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Hey, Hope you’re doing well. I just stumbled upon your story, and I gotta say, it’s amazing. Your writing is next level, and I kept thinking how awesome it would be as a comic or webtoon. I’m an artist who does stuff like comics, manga, webtoons, character art, and book covers. I think it’d be crazy not to turn this amazing story into a comic or a webtoon, and I’d love to be commissioned to do it. No pressure at all, but I really think it would look super cool in that format and could grab a lot of attention. If you want to check out my work or you’re down to chat about it, we can discuss it further on Discord ( Username: Eve_verse_ ). Can’t wait to hear back from you. Regards, Eve.
Author gotta be baiting bro. Literally every line is incorrect grammatically. No periods, no question or exclamation mark, Author doesn't even end the sentences. wtf?
What’s with all the fourth wall breaking? Not going to say that this story is terrible ( because I didn’t read enough of it) but everything just feels so fake, for a lack of better words. This just isn’t a story for me.
I'll be back in a few months so I expect atleast 100 chapters when I return muhahaha
author I hope this novel is 1500+ or atleast 1000+ loyal harem and a good story big and meaningful harem not only physical relationship don't drop it author fantastic book so far just hidden gem underrated pls reply to my questions
Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! R-18 and harem tags so I would expect it
........................................................................................................................................................................................an encouragement, I'm not going to read it yet...but I already liked everything, world, races, tegs and much more...(translator)
I am enjoying the novel at the moment, There is a few issues with grammar here and there but that’s normal and an easy fix. The kingdom building looks promising and mc is quite likeable apart from the fact that he sometimes has to act cringe for certain reasons related to his “wives” and the fact some of them think he’s more of a possession then actual husband irked me but it’s still only 100ch in so hopefully this improves. Keep it up author ❤️
Hey, Hope you’re doing well. I just stumbled upon your story, and I gotta say, it’s amazing. Your writing is next level, and I kept thinking how awesome it would be as a comic or webtoon. I’m an artist who does stuff like comics, manga, webtoons, character art, and book covers. I think it’d be crazy not to turn this amazing story into a comic or a webtoon, and I’d love to be commissioned to do it. No pressure at all, but I really think it would look super cool in that format and could grab a lot of attention. If you want to check out my work or you’re down to chat about it, we can discuss it further on Discord ( Username: Eve_verse_ ). Can’t wait to hear back from you. Regards, Eve.
Author gotta be baiting bro. Literally every line is incorrect grammatically. No periods, no question or exclamation mark, Author doesn't even end the sentences. wtf?
What’s with all the fourth wall breaking? Not going to say that this story is terrible ( because I didn’t read enough of it) but everything just feels so fake, for a lack of better words. This just isn’t a story for me.
I'll be back in a few months so I expect atleast 100 chapters when I return muhahaha
author I hope this novel is 1500+ or atleast 1000+ loyal harem and a good story big and meaningful harem not only physical relationship don't drop it author fantastic book so far just hidden gem underrated pls reply to my questions
Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! R-18 and harem tags so I would expect it
........................................................................................................................................................................................an encouragement, I'm not going to read it yet...but I already liked everything, world, races, tegs and much more...(translator)
I am enjoying the novel at the moment, There is a few issues with grammar here and there but that’s normal and an easy fix. The kingdom building looks promising and mc is quite likeable apart from the fact that he sometimes has to act cringe for certain reasons related to his “wives” and the fact some of them think he’s more of a possession then actual husband irked me but it’s still only 100ch in so hopefully this improves. Keep it up author ❤️