Reviews of Immortal Mortal by Goose Five - Webnovel

oh please author, no matter what explanation you give , the fact is that YanEr and her sisters all didn't want to be near MC when he was weak , now that he revealed that he's strong , only then that she's wanting to know her past. What's the difference between them and his original fiance ? Both didn't want mc when he was weak , only when he's strong did they come bruh . The chu suiyan girl is MUCH MUCH MUCH BETTER

Fantastic. This is one of those books were I wish it was longer. You could tell the author was trying to wrap it up in the last 50 chapters or so because the pace became a lot faster. The ending chapter is pretty rubbish. Would have been better if the last half of it wasn’t written. Or else he needs to at least add another chapter to complete it.

I have no problems with translation quality, but I do have that with illogical reasoning or inconsistent in the story.

Nice book. It was a good read. That's exactly the kind of xianxia i like to read.

A good read. recommended to other readers. Good plot despite a bit slowed nearing the end. I wish there is a sequel picking up where the plot ends.

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el liro es muy bueno me gusta la trama y como se desarrolla el personaje y los secundarios, hacen verídicas las historias y la ficción que se desarrolla. es muy buen recomendado

I tried, I really did. The wonky translation left me confused most of the time. For instance, they often say 'no' when they mean 'yes' and the wrong names pop up all the time. Figuring out who's doing what to whom is just too tiring when the story is full of plot holes. The way the plot progresses is just too unbelievable. I will not spend money on this low quality stuff and I suggest others not to either.

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the story seems okay so far but it's to slow it's way to boring to even read so I dropped it at like ch 30, also I get that the Author didn't want the mc to start of OP or have an extreme advantage over other people but atleast give him something, yes he was a biologists etc but seeing how hard it was to open up even 1 spiritual root is kind of boring to read becuz until he opens them all he's quite helpless and week which isn't bad at the start but taking a gues it should be another 100 chapters before he even can defend himself and reading that many chapters about a weakling sounds extremely boring.

one of the best storys i have read ever! the low rating is probably from readers the gave up in the begining of thw story, i allso did it one and got back to continue reading after a long time, and i'm really really really glad i did it, otherwise i would have missed a great story! it is one of the rare novels not making use of s*x to sell itself.

I think some authors think contradictory titles is cool but it's stupid as immortal mean you can't die while mortal means you can't. you can not be both like how those reincarnation novel sometimes describe God who reincarnates them like 'everywhere while no where' 'quite while loud' 'voice sounds old,young,man,boy,woman,girl' you can't be both your just trying to be trippy and profound while it's just stupid you can't be everywhere while nowhere as if your omnipresent you can't be nowhere as your everywhere and if your nowhere your not anywhere so your not everywhere you can not be quite while loud as if your loud your not quiet and if your quiet your not loud and unless your hearing multiple voices at the same time it's one or the other you sound like a man you don't sound like a women you sound old you can sound young its just being weird for some reason and I don't like it like saying I like money but I don't like money that's stupid it has to be one or the other you can say both but it wouldn't make sense it has to be one or the other

This is an honest review here...😇 So the book has some top notch characters, worthy of re zero girls...👌 Only the mc is powerful compared to re zero.🏋 The story also has some good plots, character logics, pacing, this is a great read, a page turner. Not a page turner with cliff hangers, a genuine page turner.👍 However, it's over ambitious ... Basically it's like the game Mario, where the princess is never in the castle, even after saving said princesses, they are not in the castle ! 🤬 Like most good cultivation novels with problems, authors who drops their novel so hard, something like night ranger, another novel. This dropped as hard as night ranger. Same cliches like moving from a weak world to a more powerful world, rinse & repeat....... Untill... the universe gets destroyed !...... and for closure the princesses are finally in the castle! AND THE END !

Upon reading further i have realized that the MC became a bit gutsy but the story was all over the place. Its bad enough that the characters were not properly described along with the world, now they introduce an arc on top of an arc. I mean, that would be tolerable if it was the issue but no. The cultivation of the Enemy is always leaps and bounds ahead of the MC, the moment the MC gains a good cultivation a new enemy appears with a cultivation that has a very big disparity with the MC. It might look entertaining on Newb readers but for me, a cultivation enthusiast reader, this novel is nothing but trashy. I applaud the author for trying but you should first read other cultivation novels so that you know the process. Give the MC a time to grow and show its growth before introducing another problem not dumping it one after the other.

i will be honest here. hype for nothing. the ending like the normal chapter. author create a pet,but never developed it. story quite ok but the ending...haih.

Loved the story and premise was decent as well, if I had any complaints it'd be with the ending. I mean it builds everything up, draws all the storylines together and then nothing it just stops, other than that it was a great story

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Generally speaking this novel does well. I liked the different twist to the reincarnation and how the worlds are all linked, just on different spaces Didn't like the ending though. It seems like a general weakness for all cultivation novels

too repetitive and has an awful mc .........................................................................................................

i really did enjoy this stroy thro out, but i was really despointed with the ending. it seems like it was way too rushed, with out giving closure to most of the important charachters. for example he was loking for his wife for almost 1k chapters, and all we get is half a chapter with them reuniting, and mabey 2 pargraphs of the other important charchters. story is nice but too much neglect goes in the ending. wish the mc got clousure with others. dont mean i need 500 chapters from others points of view as i just skip anything that is not the mc point of view, i need the mc to get clousre. as well as the clousre with li haungii was to sudden as well as the ending. we dont even get to see what happen to the oregnal world and contenat, not even the immortal world so much left undone. but over all the adventure is top class as well as the trusures and progression. just wish there was about 50 extra chapters to get a smooth ending.

el personaje es uno de los más buenos de tipo reencarnación en otro mundo pero joder con el final de esta novela tantas cosas inconclusas pareciera como si solo al autor de dijeran que terminara la historia en 1230 capítulos y que no puede pasar de eso 😑😑😑😑

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worst ending. in last 100 or so chapters it feels like author just wants to finish this novel and get over with it. many hidden plots and scenarios are left unexplained. ending doesn't make sense.i recommend not to read this novel or you will be wasting your time and get disappointed like me.

i really really love tbe book. It had me not reading anything else for a good while. only thing i felt that it could have added a next chapter or two but all in all a fine performance.

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I really love how the story unfolded. Though it's a bit long, it never failed my expectation. I was hoping to see to whom Mo Wuji would marry. I was hoping to see him with his wife and children in his perfect world.