Unique story that i still have not found something with the same quality in terms of story progression and strategies since i read this book 5-6 years ago.
Not a generic story where mc became strongest in the clan, then city, exposed that the mc is a frog in a well then went to province stage, then kingdom, empire, continent then move to other worlds. This story is more down to earth about the characters progression to achieve their goals in a more realistic setting.
Some stories has better story telling or world building or cultivation model but in overall this captured everything a story can be developed until the writer ends it when and how he thinks it should be completed. No prolonged arcs or waste of time fillers.
It takes more than 5 years to write, maybe author is dead or something, if george r.r martin with his games of thrones will take so much time i sure that he will make sepuku. Mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm 140 characters
This is the first yes the FIRST Story of Male lead Genera That I felt so good reading. The amount of intricate plots that the male lead comes up with specifically the shrewd plots as well as his clever interactions I am left in awe. The story has a fantastic plot but mind you you do need to have patience in order to complete this. I have completed all the chapters today And I thought that such a awesome good marvelous story needs praises if not anything less. My praises are not undue, so give it a try to see how intricate and shrewd a man can be i promise you shall not regret it.I loved the story author and have voted all my power stones (>2) as to appreciate your effort. Thank you once again
Story was good. Nice to read. Took some time to finish the story as I did not pay any cash for it. Overall this book is interesting. do read it if u have time.
This novel is different from others. For novices, who haven't read other good stories, they might even regard this story among masterpieces. But for me, this is a pretentious attempt by author in creating a good story.
Everyone acts like they are smart in this novel. Note the word "act". Every word they speak, author will immediately mention how there are three underlying intents hidden in that word. People think so much over every word in this novel, that deathnote's tennis match will be put to shame.
And that's why this story is pretentious.
Ling tian (mc) father and grandfather are shown as innocent simple minded man, who have many traitors and spies in their family, but they think of those people as loyal. But mc is magically able to identify loyal people, recruit them, and then recruit army of 20000 loyals to himself. Is that not pretentious??
Furthermore, ling Tina's methods are so great in nurturing army, that his man are much stronger than anyone else.. If that was the case, why did he showed himself at the age of 15?? Shouldn't he have trained lakhs of men in secret then, instead of just 20000??
As I said, this story is pretentious with plot holes. I am disappointed.
First, this novel is mostly about "politics" and "scheming", not much on martial arts.
Or at least, that's what it is supposed to be...reality is a bit different.
In practice, the "politics" part of the novel is so badly written that it's an art in itself. There isn't a single moment I think "wow, this is such a good and interesting plan!". Instead, I usually think "wow, this is such a dumb plan. Good thing most characters aree so dumb it might actually work!"
Translation Quality 2/5: better than MTL but below average. Names sometimes some (careful reading is required so that you can autocorrect), gender pronuns are often wrong (he->she or reverse) etc.
Stability of update : as of writing this, story is completed so giving it 4/5 since I dunno.
Story development: 2/5. It's...not good, but not awful. Very slow paced though. And too many forced plot points.
Character design: 1/5. It's bad, period. Characters themselves aren't that awful I guess, maybe a 2/5 or 3/5, the problem is how often the plot require them to act out of character; Usually, a smart character need to act as stupid as possible to force a plot point etc. This gets tiring. Even worse when it happens to the protagonist.
World Background : 2/5. Kinda hard to rate. This is not bad, but for a supposedly policy/scheming/"world domination" novel, this is pretty lacking. Too often, new factors are randomly introduced as if they were always present, but author were too lazy to introduce them. More probably, author ran out of idea and needed a new thing to mess up with the plot and randomly add stuff, but this shouldn't happen in that kind of novel. Big organisation shouldn't randomly appear, especially when previously it was strongly hinted that such organisations didn't exist....
It was quite fun to read but too too rushed.
The ending is also messed up. It's like after waking up one day author thought let's end the novel.
It's kinda frustrating.
a typical of transmigration story, beginning from the weak to strong through martial arts, and of course build a harem in the another world. the development was good in the beginning, and with more chapters a little boring, but its still okay to follow.
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Although the mc is an adult in a kids body he still everything does makes no sense. At the beginning when he reincarnates he says is going to lay low and avoid drawing attention to himself,the a few chaptets later he is starts beating people in public and acting undisciplined which makes everyone focus on him.Also the story feels like a copy of Otherworldy evil monarch just the mc is five years old instead which makes no sense.
No no no too much of a twisted sense of shameless, cant use woman but anything else goes? If thats not a simp i dunno what a simp is and im not a master thot hunter
My mistake was going into this novel expecting cultivation and martial arts...this is obviously a telenovela disguised as something else ...so if you either don't have many neurons or are not afraid to lose them in the process of reading this "masterpiece " enjoy
Utterly boring and plot i totally messed up with totally foolish and inconsistent characters. it is totally not worth the read and the author has used so much chinese lemet that people from other countries would not be able to understand
Just saw this on the completed novel section and I reread it again just for nostalgia... Dang, LingTian really is bad @ss from womb.. No, from his previous live... Anyway, its a good read. Power level is not too much nonsense, it capped on houtian xiantian, and the top level is void. But mostly just houtian xiantian so it got a lot of normal melee fight light those old kungfu movie..
I like revenge stroys and this is horrible the main chater instanly forgives the people who torchered him because she told him it was four the family is it really revenge then
this was very good until the MC started collecting women and his enemies started to enter his harem and he didnβt touch any of their families because they can be sad (even though they are at war) and I wonβt even say which emperor tried taking MC's wife the guy's family was against him when he wanted to kill him I wonder where the rationale is if a man tries to take another man's wife and even tries to destroy such a man's family the victim family would stay side the aggressor ?! what nonsense is this? !!
one of the shitiest dumbest and stupidest story i have ever read. i couldn't even read the first 2 chapters. not only the interaction between the mc and the girl stupid, they say shit like ill be your most caring sister in the next life. bitch you falsely acused him of raping you and crippling him and now you say that shit? im done and anyone that actually likes this brainless story is a fucking retard.
one of the best novels. just can't stop reading it especially when it is about the main character, ling tian. imagine starting to cultivate from the womb and planning to take over the world at the age of 5.
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Ok so lets me make brief summary of the first 3 chs. first of all he is a genius of a clan and belongs to a branch clan so yada yada bulshit and more he gets framed by his sister for r*pe and crippled and exiled hmmmm typical revenge plot passable but dont reading here after that he plots revenge and on the day of wedding he plants explosives everywhere and after some drama and bullshit bam there dead...ok. Now he finds himself on the yellow springs road well surrounded by alot of other souls cursing him because of what he did since some of them were innocent bystanders he laughs it off by some hypocritical reply and amongst the souls he finds the little sister and he runs toward her to taunt her but we see what shes extremely guilty since then and having nightmares and our legendary MCs hatred filled eyes turn TENDER his eyes are filled with TENDERNESS WTF IS WRONG WITH THE AUTHOR ARE U DRUNK OR SOMETHING ok fine there dead and sure who holds grudges in death its fine right? u thought it stops here? nope he gets excited and starts yelling how he wants be her big brother in next life and take care of her she gets hapoy and starts leaving after a minute he panics and starts running after her in hope of being reincarnated with her but he ccant ove fast or something so he does what ..... STARTS SPINNING LIKE AND ELECTRIC DRILL and souls around him are getting destroyed like wtf author are u high or something
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yup the sisters gonna reincarnate too welp u good souls out there with hero syndrome or extremely cheerful mc likers might enjoy this shit . but well im not telling u to stop reading tthats or u to decide what to do . welp adios fellas hope i can find some mc who wont regret taking revenge or something like that.. sigh and here i thought i would get a good one.
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