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So far, the story has been great. Like any other good story I have read, you can feel the build-up to something major. In my opinion, there are certain words that are not used often by most people so it might be a good idea to astric the word and add in the definition in a footnote of some sort at the end of each chapter. There are also times when multiple characters' thoughts are portrayed several times throughout a short span of time, which can cause some slight confusion. Overall, character development and story writing have been great, and I look forward to many more installments!
so, this is a great story! I'm loving the character diversity and world building
So far, the story has been great. Like any other good story I have read, you can feel the build-up to something major. In my opinion, there are certain words that are not used often by most people so it might be a good idea to astric the word and add in the definition in a footnote of some sort at the end of each chapter. There are also times when multiple characters' thoughts are portrayed several times throughout a short span of time, which can cause some slight confusion. Overall, character development and story writing have been great, and I look forward to many more installments!
so, this is a great story! I'm loving the character diversity and world building