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Write a reviewExpect very slow progression and very short characters. also expect every famouse female assassin thd MC summons to instantly end up in his bed.
the fic is great it expands a lot into the world of John wick that I like a lot, but even then it has a lot of originality to it
The best i can describe this story is its fluff, no substance. This is a translation so don't expect a masterpiece writing, but its readable. The pacing is horrible, with a quick beginning and a slow arc after. It really doesnt go deep in the lore, its mostly " wow look at what this character can do in the john wick universe" and for a while thats enough but it looses its appeal quite quickly. all in all: writing: mediocre, story: bordeline trash, characters: subpar, world building: mediocre updates:*Excellent*. so even though i trash on the story, props to the translator.
The novel is great, but the chapters are extremely short, to the point where even with the almost daily frequency, it's extremely frustrating. Sometimes he starts a conversation in one chapter and finishes the same conversation two chapters later. Although the overall quality is good, having to wait 10 chapters to find out the outcome of a fight made me abandon it, and maybe when there are about 50 more chapters to read I'll come back.
Up to chapter 40-50ish it was shaping up to be a pretty good story then author went crazy and now a 72 hour siege on the MC’s base of operations has taken 30 chapters and counting to be handled and its all non stop repetitive shootouts with little to no character interactions, growth, relationships, power growth or anything really. Just way too detailed descriptions of shootouts with little actual point to the plot. It feels like author is just looking to waste my time with pointless cavalcade of words that serve no purpose other than inflating the word count. If it takes much longer this single battle will have taken a full light novel’s word count to conclude and it will have progressed the plot as much as one or two chapters in such a novel would have. Its probably worse with it actually starting out pretty good raising my hopes just to fall this low.
The overall story itself is good, but I just feel bored reading a 3 day scene for like 30 chapters I feel like this guy is dividing one chapter into like 6,7 chapters
man, overall I liked it but keep it street level man. don't listen to others like adding magical and superpowers, keep it within humanaly possible , i was seriously searching for a novel like this. complete the story please
You know, if you don’t knit pick every minute detail, this action packed fic scratches an itch that oh so good👌🏻😮💨
I loved all 3 John Wick Movies. So I love the fact that despite being a side character, his presence and impact in the story is there. I love the way the original author expanded on the world history and background of the movies. The book is actually good, would recommend. #No business shall be done on continental grounds.
Translator, what is the original name? I want to take a look at the original. Don't worry, I'm responsible for the damage to my eyes when I read it unfiltered.🤣
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I have to say that I thought it was funny to see Sussie Glass in the Blue Category, but she's a Good one even considering that she's more of a businesswoman than a Dealer. Duggan is also Excellent as a Long Ranger, along with the Touch of Mutual Respect he had with Cain in Paris making him a Living Legend. Considering the plot has gone quite clean and smooth with the crash against the high table
Not much to say, this is an excellent story. Highly recommended. Good character development Good background. Short but well-developed chapters.
feels to easy but im here to see were it goes looking forward to it......................................................................................................................................................
Very good fic must give it a try if you like john wick series.............................,.m........................................................,...............................
I'm not sure it's artificial intelligence, maybe we have a good author who transforms or uses AI in the right way, providing lots of detail and everything... (I say that because the chapters are quite short) Still, it's one of the best stories I've read this year, so I'm giving it my thumbs up!
Es merecedor y más de 5💫💫💫💫💫................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Reveal SpoilerWill update review later, but as of now some brain dead China racism to Japan stuff. I was hoping the author would have fixed this, and am rating it lower, because who knows what other China novel stereotypes will now be included.
Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! it would be suitable to have children if author desired to add them since there’s romance and harem tags I would expect it
Expect very slow progression and very short characters. also expect every famouse female assassin thd MC summons to instantly end up in his bed.
the fic is great it expands a lot into the world of John wick that I like a lot, but even then it has a lot of originality to it
The best i can describe this story is its fluff, no substance. This is a translation so don't expect a masterpiece writing, but its readable. The pacing is horrible, with a quick beginning and a slow arc after. It really doesnt go deep in the lore, its mostly " wow look at what this character can do in the john wick universe" and for a while thats enough but it looses its appeal quite quickly. all in all: writing: mediocre, story: bordeline trash, characters: subpar, world building: mediocre updates:*Excellent*. so even though i trash on the story, props to the translator.
The novel is great, but the chapters are extremely short, to the point where even with the almost daily frequency, it's extremely frustrating. Sometimes he starts a conversation in one chapter and finishes the same conversation two chapters later. Although the overall quality is good, having to wait 10 chapters to find out the outcome of a fight made me abandon it, and maybe when there are about 50 more chapters to read I'll come back.
Up to chapter 40-50ish it was shaping up to be a pretty good story then author went crazy and now a 72 hour siege on the MC’s base of operations has taken 30 chapters and counting to be handled and its all non stop repetitive shootouts with little to no character interactions, growth, relationships, power growth or anything really. Just way too detailed descriptions of shootouts with little actual point to the plot. It feels like author is just looking to waste my time with pointless cavalcade of words that serve no purpose other than inflating the word count. If it takes much longer this single battle will have taken a full light novel’s word count to conclude and it will have progressed the plot as much as one or two chapters in such a novel would have. Its probably worse with it actually starting out pretty good raising my hopes just to fall this low.
The overall story itself is good, but I just feel bored reading a 3 day scene for like 30 chapters I feel like this guy is dividing one chapter into like 6,7 chapters
man, overall I liked it but keep it street level man. don't listen to others like adding magical and superpowers, keep it within humanaly possible , i was seriously searching for a novel like this. complete the story please
You know, if you don’t knit pick every minute detail, this action packed fic scratches an itch that oh so good👌🏻😮💨
I loved all 3 John Wick Movies. So I love the fact that despite being a side character, his presence and impact in the story is there. I love the way the original author expanded on the world history and background of the movies. The book is actually good, would recommend. #No business shall be done on continental grounds.
Translator, what is the original name? I want to take a look at the original. Don't worry, I'm responsible for the damage to my eyes when I read it unfiltered.🤣
>)))))))>)))))))))[img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it][img=Loving it]
I have to say that I thought it was funny to see Sussie Glass in the Blue Category, but she's a Good one even considering that she's more of a businesswoman than a Dealer. Duggan is also Excellent as a Long Ranger, along with the Touch of Mutual Respect he had with Cain in Paris making him a Living Legend. Considering the plot has gone quite clean and smooth with the crash against the high table
Not much to say, this is an excellent story. Highly recommended. Good character development Good background. Short but well-developed chapters.
feels to easy but im here to see were it goes looking forward to it......................................................................................................................................................
Very good fic must give it a try if you like john wick series.............................,.m........................................................,...............................
I'm not sure it's artificial intelligence, maybe we have a good author who transforms or uses AI in the right way, providing lots of detail and everything... (I say that because the chapters are quite short) Still, it's one of the best stories I've read this year, so I'm giving it my thumbs up!
Es merecedor y más de 5💫💫💫💫💫................................................................................................................................................................................................
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Reveal SpoilerWill update review later, but as of now some brain dead China racism to Japan stuff. I was hoping the author would have fixed this, and am rating it lower, because who knows what other China novel stereotypes will now be included.
Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! it would be suitable to have children if author desired to add them since there’s romance and harem tags I would expect it