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It was enjoyable and fun to read at first. Nothing fancy but just fun read to pass the time. But as I read more chapters till around chapter 129, it became so chaotic and not readable anymore for me. Some examples for chaotic writing, 1. Name changes to chinese in some chapters. 2. Places/venues doesn’t align sometimes. 3. Chaotic scenes happening here and there that doesn’t make sense at all. 4. Some questionable happenings in some chapters that again doesn’t make sense. And a lot more. It would have been a decent read even if the MC is op from the start and even with his science will fulfillment nonsense its just that so many chaotic scenes and inconsistencies and like a literal drop of IQ of some characters ruined it for me.
MC is dumb and too Chinese . His mentality is wierd and plot is cringe. Writing is fine. but again, plot is straight up dumb. not recommend to read. (Plus this novel's translation is available on Webnovel already)
By chapter 50 or so it's longer naruto Or ninjas n chakra it's full on sci fi. Good idea but wrong execution, it would've been better if the world setting was a technological or kinda medival then d tech uplift would make sense but in helicopters, trucks,phones in naruto is just weird ninjas can move faster on foot or using ninjutsu. And d mc got a bit of common sense cuz he decided to build up his village instead of playing hero or fix it but other then that he's pretty dumb. Mc decides to create living metal, to make power armor basically, and also almost all his focus is on building things which he got no prior knowledge of n have to start from scratch basically instead of using common sense n using wats already free n plenty, his system is a "scientific"Op system but he's wasting it
This is my type of funfic. I like, when MC's that thinks with his head and changes world this help of tech. And I always wanted to know the origins of chacra, this story for now is going in right direction. 🤣
Awesome story... absolutely awesome! yes there are a few mistakes here and there, but they are easy to overlook, especially as you speed read the story because you can't wait to find out what happens next. there is humor and, while the MC has reached a high level of strength, he doesn't kill unnecessarily as they are all his "value customers" hehehe
This is more addicting and interesting than I thought 😭 can't for more chapter! Thank you author san for your hard word. I hope to see more chapter coming up soon
I don't have to worry too much about the star rating, but what I'm curious about is that I tried reading the original version and saw why there are many missing points in the translation of this story.
honestly, it's almost impossible for me to read this without facepalming, all of his changes and "scientific" approach, which no one thought of, make me react like in this meme
pretty good stuff once you get over the initial wave of gringe on MC's power and naming,the story has a big focus on politics and modernizing everything the mc can put his hands on(witch imo helps a lot to digest the cringy combat aspects XD),all in all if you like a fic with more then just violence the political flare this got going might be for you,do recomend trying ps.:translations is pretty good too,probably helps a lot more then we realize in making this a pretty funny experience with MC trolling everyone with a straight face
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It used to be rather interesting with unique ideas and world-building, but now it feels like there's no tension or intrigue. The MC gets whatever he wants with no struggle, and lately, it's starting to feel like every chapter is just a victory lap. The MC effortlessly learns Sage Mode from just the curse mark, has a giant mech at the start of the series that can rival tailed beasts, and even the Akatsuki is turned into a joke as they're used to test his defense system.
a good fun si fic base on suna sadly or greatly this fic skips the main grinding phase and went to the meat of it
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I have read this novel before in wuxiabox I think. it's a good novel. would have loved more if there was more geopolitical economic, military moves with no involvement of other fiction like super seminary if I am not wrong(as I have not read it if it is a novel), purely Naruto fanfic with modern tech
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Free Audiobooks youtube,com/@NovelLoveHearing Naruto - Leader of Kusagakure The Mighty Dragons Are Dead Naruto The Wind Calamity Versatile Mage Starting with the White Tiger Pendant Naruto Uchiha’s Unserious Saga Starsea Fleet Age Of The Lord Apocalypse I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops Loot Two Realms Shuttle Gate Don t Call Me a Demon! And More
all was good but mc being so strong but submissive infront of tsunade , getting beaten up and he is leader ? I thought he was sigma male nah pure retard
its good, really, solid story that keeps you engaged and wants more. Nice quality of writing and story develops really well, have some issues with pace of developing his village but thats not great flaw. solid work.
Thank you for this story. Finally a hidden sand book that explores more the possibilities of the world and the land. With science and advances towards what can be is greatly refreshing. Sunagakure was severely underrated but is actually a treasure waiting to be unearthed. Highly praise the setting and a recommended read to anyone.
A naruto fanfic i enjoyed after a long time.. Nice story keep going brother............................................... ..... .............
En un inicio no estuvo mal y en general no esta tan mal para quienes inicia en el mundo de los FF pero para aquellos que ya han estado un tiempo en este mundo entenderán claramente el problema del FF al MC todo le sale como quiere sin problemas personajes que nada que ver con la historia del MC pero que son de la trama mágicamente se cruzan en su camino y confían en el MC daña la historia de fondo y por ultimo algo a lo que la mayoría nos acostumbramos en el mundo de FF los tecnicismos chinos si bien los intentan esconder y no son muchos los que hay son como una montaña en una planicie
It’s a pretty good story with an interesting start for a Naruto ff but the progression is extremely fast
I rarely write reviews, but the translation is really good with original storyline/plot. Must read imo, if you’re tired of the usual plot line.
Una historia agradable y con un enfoque distinto a los fanfics estándar. Que explote las condiciones geográficas de forma más profunda de lo normal es algo que aprecio.
Honestly, it’s very good. I’ve actually wanted a different kind of Naruto ff. Everytime some writes a naruto ff, we know where they’re going to, who their friends are and the rest. This ff gives a new perspective on it, you’d love it. Plus, author gave mc a new kekkei genkai 🫠
OP mc with electromagnetic powers and uses some knowledge from earth to push industrialization. this is just around chunin exams, and kazekage just died and mc has taken over as new kage. its good translation, give it try
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It was enjoyable and fun to read at first. Nothing fancy but just fun read to pass the time. But as I read more chapters till around chapter 129, it became so chaotic and not readable anymore for me. Some examples for chaotic writing, 1. Name changes to chinese in some chapters. 2. Places/venues doesn’t align sometimes. 3. Chaotic scenes happening here and there that doesn’t make sense at all. 4. Some questionable happenings in some chapters that again doesn’t make sense. And a lot more. It would have been a decent read even if the MC is op from the start and even with his science will fulfillment nonsense its just that so many chaotic scenes and inconsistencies and like a literal drop of IQ of some characters ruined it for me.
MC is dumb and too Chinese . His mentality is wierd and plot is cringe. Writing is fine. but again, plot is straight up dumb. not recommend to read. (Plus this novel's translation is available on Webnovel already)
By chapter 50 or so it's longer naruto Or ninjas n chakra it's full on sci fi. Good idea but wrong execution, it would've been better if the world setting was a technological or kinda medival then d tech uplift would make sense but in helicopters, trucks,phones in naruto is just weird ninjas can move faster on foot or using ninjutsu. And d mc got a bit of common sense cuz he decided to build up his village instead of playing hero or fix it but other then that he's pretty dumb. Mc decides to create living metal, to make power armor basically, and also almost all his focus is on building things which he got no prior knowledge of n have to start from scratch basically instead of using common sense n using wats already free n plenty, his system is a "scientific"Op system but he's wasting it
This is my type of funfic. I like, when MC's that thinks with his head and changes world this help of tech. And I always wanted to know the origins of chacra, this story for now is going in right direction. 🤣
Awesome story... absolutely awesome! yes there are a few mistakes here and there, but they are easy to overlook, especially as you speed read the story because you can't wait to find out what happens next. there is humor and, while the MC has reached a high level of strength, he doesn't kill unnecessarily as they are all his "value customers" hehehe
This is more addicting and interesting than I thought 😭 can't for more chapter! Thank you author san for your hard word. I hope to see more chapter coming up soon
I don't have to worry too much about the star rating, but what I'm curious about is that I tried reading the original version and saw why there are many missing points in the translation of this story.
honestly, it's almost impossible for me to read this without facepalming, all of his changes and "scientific" approach, which no one thought of, make me react like in this meme
pretty good stuff once you get over the initial wave of gringe on MC's power and naming,the story has a big focus on politics and modernizing everything the mc can put his hands on(witch imo helps a lot to digest the cringy combat aspects XD),all in all if you like a fic with more then just violence the political flare this got going might be for you,do recomend trying ps.:translations is pretty good too,probably helps a lot more then we realize in making this a pretty funny experience with MC trolling everyone with a straight face
More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!More!
It used to be rather interesting with unique ideas and world-building, but now it feels like there's no tension or intrigue. The MC gets whatever he wants with no struggle, and lately, it's starting to feel like every chapter is just a victory lap. The MC effortlessly learns Sage Mode from just the curse mark, has a giant mech at the start of the series that can rival tailed beasts, and even the Akatsuki is turned into a joke as they're used to test his defense system.
a good fun si fic base on suna sadly or greatly this fic skips the main grinding phase and went to the meat of it
Reveal Spoiler I have read this novel before in wuxiabox I think. it's a good novel. would have loved more if there was more geopolitical economic, military moves with no involvement of other fiction like super seminary if I am not wrong(as I have not read it if it is a novel), purely Naruto fanfic with modern tech
Reveal Spoiler Free Audiobooks youtube,com/@NovelLoveHearing Naruto - Leader of Kusagakure The Mighty Dragons Are Dead Naruto The Wind Calamity Versatile Mage Starting with the White Tiger Pendant Naruto Uchiha’s Unserious Saga Starsea Fleet Age Of The Lord Apocalypse I Can See the HP Bar, Killing Monsters Drops Loot Two Realms Shuttle Gate Don t Call Me a Demon! And More
all was good but mc being so strong but submissive infront of tsunade , getting beaten up and he is leader ? I thought he was sigma male nah pure retard
its good, really, solid story that keeps you engaged and wants more. Nice quality of writing and story develops really well, have some issues with pace of developing his village but thats not great flaw. solid work.
Thank you for this story. Finally a hidden sand book that explores more the possibilities of the world and the land. With science and advances towards what can be is greatly refreshing. Sunagakure was severely underrated but is actually a treasure waiting to be unearthed. Highly praise the setting and a recommended read to anyone.
A naruto fanfic i enjoyed after a long time.. Nice story keep going brother............................................... ..... .............
En un inicio no estuvo mal y en general no esta tan mal para quienes inicia en el mundo de los FF pero para aquellos que ya han estado un tiempo en este mundo entenderán claramente el problema del FF al MC todo le sale como quiere sin problemas personajes que nada que ver con la historia del MC pero que son de la trama mágicamente se cruzan en su camino y confían en el MC daña la historia de fondo y por ultimo algo a lo que la mayoría nos acostumbramos en el mundo de FF los tecnicismos chinos si bien los intentan esconder y no son muchos los que hay son como una montaña en una planicie
It’s a pretty good story with an interesting start for a Naruto ff but the progression is extremely fast
I rarely write reviews, but the translation is really good with original storyline/plot. Must read imo, if you’re tired of the usual plot line.
Una historia agradable y con un enfoque distinto a los fanfics estándar. Que explote las condiciones geográficas de forma más profunda de lo normal es algo que aprecio.
Honestly, it’s very good. I’ve actually wanted a different kind of Naruto ff. Everytime some writes a naruto ff, we know where they’re going to, who their friends are and the rest. This ff gives a new perspective on it, you’d love it. Plus, author gave mc a new kekkei genkai 🫠
OP mc with electromagnetic powers and uses some knowledge from earth to push industrialization. this is just around chunin exams, and kazekage just died and mc has taken over as new kage. its good translation, give it try
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Try it............................... It's good!.......................................................................................................................