2Reviews
- Writing Quality
- Stability of Updates
- Story Development
- Character Design
- World Background
Share your thoughts with others
Write a review
Just letting you know that it's being translated by 2 people and one of them is at chapter 140+
The MC follows Sarakuzi's ideology of absolute justice, but he doesn't do it out of hatred or cold indifference. I like a lot of things about this novel because it shows us a side of the Naruto universe that's far removed from other fanfics or even the original work itself. Whether it's the crimes that ninjas and even normal citizens can commit... if it's not clear, let me rephrase it another way. This fanfic showed me how much citizens without chakra suffer. In other fanfics, they simply care about the Akatsuki, or giving Konoha greater power, or saving the Uchiha and giving them glory, or greater power. It's different, and that's what I like. Moreover, no one is bland; everyone has their own feelings and different mentalities, which I find incredible! There's truly a wealth of emotion in this fanfic. Of course, we have to talk about flaws, and the only thing that bothers me is that the author doesn't talk much about why McMahon is so cold. I can understand that he's seen too much suffering, which has hardened him, but I'd prefer to see flashbacks to visualize his change in mentality. That's the only flaw that comes to mind! This is one of the best fanfics I've read, and I hope I've helped you understand why.
Just letting you know that it's being translated by 2 people and one of them is at chapter 140+
The MC follows Sarakuzi's ideology of absolute justice, but he doesn't do it out of hatred or cold indifference. I like a lot of things about this novel because it shows us a side of the Naruto universe that's far removed from other fanfics or even the original work itself. Whether it's the crimes that ninjas and even normal citizens can commit... if it's not clear, let me rephrase it another way. This fanfic showed me how much citizens without chakra suffer. In other fanfics, they simply care about the Akatsuki, or giving Konoha greater power, or saving the Uchiha and giving them glory, or greater power. It's different, and that's what I like. Moreover, no one is bland; everyone has their own feelings and different mentalities, which I find incredible! There's truly a wealth of emotion in this fanfic. Of course, we have to talk about flaws, and the only thing that bothers me is that the author doesn't talk much about why McMahon is so cold. I can understand that he's seen too much suffering, which has hardened him, but I'd prefer to see flashbacks to visualize his change in mentality. That's the only flaw that comes to mind! This is one of the best fanfics I've read, and I hope I've helped you understand why.