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Cons: -He had sex with his system. (nasty) -He seems like a character with Don Juan syndrome mixed with pop culture. -Everyone seems to speak the same way, literally everyone, short, direct sentences laced with sarcasm and/or double meanings. At first, it's bearable, but it gets tiring, at least I did. It's as if the same actor plays all the characters. Pros: -It's a readable Spider-Man fanfic with a MC who doesn't think "With great powers... blah blah blah." *Edited 2x
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Five stars. Definitely not the same old Spider-Man stories you see on this platform. Unique MC and interesting world building. Worth reading.
not my cup of tea, this could be more tolerable if you this is an OC, but it's harder to accept SI-OG-MCs. Also the system is way too chatty. Never been a fan of talking systems.
Alright, something else new to watch. See if it's worth it, and don't disappoint me, author.
Alright, we've got 4 chapters currently. Not even out of the tutorial phase of a fic. But here's what we've got going 1. Humor is honestly top-notch. It raunchy, its going to be juvenile in place, but that's part of the charm. 2. The ever lofty fabled "Grammer" of Webnovel, as far as I can see it's decent, definitely on the better end for this platform. That can always change at this point. Plenty of stories let it fall apart after 10 or so chapters 3. It's a system (obviously, but who reads titles, right?) Before you ask, no. It's not a "sLaVe SyStEM" (dear everloving God save me from that term). System-chan seems to be here mostly for sex jokes and vibes. Maybe a future love interest, but right now, she's playing a pretty good wing-women 4. It's a brainrot funni fic. It's not going to be serious, and it's upfront about what it is, I swear if I see one "No Harem" comment, I'm going to love and tolerate everyone in this room. Go give it a shot, but the author loses 15 cool points for a word filler chapter.
Shameless Review! Hello all! Was working on this story for a while, and at this point I have over 100 drafts already written. That means you don’t have to worry about slow updates or the story suddenly dying. I'll be sharing chapters rapidly, and if you enjoy it, there’s plenty ahead. For those who really like the story and want to read ahead, I’ll also be offering access to advance chapters. This way, if you’re hooked and don’t want to wait, you can keep following Peter’s chaos without pause.
Cons: -He had sex with his system. (nasty) -He seems like a character with Don Juan syndrome mixed with pop culture. -Everyone seems to speak the same way, literally everyone, short, direct sentences laced with sarcasm and/or double meanings. At first, it's bearable, but it gets tiring, at least I did. It's as if the same actor plays all the characters. Pros: -It's a readable Spider-Man fanfic with a MC who doesn't think "With great powers... blah blah blah." *Edited 2x
Reveal Spoiler Five stars. Definitely not the same old Spider-Man stories you see on this platform. Unique MC and interesting world building. Worth reading.
not my cup of tea, this could be more tolerable if you this is an OC, but it's harder to accept SI-OG-MCs. Also the system is way too chatty. Never been a fan of talking systems.
Alright, something else new to watch. See if it's worth it, and don't disappoint me, author.
Alright, we've got 4 chapters currently. Not even out of the tutorial phase of a fic. But here's what we've got going 1. Humor is honestly top-notch. It raunchy, its going to be juvenile in place, but that's part of the charm. 2. The ever lofty fabled "Grammer" of Webnovel, as far as I can see it's decent, definitely on the better end for this platform. That can always change at this point. Plenty of stories let it fall apart after 10 or so chapters 3. It's a system (obviously, but who reads titles, right?) Before you ask, no. It's not a "sLaVe SyStEM" (dear everloving God save me from that term). System-chan seems to be here mostly for sex jokes and vibes. Maybe a future love interest, but right now, she's playing a pretty good wing-women 4. It's a brainrot funni fic. It's not going to be serious, and it's upfront about what it is, I swear if I see one "No Harem" comment, I'm going to love and tolerate everyone in this room. Go give it a shot, but the author loses 15 cool points for a word filler chapter.
Shameless Review! Hello all! Was working on this story for a while, and at this point I have over 100 drafts already written. That means you don’t have to worry about slow updates or the story suddenly dying. I'll be sharing chapters rapidly, and if you enjoy it, there’s plenty ahead. For those who really like the story and want to read ahead, I’ll also be offering access to advance chapters. This way, if you’re hooked and don’t want to wait, you can keep following Peter’s chaos without pause.