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Firstly, this fanfiction is not the property of this author. this fanfiction was posted on fanfiction a long time ago and lies abandoned there. And it's fine if he was just translating, but he puts other people's chapters on his own patreon and demands money for someone else's work! It's just disgusting.
What's with the narrative? "He","The boy,"The Devil","The woman" etc. it's confusing reading those descriptions, How hard is to to just use their names? I also understand that the MC is depressed for being the only one who survived but why is he getting pushed around by the main cast?
I'll keep it a buck the books good whether it be original or translated it's an enjoyable read only problems I can see for myself and this is probably biased is that the chapters are to short for my liking and that you may get very confused about what's happening but other than that everything is pretty much perfect from grammar to the stories overall direction I like where it's currently headed and the mix between persona and DXD isn't horrible but actually well thought out I see potential in this fic and I do reccomend it to alot of people unfortunately it's not for me but Good Luck to the Author and I hope everyone else enjoys the book it deserves a read!
hay i just found this story and I'm really enjoying it. i was just wondering if this is your original work or a translation
The work was stolen from the real author !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Firstly, this fanfiction is not the property of this author. this fanfiction was posted on fanfiction a long time ago and lies abandoned there. And it's fine if he was just translating, but he puts other people's chapters on his own patreon and demands money for someone else's work! It's just disgusting.
What's with the narrative? "He","The boy,"The Devil","The woman" etc. it's confusing reading those descriptions, How hard is to to just use their names? I also understand that the MC is depressed for being the only one who survived but why is he getting pushed around by the main cast?
I'll keep it a buck the books good whether it be original or translated it's an enjoyable read only problems I can see for myself and this is probably biased is that the chapters are to short for my liking and that you may get very confused about what's happening but other than that everything is pretty much perfect from grammar to the stories overall direction I like where it's currently headed and the mix between persona and DXD isn't horrible but actually well thought out I see potential in this fic and I do reccomend it to alot of people unfortunately it's not for me but Good Luck to the Author and I hope everyone else enjoys the book it deserves a read!
hay i just found this story and I'm really enjoying it. i was just wondering if this is your original work or a translation
The work was stolen from the real author !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!