favorite characters in a different and more exciting setting, then this is not for you. Expect heavy Chinese influence as the characters will become apathetic yo things and act more like bullies. I have no problem with harem, but how the Mc justified it was atrocious(See hypocritical tendencies). The Mc is arrogant. A kind character has become a twisted basic jade beauty bully from Mount Hua sect, except now she's one of the main herorines. In summary, I think I have wasted my time.
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
So far, this translation is great. I hope MC goes through all of JJK and fights a full-powered Sukuna. I also hope future fights are hard for MC, so he can have one of those near-death JJK moments that every JJK fan loves.
[img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Envy][img=Moneybags][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]
Original ---> 综漫:写轮眼术式,从日常番开始 ................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
I read the OG and it’s not bad but also not that good So I just wanted too ask if u edited or Changed some things in the story ?
This is amazing bro keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=update][img=update]
Hey this is a good Fic and for the moment i really like the way is taked. The Mc have his chance to grow his personality, and i want to see how he will go depelove on the pat of chapters. the multiverscrossover are fics with such potencial... so we need only wait to see the plot working. Thks for give us this fic to us, dont droop it
[img=More pls][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Smitten][img=Moneybags][img=Moneybags][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Smitten][img=thinking][img=nervous][img=proud][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=disgusted][img=coins][img=coins]
Te soy sincero, me gusta como es la historia y como tradujistes los nombres, sigo en espera de mas capitulos asi que le doy animos para que siga
NEW TRANSLATION!! Tbh, when I first picked it up, I had mixed feelings about it as the original title was so messed up that it got me feeling a bit skeptical about it's story, it's quality but DAMN, this IS one of the, if not the best Chinese fanfic I've worked on and I'm proud of the result so, I wanna share with you all my excitement, my addictiveness to this work! HAPPY READING!