Good start, want to know more about his early life in this new life and his previous life. But this will surely happen if it explains his cultivation and what not.
I'm now on ch111 and Im re-reading the first chapter again. Honestly I feel like the transition from old life to new life was abrupt and further more there's a time skip about the details of him being reborn. Did he go back in time or to another world? The pace was too fast. Like a movie being trimmed to fit a certain time. I'd like to see the directors cut please. lol
Hmm well as a beginning chapter goes this is one of the worst, it is poorly written there is no sense of fluidity in the story and furthermore having a completely overpowered main character means that there is no conflict and a story with no conflict isn't a story its just wish fulfillment.
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