Reviews of King of the Pitch: Reborn to Conquer by IMMORTAL_BANANA - Webnovel

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luna_chen124

Wow, I just wrapped up your story and I have to say, it’s incredible. The imagery in your writing is so strong, it instantly made me picture it as a comic. I do commission-based comic art, and I’d be super excited to help bring your world to life visually if that ever interests you. I’ve already got a few ideas I think you’d love. Totally no strings attached, I just couldn’t help being inspired by your work. I’m on Discord at lunapuresoul or Instagram (lunaartsoul) if you’d like to see my art or talk possibilities!

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IMMORTAL_BANANA

This is my third novel, and by now I’ve learned a lot from my first two things like outlining properly, avoiding plot holes, and building a tighter story overall. It’s my second work in the sports section, but this time I’m blending martial arts with football (soccer). There’s a touch of magic and a system element, but I’ve worked to keep the story grounded and realistic. And, just like any other shameless author, I’ve already given my novel 5 stars. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me here. I’ll be happy to answer.

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Daoistj6RS1S

I like the storyline, cant wait to the next chapter

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luna_chen124

Wow, I just wrapped up your story and I have to say, it’s incredible. The imagery in your writing is so strong, it instantly made me picture it as a comic. I do commission-based comic art, and I’d be super excited to help bring your world to life visually if that ever interests you. I’ve already got a few ideas I think you’d love. Totally no strings attached, I just couldn’t help being inspired by your work. I’m on Discord at lunapuresoul or Instagram (lunaartsoul) if you’d like to see my art or talk possibilities!

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IMMORTAL_BANANA

This is my third novel, and by now I’ve learned a lot from my first two things like outlining properly, avoiding plot holes, and building a tighter story overall. It’s my second work in the sports section, but this time I’m blending martial arts with football (soccer). There’s a touch of magic and a system element, but I’ve worked to keep the story grounded and realistic. And, just like any other shameless author, I’ve already given my novel 5 stars. If you have any questions, feel free to ask me here. I’ll be happy to answer.

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Daoistj6RS1S

I like the storyline, cant wait to the next chapter

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