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I read this upto 30 chaps and I'm seriously confused who's the MC. Is it Xu Tianyang the Crown Prince of Sun & Moon Empire's one and only son with Twin Martial Soul and full innate soul power OR his so called Finance Xu Nianshuang the Ice element martial soul with level 9 innate soul power. Because dude, half of the chapters are about her. Xu Nianshuang this and that, all about her. She's freakin talented bro, way more than SO CALLED MC. This is very irritating to read, where the girl is so far ahead of the supposed MC. Not your best work author. Far from it. Out of the 3 soul land novels I've read from you, THIS IS THE WORST.
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The pronoun and grammar mistakes are the thing holding this story back, its hard to immerse yourself in the story when there is easy to spot grammar mistakes all the time. Q: Does the grammar become better in the newer chapters?
I read this upto 30 chaps and I'm seriously confused who's the MC. Is it Xu Tianyang the Crown Prince of Sun & Moon Empire's one and only son with Twin Martial Soul and full innate soul power OR his so called Finance Xu Nianshuang the Ice element martial soul with level 9 innate soul power. Because dude, half of the chapters are about her. Xu Nianshuang this and that, all about her. She's freakin talented bro, way more than SO CALLED MC. This is very irritating to read, where the girl is so far ahead of the supposed MC. Not your best work author. Far from it. Out of the 3 soul land novels I've read from you, THIS IS THE WORST.
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Me gustó mucho 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 😍😍😃😍😃😍😃😃😃😍😍😃😃😍[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
The pronoun and grammar mistakes are the thing holding this story back, its hard to immerse yourself in the story when there is easy to spot grammar mistakes all the time. Q: Does the grammar become better in the newer chapters?