Reviews of Legend of Swordsman by Mr. Money - Webnovel

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Translation Quality: Lot's of chapters have problems, most common are gender problems, in one chapter a person has a certain gender in another chapter is another gender. Except for those there are multiple grammar mistakes and some sentences that I'm not even sure what they were supposed to mean. Story Development: The way it starts is really weak, lots of parts seem to be copied from other books: - MC teaches someone how to train while he can't cultivate for some reason. Then that person betrays him and tries to kill him later - check - Just when that betrayal happens he can cultivate and escapes and them takes revenge later - check - MC finds a certain place in the world where all the other people consider a death area but he actually is expected there and it's trained there - check ( same for the fact that he returns there multiple times) - MC get to be a student at a certain mysterious but powerful school, like a cultivation heaven, where he meets good friends for life - check - MC meets future GF when he's much weaker than her, then later participates in a contest to choose a husband for her but even though he clearly wins , because of backdoor deals is refused - check All those points above almost seemed copy pasted from other books, at first I actually thought that maybe I already read this book and the forgot about the name. Character Design: Most of the books in this genre make many of their characters complete idiots on order to quickly generate conflicts, but in this book the number is way to exaggerated, and it's not limited to MC and enemies but many random characters that comment for each fight(and yeah, each medium to big fight in the book has to have idiot spectators that comment while not having any idea what they are talking about). This and the fact that the fights consist of just enumerating skill names makes the fight chapters extremely boring. Now when a fight starts I just skip the next 2-3 chapters and just go to the end. I recommend this for everyone. Also skip another chapter or two after the fight is done as those chapters are dedicated only for those random spectators praising the MC for how he won the battle. While doing this I have to say that the book got much shorter and I'm done with half of it in just a a few days, in another 3-4 days I should be done. I can't say much about world background as it's still in progress, nothing impressive so far but maybe there will be some nice story later.