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This is my third novel, and by now I’ve learned a lot from my first two things like outlining properly, avoiding plot holes, and building a tighter story overall. It’s my second work in the sports section, but this time I’m blending martial arts with football (soccer). There’s a touch of magic and a system element, but I’ve worked to keep the story grounded and realistic. And, just like any other shameless author, I’ve already given my novel 5 stars. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me here. I’ll be happy to answer.
Wow, I just wrapped up your story and I have to say, it’s incredible. The imagery in your writing is so strong, it instantly made me picture it as a comic. I do commission-based comic art, and I’d be super excited to help bring your world to life visually if that ever interests you. I’ve already got a few ideas I think you’d love. Totally no strings attached, I just couldn’t help being inspired by your work. I’m on Discord at lunapuresoul or Instagram (lunaartsoul) if you’d like to see my art or talk possibilities!
This is my third novel, and by now I’ve learned a lot from my first two things like outlining properly, avoiding plot holes, and building a tighter story overall. It’s my second work in the sports section, but this time I’m blending martial arts with football (soccer). There’s a touch of magic and a system element, but I’ve worked to keep the story grounded and realistic. And, just like any other shameless author, I’ve already given my novel 5 stars. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me here. I’ll be happy to answer.
Wow, I just wrapped up your story and I have to say, it’s incredible. The imagery in your writing is so strong, it instantly made me picture it as a comic. I do commission-based comic art, and I’d be super excited to help bring your world to life visually if that ever interests you. I’ve already got a few ideas I think you’d love. Totally no strings attached, I just couldn’t help being inspired by your work. I’m on Discord at lunapuresoul or Instagram (lunaartsoul) if you’d like to see my art or talk possibilities!