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em qual capítulo termina o despejo de informações.........,........................................................................................................................................................................... ........ .. .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .
Things got outta hand. Adding one or two MAJOR/ semi Major characters of ur own to a FAN-FIC is ok, one of them being d mc since u can either have ur mc reincarnate in a OC(Enel,Blackbeard etc) or as a whole new character but still connected to d fic(Kaido brother, son, Whiteboard brother, or just someone from an island) But this fic here is wat u should not do. Start adding characters and things left and right to a FAN-FIC that alone automatically makes this trash, not to add that d characters name are all just cringe cuz they don’t fit the settings well. Added a whole new MAJOR kingdom Nyx Hades Randy Orton Batista etc😂😂😂 Hell No
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ela e boa eu gosto. obg por postar poderia ser melhor poderia mais quem sou eu para fazer criticas a o trabalho de alguem, para min e o segundo negocio é de graça não gosto então faz melhor se não consegue então cala a boca
Where's the story. There is no plot, while this novel is written like a description like a Wikipedia site. It take 50 long chapters for mc to leave kingdom when saying soon I will leave kingdom to join rocks pirates. It has bad grammar. While the chapters are long, they are only long because of the info dumps. They don't even help make the plot, story better. MC character is flat with barely any description of appearance, morals, emotions.
Love this kind of fanfiction. It explores numerous different side character build their impoartance to the story. As well as the mc not being overpowered
read the mtl version read to 940-ish chapter very good novel i recommend like actually it was one of my few one piece mtl i actually enjoyed nice too see someone translating
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This fanfiction is weird. It’s just a description not even a narration[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
em qual capítulo termina o despejo de informações.........,........................................................................................................................................................................... ........ .. .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . .. . . . . .. . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . .. . . . .
Things got outta hand. Adding one or two MAJOR/ semi Major characters of ur own to a FAN-FIC is ok, one of them being d mc since u can either have ur mc reincarnate in a OC(Enel,Blackbeard etc) or as a whole new character but still connected to d fic(Kaido brother, son, Whiteboard brother, or just someone from an island) But this fic here is wat u should not do. Start adding characters and things left and right to a FAN-FIC that alone automatically makes this trash, not to add that d characters name are all just cringe cuz they don’t fit the settings well. Added a whole new MAJOR kingdom Nyx Hades Randy Orton Batista etc😂😂😂 Hell No
Reveal Spoiler ela e boa eu gosto. obg por postar poderia ser melhor poderia mais quem sou eu para fazer criticas a o trabalho de alguem, para min e o segundo negocio é de graça não gosto então faz melhor se não consegue então cala a boca
Where's the story. There is no plot, while this novel is written like a description like a Wikipedia site. It take 50 long chapters for mc to leave kingdom when saying soon I will leave kingdom to join rocks pirates. It has bad grammar. While the chapters are long, they are only long because of the info dumps. They don't even help make the plot, story better. MC character is flat with barely any description of appearance, morals, emotions.
Love this kind of fanfiction. It explores numerous different side character build their impoartance to the story. As well as the mc not being overpowered
read the mtl version read to 940-ish chapter very good novel i recommend like actually it was one of my few one piece mtl i actually enjoyed nice too see someone translating
Not bad fanfic.........[img=proud] [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=proud][img=proud][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
Reveal Spoiler This fanfiction is weird. It’s just a description not even a narration[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
bro how many chapters are there in this fan fic?