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Even thing is good but sometimes names go wrong quite annoying if someone skip a chapter or 2.àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaa
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I just finished catching up, and wow, your storytelling is incredibly vivid. The pacing, the way emotions are described, and the detail in every scene made it feel like I was watching it unfold rather than just reading. The characters have such distinct personalities, and the world-building is so clear that I could easily imagine it as a webtoon or graphic novel. Honestly, the visual energy in your writing makes it perfect for that kind of adaptation. I’d absolutely love to see this story brought to life through art someday!
If you don't like harem or overpowered protagonist, avoid it. It's almighty throughout system and being overpowered type. You won't find logic but it's for abrupt fantasy lovers. It was a good relax story after reading some serious ones.
Essa FanFiction é boa, gostei Só tem uma coisa que e muito chato e que pode afastar muito dos leitores, e que toda "fanfic do Naruto, tem que desperta mokuton, o que torna a história muito chata, "falo isso pois eu já li mais de 35 fanfic do Naruto, falo isso por experiência".
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Ok so I read this before when someone else posted this story. I think it was called “A new life with tsunade” it had up to 80 chapters and this story is the same and I would recommend it. Minor spoilers for the first 3 chapters but basically mc has wood release and trains to be a powerful senju. Even tho he is a kid he states that he is aiming for tsunade. Little weird but if you can get past that the story is good and the characters act like their original counterparts. Tho tsunade does act a little weird and a little off character the fight scenes are well written and I enjoyed the mc training and getting stronger
Even thing is good but sometimes names go wrong quite annoying if someone skip a chapter or 2.àaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAaaaaa
Reveal Spoiler I just finished catching up, and wow, your storytelling is incredibly vivid. The pacing, the way emotions are described, and the detail in every scene made it feel like I was watching it unfold rather than just reading. The characters have such distinct personalities, and the world-building is so clear that I could easily imagine it as a webtoon or graphic novel. Honestly, the visual energy in your writing makes it perfect for that kind of adaptation. I’d absolutely love to see this story brought to life through art someday!
If you don't like harem or overpowered protagonist, avoid it. It's almighty throughout system and being overpowered type. You won't find logic but it's for abrupt fantasy lovers. It was a good relax story after reading some serious ones.
Essa FanFiction é boa, gostei Só tem uma coisa que e muito chato e que pode afastar muito dos leitores, e que toda "fanfic do Naruto, tem que desperta mokuton, o que torna a história muito chata, "falo isso pois eu já li mais de 35 fanfic do Naruto, falo isso por experiência".
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Reveal Spoiler Ok so I read this before when someone else posted this story. I think it was called “A new life with tsunade” it had up to 80 chapters and this story is the same and I would recommend it. Minor spoilers for the first 3 chapters but basically mc has wood release and trains to be a powerful senju. Even tho he is a kid he states that he is aiming for tsunade. Little weird but if you can get past that the story is good and the characters act like their original counterparts. Tho tsunade does act a little weird and a little off character the fight scenes are well written and I enjoyed the mc training and getting stronger
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