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now a real review. First of all, I feel that we could have gotten a better choice of a Warframe, also as we have the Liset we should have more Warframes, but until now we had just Rhino, that is not bad but i would've liked some variation, or to be honest, a better choice. i Liked the first 2 volumes, but felt a bit short and rushed, The author could've explored a lot more and there were a lot of topics that were there but never touched. We don't really know if we are in lore Warframe or Game Warframe, it feels more like an amalgam between the two, but if so, we should have a ton for different weapons and equipment in stock, like, depending on where you are in the game, you should at least have the archwing, and many, many different weapons, if this is post new war then we should have necramech, nataruk, I really mean a lot of armament, but I get a feel that we are not exactly in the game Warframe but more like another tenno, like we have the protagonist in the game but the tenno in the fanfic got out of the zariman, and is not our tenno, now that i think about it, that might be it lol. the only real problem in the fic is that 3rd volume, I really, really don't like the time skip the author did, it feels like a huge time skip that got me so lost and became kind of uninterested to continue, it just feels like i had I line of though that suddenly got cut, I mean, it feels like a completely different story all of a sudden. TLDR: Love the first 2 volumes, felt that there could be more in those 2, 3rd volume got me lost, hope there are more frames.
I love this fanfic and seriously hope it continues you've done an amazing job but I'm confused with the last few chapters but I Think I See the vision maybe
pretty good so far. i hope you continue this, it takes a little for gems like these to get taken notice [img=Smug]
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now a real review. First of all, I feel that we could have gotten a better choice of a Warframe, also as we have the Liset we should have more Warframes, but until now we had just Rhino, that is not bad but i would've liked some variation, or to be honest, a better choice. i Liked the first 2 volumes, but felt a bit short and rushed, The author could've explored a lot more and there were a lot of topics that were there but never touched. We don't really know if we are in lore Warframe or Game Warframe, it feels more like an amalgam between the two, but if so, we should have a ton for different weapons and equipment in stock, like, depending on where you are in the game, you should at least have the archwing, and many, many different weapons, if this is post new war then we should have necramech, nataruk, I really mean a lot of armament, but I get a feel that we are not exactly in the game Warframe but more like another tenno, like we have the protagonist in the game but the tenno in the fanfic got out of the zariman, and is not our tenno, now that i think about it, that might be it lol. the only real problem in the fic is that 3rd volume, I really, really don't like the time skip the author did, it feels like a huge time skip that got me so lost and became kind of uninterested to continue, it just feels like i had I line of though that suddenly got cut, I mean, it feels like a completely different story all of a sudden. TLDR: Love the first 2 volumes, felt that there could be more in those 2, 3rd volume got me lost, hope there are more frames.
I love this fanfic and seriously hope it continues you've done an amazing job but I'm confused with the last few chapters but I Think I See the vision maybe
pretty good so far. i hope you continue this, it takes a little for gems like these to get taken notice [img=Smug]
A little shameless author review to get things started! I hope you enjoy what I'm writing, and I truly appreciate any feedback you have to offer. Looking forward to hearing your thoughts!