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Overall it's pretty good, don't understan why so many are complaining. The thing that bring the story down however is the translation. I've read over 40 chapters and grammar goes downhill quickly from here. Asking for money from this level of TL is crazy.
it is extremely generic tbh. first of all the character template is too boring with alot of cheats. and I swear I have read like 5 other fanfictions with the same principle of mixed bloodline so the uchiha shuns him which is so stupid because according to canon the uchiha are a clan of love and are extremely protective of their own, always the same generic plot of school then 3rd hokage notice then tsunade or orochimaru become teacher etc etc. I could tell without reading to the end of the novel that the plot will continue the same road as canon and the end boss will def be kaguya and the ninja war. it is in my opinion boring
1. There is a system tag but no system in the novel. 2. The synopsis portrayed the MC as the OP character but he is not. That synopsis is misleading. 3. Slow progress with a lot of mistakes. My rating is 2.5/5 no offence.
Nice story but I have some suggestion make MC so badass and please make him more responsible and trying to save Rin Obito Kakashi and Minato and Kushina and make him so strong even Madara was so exited to fight him
Would be better if the TL wasnt lazy and the MCs name was stupid. Character names are butchered a lot and even the mcs name gets swapped in different chapters.
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Can you tell me the name of the original? I've been looking for it and couldn't find it anywhere, but they changed the name. Can you tell me the name of the original? I've been looking for it and couldn't find it anywhere, but they changed the name.
Overall it's pretty good, don't understan why so many are complaining. The thing that bring the story down however is the translation. I've read over 40 chapters and grammar goes downhill quickly from here. Asking for money from this level of TL is crazy.
it is extremely generic tbh. first of all the character template is too boring with alot of cheats. and I swear I have read like 5 other fanfictions with the same principle of mixed bloodline so the uchiha shuns him which is so stupid because according to canon the uchiha are a clan of love and are extremely protective of their own, always the same generic plot of school then 3rd hokage notice then tsunade or orochimaru become teacher etc etc. I could tell without reading to the end of the novel that the plot will continue the same road as canon and the end boss will def be kaguya and the ninja war. it is in my opinion boring
1. There is a system tag but no system in the novel. 2. The synopsis portrayed the MC as the OP character but he is not. That synopsis is misleading. 3. Slow progress with a lot of mistakes. My rating is 2.5/5 no offence.
Nice story but I have some suggestion make MC so badass and please make him more responsible and trying to save Rin Obito Kakashi and Minato and Kushina and make him so strong even Madara was so exited to fight him
Would be better if the TL wasnt lazy and the MCs name was stupid. Character names are butchered a lot and even the mcs name gets swapped in different chapters.
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Can you tell me the name of the original? I've been looking for it and couldn't find it anywhere, but they changed the name. Can you tell me the name of the original? I've been looking for it and couldn't find it anywhere, but they changed the name.