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I just finished catching up, and wow, your storytelling is incredibly vivid. The pacing, the way emotions are described, and the detail in every scene made it feel like I was watching it unfold rather than just reading. The characters have such distinct personalities, and the world-building is so clear that I could easily imagine it as a webtoon or graphic novel. Honestly, the visual energy in your writing makes it perfect for that kind of adaptation. I’d absolutely love to see this story brought to life through art someday!
Hello! I just finished reading your story and wow, it was really amazing. The world you built is so cinematic, I could practically see the visuals in my mind. I’m a professional artist/illustrator, and I take commissions on comics, webtoons, manga and manhwa. I’d love the chance to bring some of those scenes to life visually. If it’s something you’d like to explore, I’d be excited to discuss it with you. No pressure at all, but I just think it could be amazing. Feel free to add me on Discord (Username : bennett_lol) or Instagram (eve_verse_) if you’d like to discuss more or take a look at my work. Regards, bennett.
The only thing different about this DC fanfiction is that he doesn't hold back. He did what everyone would have done... to kill the cancer in society. Got to give it to this fanfiction, it finally gave me the vision of what they should have done. And also a misleading book cover, barely any romance in here.
AUTHOR !AUTHOR! 😥 I don't knw if it's intentional or not but d mc character is getting more antihero like, we started of with - at best a neutral, benefit for me n mine mc, and at worst a villian mc, but hes getting more hero like. It's almost always gonna go downhill when d mc decides to "Pretend" to be a hero. It's like playing on d beach everyday and expect to not get wet. If u start "Pretending" to be a hero, u are gonna end up doing hero things, like now I stead of focusing on getting stronger, building his family power etc. He's now having to play hero vs hero against d justice League, Build a bigger hero team, etc. If making him hero/antihero was d plan then 😭 But if it ain't then I just wanna point out that he's going off script.
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Loving the story so far. Agree with the other review to not recruit anyone big on morals. Anti-heroes and villains with grey to no morals are perfect. Most of the people who read this came for a villainous main character without morals and adding that would delete at least half your audience (me included). Also want to see at least some conflict with superheroes at some point in this story (not the debate/talking stuff). Doesn't have to be kills but at least maims, the dude IS supposed to be a villain and the heir of a major crime syndicate. Kind of defeats the whole purpose of the novel if he never fights superheroes themselves.
Hey author you story is good and can you make the mc has killer frost in his harem because I didn't see any fanfiction of killer frost in a harem
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Perfect so far MESSAGE TO AUTHOR. PLS don't force the whole hero route, or hero fanboy or anything hero related. I almost lost hope when he started recruiting ppl for a hero team But it's ok since all d members morally BLACK. Pls don't add anyone who's big on morals only villians and hero haters. And It'll be nice if d mc doesn't play too nice with heroes I. e like saving a hero bout to get killed or helping them with some excuse like need them alive for some plan or plot or don't wanna be enemies with them yet etc.
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So far so good. I hope, that it will stay like that and that book's cover isn't just an ai generated clickbait.
Not really good at reviewing shit but this story so far is good if there’s more I’ll read it and I’d recommend for others too
It good just wanting to see where it goes and hope it turns out good and I like it so far [img=thinking][img=thinking][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=gift][img=gift][img=gift][img=thinking][img=thinking][img=thinking]
Giving my Own Story 5* reviews obviously lol! But if you pass through here, do give me a fair review after reading my story and not just don't like mc so BAD reviews! and thanks
Eu gosto do mc e do caminho que a história esta seguindo.............................................................................................
I just finished catching up, and wow, your storytelling is incredibly vivid. The pacing, the way emotions are described, and the detail in every scene made it feel like I was watching it unfold rather than just reading. The characters have such distinct personalities, and the world-building is so clear that I could easily imagine it as a webtoon or graphic novel. Honestly, the visual energy in your writing makes it perfect for that kind of adaptation. I’d absolutely love to see this story brought to life through art someday!
Hello! I just finished reading your story and wow, it was really amazing. The world you built is so cinematic, I could practically see the visuals in my mind. I’m a professional artist/illustrator, and I take commissions on comics, webtoons, manga and manhwa. I’d love the chance to bring some of those scenes to life visually. If it’s something you’d like to explore, I’d be excited to discuss it with you. No pressure at all, but I just think it could be amazing. Feel free to add me on Discord (Username : bennett_lol) or Instagram (eve_verse_) if you’d like to discuss more or take a look at my work. Regards, bennett.
The only thing different about this DC fanfiction is that he doesn't hold back. He did what everyone would have done... to kill the cancer in society. Got to give it to this fanfiction, it finally gave me the vision of what they should have done. And also a misleading book cover, barely any romance in here.
AUTHOR !AUTHOR! 😥 I don't knw if it's intentional or not but d mc character is getting more antihero like, we started of with - at best a neutral, benefit for me n mine mc, and at worst a villian mc, but hes getting more hero like. It's almost always gonna go downhill when d mc decides to "Pretend" to be a hero. It's like playing on d beach everyday and expect to not get wet. If u start "Pretending" to be a hero, u are gonna end up doing hero things, like now I stead of focusing on getting stronger, building his family power etc. He's now having to play hero vs hero against d justice League, Build a bigger hero team, etc. If making him hero/antihero was d plan then 😭 But if it ain't then I just wanna point out that he's going off script.
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Loving the story so far. Agree with the other review to not recruit anyone big on morals. Anti-heroes and villains with grey to no morals are perfect. Most of the people who read this came for a villainous main character without morals and adding that would delete at least half your audience (me included). Also want to see at least some conflict with superheroes at some point in this story (not the debate/talking stuff). Doesn't have to be kills but at least maims, the dude IS supposed to be a villain and the heir of a major crime syndicate. Kind of defeats the whole purpose of the novel if he never fights superheroes themselves.
Hey author you story is good and can you make the mc has killer frost in his harem because I didn't see any fanfiction of killer frost in a harem
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Perfect so far MESSAGE TO AUTHOR. PLS don't force the whole hero route, or hero fanboy or anything hero related. I almost lost hope when he started recruiting ppl for a hero team But it's ok since all d members morally BLACK. Pls don't add anyone who's big on morals only villians and hero haters. And It'll be nice if d mc doesn't play too nice with heroes I. e like saving a hero bout to get killed or helping them with some excuse like need them alive for some plan or plot or don't wanna be enemies with them yet etc.
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So far so good. I hope, that it will stay like that and that book's cover isn't just an ai generated clickbait.
Not really good at reviewing shit but this story so far is good if there’s more I’ll read it and I’d recommend for others too
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Giving my Own Story 5* reviews obviously lol! But if you pass through here, do give me a fair review after reading my story and not just don't like mc so BAD reviews! and thanks
Eu gosto do mc e do caminho que a história esta seguindo.............................................................................................