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bot reviews. the time line is off and u can clearly see this is a Chinese ff by how annoying and out of touch the characters are.
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Quite interesting, he has a very peculiar dream, but that doesn't stop him from achieving more goals along the way. The appearance of new characters and the different personality developments of those we already know happen very naturally.
I love protagonists with a unique goals, like Ares. The writing gives each character a distinct personality through the way they express themselves.
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writing quality or translation or whatever is definetely good however the MC doesnt vibe with me like literally he is retarded with an IQ of 70 and i dont see it as appealing .
The allure of this story is it's Main characters dream. I look forward to reading even more about how he achieves it. This is a good story keep it up author.
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I like this story. The hero is completely crazy, but that's what makes the story captivating. Thank you very much for your work!))).............
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bot reviews. the time line is off and u can clearly see this is a Chinese ff by how annoying and out of touch the characters are.
[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
Quite interesting, he has a very peculiar dream, but that doesn't stop him from achieving more goals along the way. The appearance of new characters and the different personality developments of those we already know happen very naturally.
I love protagonists with a unique goals, like Ares. The writing gives each character a distinct personality through the way they express themselves.
Very good no english good good goodddddddddd 140 character whats aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa. aa jsjsjanansu xd lol[img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
writing quality or translation or whatever is definetely good however the MC doesnt vibe with me like literally he is retarded with an IQ of 70 and i dont see it as appealing .
The allure of this story is it's Main characters dream. I look forward to reading even more about how he achieves it. This is a good story keep it up author.
Excellent 👌👌👌👌👌👌 I'm sure ☺️☺️☺️😁☺️😁😁😁 ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧🤧👉🤧🤧🤧🤧😭😭😭😭😭💕💕🥳🥳🍺🍺🍺🥳
I like this story. The hero is completely crazy, but that's what makes the story captivating. Thank you very much for your work!))).............
Check out my new TL stories! Multiverse: Saving Anime Heroines in the Apocalypse [img=recommend] Multiverse: Invasion of the 2D Heroines [img=recommend]