Uma das melhores novel que já li!
O MC é incrível, carismático e tem um desenvolvimento bacana!
Os personagens secundários são bem utilizados e continuam aparecendo ao longo da história o que faz a novel bem realista!
This is not your commin time powered mc, There is some refreshness in story. The mc is not OP but definately not weak. I love how the author balance the power of the MC example giving him knowledge about plants and alchemy material but not giving him knowledge about beaing alchemy. I also love the part that the author is overbearing but not too much I mean every face slapping moment is different. About the power developement of MC for me its smooth AF like I said the author giving the MC advantage with disadvantage. So far I read a lot of novels and Second place in my arsenal
**: if you're curios the first ranked in my arsenal is The Human Emperor
The story started of very good and was evolving very steadily. But the second half of the novel kinda went downhill. Especially the end. If you have read any novels before you probably know that novels tend to have a bad/weird end. Well, Night Rader tops it all. The twists the story had were very good, cause you could see that the author thought about how he wanted create the ending but you can't just throw away all the character development of pretty much all the characters to create a good twist in the story or even leave off things that were having huge impacts into the story just like that. Hundreds of chapters story development for naught. All novels leave off minor plot holes. But you can't just leave off a major one.
The translation was very good. So the only thing I can criticize about this novel is the story itself. And the only reason I'm being so harsh is because it had so much potential but was thrown like trash.
I had a lot of fun reading the adventures of Marvin. World is quite intereseting. The usuall repetition of main character achievments could see the editor's updates. As a reader I felt that the last 50 chapters were hurried as action pacing was equal for previous 200. I need to give author kudos for finishing novel despite being under influence of negative energy from some readers comments. [img=recommend]
Good read! Definitely kept me coming back For more and more until it was done. Looking forward to what comes next! Wasnt able to give much input on the updating stability as it was fully written at the time of my read.
Even though this was an excellent book with a good background and well progressing story, it leaves bitter after taste...
You just need to skip the (bit annoying) extrafills for each chapter to enjoy.
Hope author writes a sequel...
This is one of the best novel i have read. One thing that I like about this novel is that it doesn't follow the usual world progression like in other novels. Usually mc has is weak he has a weak villain he defeats the villain he gets stronger he then gets to know there is another main villain more powerful than the first again mc trains or gets some powers from somewhere defeats the villian again there comes a more powerful villain and it goes on. But in this mc already kinda knows the last villain there is no such linear progression. I felt the end was kinda rushed but I still liked it. And most importantly there is no romance not even a little bit. If we actually think about it end is still incomplete there might be a sequel or something i dont know yet.
Story gets better the further you read!
But the character of MC is a bit lacking. although not bad Ahe is just...don’t know...a bit shallow?
Also, there is some plotarmor. It will be explained in the end, but it is a bit snoying at the start.
Also annoying is the wordcount...the autor repeates and explains some stuff again and again...
The „gamesystem“ is also pretty doumb, but plotwise tolerable.
Overall fun to read and not too long and finished. If you like sword and magic give it a try. After 10 chapters you should know whether it is something for you or not.
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