The story is mostly good with some little shortcomings here and there. though the mc is extremely dense in terms of relationships and well sometimes too emotional
A great story got me hooked up and couldn't stop. Started reading this after it being completed, but the quality of the concept, the character progression and all the setting were gorgeous.The only reason I couldn't give it 5 through all categories is that the ending felt very rushed, things that were built on or mentioned through the beginning or mid story became irrelevant during the concluding arc, and quality sure felt like dropping at the end.All in all, a good read, though the ending is not as satisfying as the rest.
I picked this novel up 5 to six years ago when it first was being translated, i had caught up to it and sadly got caught up on reading many other novels. I have finally returned to finish this book and the whole thing was a very interesting journey i do find the ending lackluster compared to the build up. But its true how can you end such a good book with the perfect ending, especially when in a sense the MCs journey seems far from over. Still the journey i read along to was filled with action and excitement i will miss this book. Now its time to find more like it
Great idea, great beginning but executed badly. I dont think I have read a more boring novel. Nothing exciting happening in the main story. Most of the novel is basically the MC doing dungeons which is essentially filler because they dont contribute anything to the story except for a powerup which is a purpose of a dungeon but the whole story is literally just dungeons.
The story couldve branched out much better. For example, we could get to know the union better, the ones who made the game and interacted outside of the game but there is nothing. May be the game could help him power up physically or financially in real world but its like there is no world outside of the game and barely any outside of a dungeon. Author only brushes it off by saying he took a rest and ate then came irl then came back to do another dungeon.
Also, whats with everyone wants a piece of the mc when he just started the game yet they are all getting killed yet everyone is a mindless puppet who is just greedy after the mc when most likely they are going to die. It makes no sense especially when author emphasizes everyone values their life but apparently not.
Some of the dungeons are great, they could even make for many different novels but whats the point when the story of the dungeon is pointless outside of the dungeons.
The Characters dont feel real. The ones in the dungeons feel more human than "actual" humans aka the players. Players dont value their own lives. They are too stupi-d they come arrogantly and die for absolutely no reason. Greed cant reach this point of idi-ocy.
This is a gem! It is actually good and well written. My only complaint is that last dungeon, it was boooring. That last 2 chapters are good but too bad they are too short. Anyway, what a great masterpiece!
si estas leyendo esta reseña, debo decir que aunque me gusto mucho la historia la novela tiene una calidad mala, lo que nos introduce a la novela es el hecho de curar la enfermedad de kieran, pero esto se lo pasan por el culito incluso hasta el final, no se aborda de ninguna manera el hecho de la enfermedad, almenos unos cuantos dialogos diciendo que vendio algunos articulos y empezo su tratamiento y por ello no se conectaba 2 horas al dia por su tratamiento o algo , esto me hizo sentir triste, otro punto negativo es que introduce demasiadas cosas pero no las concluye, ejemplos los tenemos de sobra:
-moneda de riqueza
-corona de la mazmorra unica
-codice que consiguio cuando volvio a la mazmorra de los caballeros
y muchos misterios adicionales, practicamente un 40% de los misterios de la novela quedaron inconclusos, otro punto negativo es la calidad de la traduccion, en una nvoela de misterio la traduccion es vital, especialmente en el genero de los personajes, personajes como starbeck que eran mujeres realmente los dañaron mucho, otro punto negativo es el hecho de que en la ciudad la mayoria son muy estupidos o malos, puedes ver que kieran se hace fuerte rapido, y si corre muchos riesgos, pero hay muchas elites que pueden pasar por lo mismo o mas, pero la mayoria de los jugadores son malisimos, entiendo que las fuerzas origen y la mazmorra de ruptura fueron lo que lo llevaron a la prominencia, pero pues es decepcionante ver cosas como las supernovas y que una de ellas tenia un solo articulo legendario del que dependia para todo , cuando vimos que era practicamente basura al final de la novela y aun decian que era una supernova superada solo por la bruja bla bla bla, otra cosa es que no se trata el tema de porque la gente se muere cuando muere, si dieran un trasfondo o algo.
me gusto la novela en general , un buen prota, que a veces saca planes muy forzados , pero en general tiene algo de sentido en lo que hace y la tiene clara en que tienen que matar apenas puedan y sin dejar hablar al enemigo ni nada, la resolucion de broker tambien fue de lo peorcito que he visto, es una de las novelas con mas potencial, si alternaran entre el mundo real y virtual , como intentos de asesinato por ser el devil flame y que algunos poderes pudieran intercambiarse entre juego y realidad (para asi justificar lo que como su cuerpo es god la enfermedad ya no es importante) seria clave, pero si se enfoca solo en el mundo y hace las cosas mal pues las partes de la ciudad fueron insufribles, asi como algunas mazmorras donde introduce demasiados personajes, cuando duraban mucho como la de limite era bueno porque hacia rica la mazmorra, pero cuando eran cortas la mayoria de personajes se desperdiciaban y la resolucion de la bruja fue muy mala en general.
it's a good novel, but of course too long. this kind of novel was good at start, bored from the middle. but overall this is good, though it's need me to read this for several years.
I’m really enjoying this novel. Basically a story of the little guy at the bottom of the foodchain who wishes to change his fate.
I like how the MC becomes stronger, but I wished that the author gave more background story on his past (particularly on his psychological development). because for me some of his decisions are hard to follow
I finished this novel a long time ago. I wanted to write something when I saw it.First of all, I can say that it is very enjoyable to read. I can say that in the middle of the novel, trying to solve the mysteries is starting to get a little boring. The final events of the novel seem a bit rushed.It certainly could have been longer and had an element of romance without affecting the novel too much. I can say that the novel takes place in the game world and the real world is never mentioned.
For anyone wondering how much the book will cost after the free 40 chapters. It will cost around $300 USD. Personally I’m not going to waste that much one one book. Author either needs to lower the price or give more free chapters. But he/she is greedy af.
The story in general is very good, no obvious grammar mistakes in all of the chapters and overall good writing quality. Each dungeon world is very unique and has great backgrounds. I do think the ending was a bit rushed though.
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The only flaw I think is switching the gender of some characters, for example the guy/girl in the final dungeon world and Starbeck. because, like, why? they were finely written characters and just because they had a few 'feminine' traits you didn't have to change their gender at all.
One of the best novels I have read so far... sad I finished it but all things have to come to an end so I hope to tell the other people who are maybe going to read this, READ IT!!!
for my personal take on it, I would say this is a great find to keep,the personality of many isn't just 2d just for show,they all have some sort of motive, with "plot power " doesn't always appear and the story is very "colorful", in my eyes this is a great simple novel that doesn't confuse people who maybe new to the genre but still deliver some of great writing
To be honest, I didn't like it.
because it's tiring.
"48 hours a day" raised my expectations
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Rafian