Hello, your translation is easy to read. No problem for me. And the story is interesting. The FL has a feeling for the ML. And i think ML has a feeling for her too. But the both of them is too proud or scared to reveal their real feelings. Anyhow, i like it this far. Thank you for your hard work and the chapter 😊
You need to make sure the proper pronouns are used he, him, his and she, her, and her’s. When they’re talking together or interacting with each other. It’s an easy mistake to make and easily fixed.
I’m really loving the story and you’re doing an awesome job translating it.
hujanbiru